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    June 25, 2011

     

    Does She Know 

     

    “Trey why you gotta act like that?”

    “Look Nikki…I’m not gone do this with you no more…I’m done!”

    “But I said I was sorry. I just don’t like how friendly you are.”

    “You don’t like shit! If I say hello to someone who speaks to me it’s a problem…if I’m playin around it’s a problem…if I’m hangin wit my boys it’s a problem…what da fuck!”

    “I can’t help it if I love you the way I do Trey. You always have girls on ya dick, tryna be in ya face in school, when they know we’re together.”

    “They don’t mean shit to me…you never believe me doe…why you wanna stay if you don’t truss me?”

    “I wanna trust you…it’s just hard. I feel like you’ve been pulling away from me lately. You leave me every summer and I know it’s for your music, but when you come back…it’s always a change.”

    “Look baby…I’m sorry things had to go down like this, but I thinks it’s for the best if we just chill.” Nikki starts crying.

    “No! You can’t just end it like this!”

    “Nikki please don’t do dat…please baby…this is hard enough.”

    “GET OUT TREY!” he stares at her face as the tears continue to run down it making her mascara run. “GET OUT!” pointing to the door…He leaves out of the front door as she wished.

     

    One year later

     

    “Yo shawty can I hollar at chu for a minute?” The young lady turns back around and walks over to Tremaine’s locker. She’s holding her books in her hand staring him in the face.

    “How you doin?” Tremaine is scanning over her shapely body.

    “I’m fine.” 

    “Sweetheart what’s ya name?”

    “Shanell.”

    “I never seen you here before you must be new.”

    “I am. I just transferred here for my senior year. Today is my first day.”

    “It’s also your lucky day. Look I’ma do you a favor and carry these books….taking them out of her hands…for you to ya class.

    “That won’t be necessary…looking to get a name…”

    “Tremaine but you can call me Trey.” 

    “Well Trey…taking the books back…thanks for the offer, but I can carry my books myself. I will however take you up on your offer to walk me to my class. I’m not sure where this room is…” showing him her schedule.

    “Oh you got Mrs. Auburn…you goin my way.” walks her down the hall and up the steps to the classroom. 

    “Thanks for showing me where to go. I guess you better hurry up and get to yours before the bell rings.” 

    “Baby I’m gud…my class is right across the hall…” nodds head in that direction smiling. Shanell smiles back. 

    “Well thanks again Trey.” 

    “You’re welcome baby.” Suddenly Paige walks by Trey and Shanell since they were standing by the classroom doorway. 

    Mumbles “He at it again…agitated…Move fool!” 

    “Aye Paige…what I tell you bout dat…watch ya mouth…you can’t be da man all da time.” Shanell didn’t know what to think and just stood there listening to the two of them.

    “Kiss my bootylicious black ass Trey!” Then she apologizes to Shanell.

    “Sorry you had to hear that…he plucks my nerves.” Then she rolls her eyes at him and walks in the room. Shanell then stared back at Trey.

    “I’ll see you later baby.” Then he hurriedly makes his way across the hall.

     

    Once class was over Trey was looking for Shanell but didn’t catch up to her again until he spotted her when he had lunch. He noticed her sitting with Paige. Paige was on the cheerleading squad and also the captain. Trey decided to go over and break up their little conversation they had going on.

     

    “What happened?” Shanell and Paige both looked at Trey wondering what he was talking about, but his focus was on Shanell.

    “What do you mean what happened?” she curiously asked.

    “I thought I was showing you to ya classes. You don’t need me already?” Paige folded her arms and looked at Trey like he was selling bullshit.

    “Oh…I’m sorry. I only meant that one class.”

    “Don’t pay him any mind Shanell. What do you want Trey?”

    “Not yo ass.” Shanell looks at Trey with her mouth wide open from his response. Then Trey laughs it off and walks behind Paige to hug her. “Nah I’m just playing. How you doin today baby?” Shanell still looked puzzled. Paige sees her face and explains as Trey is still hugging her from behind.

    “He’s plays around like this all the time. We have this love hate thing going on. I pays him no mind.” she stressed. Then he lets her go and puts his focus back on Shanell.

    “You need a hug too baby?” 

    “I’m good.”

    “You sho? I’ve been told I give the best hugs…you should lemme show you and then you can tell me whatchu think.” Shanell smiles.

    “I’ll take your word for it.”

    “Yeah ight. I’ll see y’all later.”

    “Trey wait!” he looks back to see what Paige wants.

    “Is it true that your performing again in the school’s talent show?”

    “How you find dat out?”

    “Is it? Just tell me because if you are I want to be there.” Then Shanell looked at Trey.

    “Perform…as in what?”

    “I guess you’ll have to come to the show and find out baby.” Then he walked off. Shanell couldn’t wait to find out so she asked Paige and she told her that Trey sings. She was surprised. She thought to herself, he has good looks and can sing…I better watch him. 

     

    *******

     

    Nikki saw Trey talking to Paige and Shanell. She was sitting in the lunchroom with her girls and decided to go and see what was going on with Trey. She caught him as he was at the vending machine.

     

    “So you’re not going to speak to me today? You got time to talk to everyone else.”

    “You know it’s not even like dat. I haven’t seen you till now…everythang cool?”

    “Everything’s great….sooo you know the new girl already?” Trey puts a handful of skittles in his mouth…chewing

    “Yeah I know her.”

    “So you tryna talk to her now?” Trey sighs.

    “How long we gone do this Nikki?”

    “Do what…I can’t wanna know who’s about to take my place.”

    “Do yaself a favor baby…leggo…I still love you doe…I’ll talk to you later.” he walks away

    “You can’t say that to me Trey and expect me to give up on us…she yells…I’m gonna get you back!”

    to be continued

    BESTSELLERANGEL

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on Jun 25, 2011 - 05:12PM

 

Does She Know 

 

“Trey why you gotta act like that?”

“Look Nikki…I’m not gone do this with you no more…I’m done!”

“But I said I was sorry. I just don’t like how friendly you are.”

“You don’t like shit! If I say hello to someone who speaks to me it’s a problem…if I’m playin around it’s a problem…if I’m hangin wit my boys it’s a problem…what da fuck!”

“I can’t help it if I love you the way I do Trey. You always have girls on ya dick, tryna be in ya face in school, when they know we’re together.”

“They don’t mean shit to me…you never believe me doe…why you wanna stay if you don’t truss me?”

“I wanna trust you…it’s just hard. I feel like you’ve been pulling away from me lately. You leave me every summer and I know it’s for your music, but when you come back…it’s always a change.”

“Look baby…I’m sorry things had to go down like this, but I thinks it’s for the best if we just chill.” Nikki starts crying.

“No! You can’t just end it like this!”

“Nikki please don’t do dat…please baby…this is hard enough.”

“GET OUT TREY!” he stares at her face as the tears continue to run down it making her mascara run. “GET OUT!” pointing to the door…He leaves out of the front door as she wished.

 

One year later

 

“Yo shawty can I hollar at chu for a minute?” The young lady turns back around and walks over to Tremaine’s locker. She’s holding her books in her hand staring him in the face.

“How you doin?” Tremaine is scanning over her shapely body.

“I’m fine.” 

“Sweetheart what’s ya name?”

“Shanell.”

“I never seen you here before you must be new.”

“I am. I just transferred here for my senior year. Today is my first day.”

“It’s also your lucky day. Look I’ma do you a favor and carry these books….taking them out of her hands…for you to ya class.

“That won’t be necessary…looking to get a name…”

“Tremaine but you can call me Trey.” 

“Well Trey…taking the books back…thanks for the offer, but I can carry my books myself. I will however take you up on your offer to walk me to my class. I’m not sure where this room is…” showing him her schedule.

“Oh you got Mrs. Auburn…you goin my way.” walks her down the hall and up the steps to the classroom. 

“Thanks for showing me where to go. I guess you better hurry up and get to yours before the bell rings.” 

“Baby I’m gud…my class is right across the hall…” nodds head in that direction smiling. Shanell smiles back. 

“Well thanks again Trey.” 

“You’re welcome baby.” Suddenly Paige walks by Trey and Shanell since they were standing by the classroom doorway. 

Mumbles “He at it again…agitated…Move fool!” 

“Aye Paige…what I tell you bout dat…watch ya mouth…you can’t be da man all da time.” Shanell didn’t know what to think and just stood there listening to the two of them.

“Kiss my bootylicious black ass Trey!” Then she apologizes to Shanell.

“Sorry you had to hear that…he plucks my nerves.” Then she rolls her eyes at him and walks in the room. Shanell then stared back at Trey.

“I’ll see you later baby.” Then he hurriedly makes his way across the hall.

 

Once class was over Trey was looking for Shanell but didn’t catch up to her again until he spotted her when he had lunch. He noticed her sitting with Paige. Paige was on the cheerleading squad and also the captain. Trey decided to go over and break up their little conversation they had going on.

 

“What happened?” Shanell and Paige both looked at Trey wondering what he was talking about, but his focus was on Shanell.

“What do you mean what happened?” she curiously asked.

“I thought I was showing you to ya classes. You don’t need me already?” Paige folded her arms and looked at Trey like he was selling bullshit.

“Oh…I’m sorry. I only meant that one class.”

“Don’t pay him any mind Shanell. What do you want Trey?”

“Not yo ass.” Shanell looks at Trey with her mouth wide open from his response. Then Trey laughs it off and walks behind Paige to hug her. “Nah I’m just playing. How you doin today baby?” Shanell still looked puzzled. Paige sees her face and explains as Trey is still hugging her from behind.

“He’s plays around like this all the time. We have this love hate thing going on. I pays him no mind.” she stressed. Then he lets her go and puts his focus back on Shanell.

“You need a hug too baby?” 

“I’m good.”

“You sho? I’ve been told I give the best hugs…you should lemme show you and then you can tell me whatchu think.” Shanell smiles.

“I’ll take your word for it.”

“Yeah ight. I’ll see y’all later.”

“Trey wait!” he looks back to see what Paige wants.

“Is it true that your performing again in the school’s talent show?”

“How you find dat out?”

“Is it? Just tell me because if you are I want to be there.” Then Shanell looked at Trey.

“Perform…as in what?”

“I guess you’ll have to come to the show and find out baby.” Then he walked off. Shanell couldn’t wait to find out so she asked Paige and she told her that Trey sings. She was surprised. She thought to herself, he has good looks and can sing…I better watch him. 

 

*******

 

Nikki saw Trey talking to Paige and Shanell. She was sitting in the lunchroom with her girls and decided to go and see what was going on with Trey. She caught him as he was at the vending machine.

 

“So you’re not going to speak to me today? You got time to talk to everyone else.”

“You know it’s not even like dat. I haven’t seen you till now…everythang cool?”

“Everything’s great….sooo you know the new girl already?” Trey puts a handful of skittles in his mouth…chewing

“Yeah I know her.”

“So you tryna talk to her now?” Trey sighs.

“How long we gone do this Nikki?”

“Do what…I can’t wanna know who’s about to take my place.”

“Do yaself a favor baby…leggo…I still love you doe…I’ll talk to you later.” he walks away

“You can’t say that to me Trey and expect me to give up on us…she yells…I’m gonna get you back!”

to be continued

BESTSELLERANGEL

check out more stories by me on celebluvgasms.com The Love Treyces Collection

Follow me on twitter @pritTbrowniiz

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vivianbryan62's picture

i remeber this one i like this one too

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@TSangel_Ty - Yay! Ty is back :)

I'm really glad to know that you guys would read this again. That's what's up! This story is one of my favorites as well. I was surprised to see it resurfaced lol

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im gonna re-read this i love this story!

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Girl I had to read this story over!!!!!

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ok im so late but thanks for posting the link to my page i really enjoyed this and cant wait for the third part

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For those of you reading "Made To Be Together" and didn't read "Does She Know" I brought it up to the front just in case you wanted to read how Trey and Shanell began there journey.

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@cresiapaige - lol on the typing...it's not too much to read. I hope if you haven't read it all yet that you will. I think you'll enjoy it and the interest level won't make it seem like it's a lot to read at all.

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Just wanted to bring this up to the front for reading. I will be removing this post. Thanks guys.

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@mexativeami85 - Thanks!

Songz101 - I will try my best not to keep you guys waiting too long. :)

@cresiapaige - WOW!!! Thanks! :) I'm glad you liked it!

Really appreciate the comments guys.

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very good job!!! i love this story...

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@Da Shy Scorpio - Yeah I don't know how soon I'll have it completed to post but there will be another one.

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i'm sooooo glad nikki finally got that ass whuppin lol. but awwww. that endin was so sweet. had me in tears. i'm glad they gunna get married. that means u gunna have 2 do another part. yay lol :)

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Don't forget to leave comments if your still reading. I'll probably leave this up till the end of the month :) Thank you!

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Thank you guys...I'm glad you liked :)

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finally caught up, girl this was crzay thank god they beat crystal& nikki ass,lol.. Girl i really enjoy this, thats wat up trey stepping up to the plate u go boo..looking forward 4 the next...

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Finially done reading it... loved it especially the end. **claps**

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For those of you reading "Does She Know" please leave a comment so I'll know you're still reading or have read. I'd hate to take this down and you're in the middle of reading it. Thanks! It will only be up for a little bit longer. Then on to the next one! :)

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@Trey's_Tenshi - Aw thank you. I'm glad your enjoying it so far. Please check out my post for "Does She Know Readers Only" once you've finished this.

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Just began reading...read up to sec-4m... greatttttt story girl! I'm really enjoying it.

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Claps this was good and glad I talked some damn sense into Shanell.

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Awww...It's over. I love the ending but I'm sad it's over. I loved checking the website everyday to see if you posted more to the story. I love this whole story. Everything. It actually seemed like something Trey would do. I hope you keep posting more stories.

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AAAWWWWWW I loved this story woooo yesssss! trey & shanell .

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*claps* amazing story i loved the end when trey left the letter then came in and finished the rest.
Fantastic job!!!!!!

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awwww good job girl! great story!

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sec-7i

That was it. I searched the envelope to see if maybe there was more still stuck in it and all of a sudden my cabin door opened and it made me jump. When I turned around Trey was right there. He shocked the shit out of me. He walked over to me and the tears just fell even more because he picked up where his letter left off.
“Because I know that I need you in my life always and I’m never lettin you go…no matter how much you try to get away from me…places hand on my face gently wiping tears away…you were made for me Shanell. We were Made To Be Together.” Trey took a small ring box out of his pocket and opened it.
“Shanell Monae Weiss will you marry me?” I couldn’t believe this was happening. I was so overjoyed and emotional I barely could get out the words, but they finally showed up.
“Yes baby yes!” He placed the ring on my finger and we gave each other the most passionate kiss that, let’s just say led to other things…my cast and him lifting my leg…a non mutha fuckin factor. He was right though, I believe we were “Made To Be Together.” It’s about time the world knew it too.

The End

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sec-7h

Shanell baby when we’re apart I rack my brain tryna make sure that I’m being the man that you deserve because I love you so much. I question myself all the time

Does she know because of her I want to be a better man…
Does she know that I gave my heart to her a long time ago and no one else can take it…
Does she know that I’m giving my all to her because anything less is unworthy…
Does she know that I always pray for her because she’s a blessing and I can’t thank God enough for sending her to me…
Does she know that she can trust me because I will always be true to her…
Does she know she gives me strength on days I’m tired and just wanna be left alone…
Does she know I do what I do because I want her to be proud of me…
Does she know there’s not a day that goes by that I’m not thinking about what’s best for her…
Does she know every decision I make, I make it carefully with her always in mind…
Does she know that when she hurts she’s not alone and all I want to do is take her pain away…
Does she know I will die trying to protect her and keep her safe from harm…
Does she know that there is nothing in this world that I wouldn’t do to make her happy…
Does she know that I want to spend this lifetime making her happy…

Baby I have all these thoughts that go through my mind all the time…because you are my life…and without you I’m nothing but a shell of a man. I need you to know that I will always love you…and I respect what we have because I respect you. You don’t ever have to wonder where you stand with me baby…because as long as there is breath in my body, I will spend my life showing you…because I don’t ever wanna wonder or question Does She Know…because it will be clear…and I’ll be confident…She Does Know…that I love her, cherish her, place no one above her because…

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sec-7g

Me and Aleen had separate cabins and when I got to mine, I plopped right in the chair and broke down and cried. I cried like a baby. It had been so long since I was able to shed any tears but at that moment it was no stopping them. I reached for a tissue and noticed an envelope with my name on it laying beside the tissue box on the small coffee table. I opened it. It read :

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sec-7f

My cousin Aleen was going to spend her vacation here with me, but my mom wanted me to come and see her so we decided to go back on a cruise. I think I would enjoy myself better this time because it’s just a regular cruise. No celebrities and no Nikki. I told Evan and Marcus that I will be going away alone, so they might want to tell Trey. I wouldn’t tell them where I was going though. I learned my lesson on that. I did apologize to them for taking their memory cards and giving them the slip that day. They didn’t like that at all, but they said they’d forgive me.

*******

Me and Aleen was on our way. I was looking forward to this. We were waiting to board.
“So you still haven’t spoke to Trey yet?”
“No.”
“Shanell…stop being like this. He really loves you. Are you blind or something? I mean how can you not see that everything that he’s done has been out of love. Now you know that the bitch lied about being pregnant and she drugged him in the first place to get him to sleep wit her. I’m sure Trey had many opportunities to sleep with Nikki before she did this and he didn’t. SO WHAT if he didn’t tell you before you found out about it. I’m sure he was. You just happen to hear it from Nikki first, but if you wouldn‘t of heard that conversation you would‘ve heard it from Trey that same day. He’s a man too. You know they’re built to protect. He was protecting your feelings first, he wasn’t trying to be secretive.”
“And how do you know this?”
“Because I…I just know dammit!”
“Ok miss counselor…don‘t bite my head off.”
“Well you‘re making me wanna whip your ass. I would love to have a man that will stick by me no matter what, because his ass has definitely done that with you and you ain‘t even his wifey yet.” Aleen was right. I have to say as soon as we started boarding the ship and I started walking to my cabin, I realized I made a big mistake. I wasn’t getting away at all coming here. Everything was reminding me of when Trey was here with me.

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sec-7e

I was so glad the investigation was over. El will be charged for Breaking and Entering, violating his retraining order and since he‘s been a repeated offender I hope they throw the book at him. It’s unbelievable but I have no remorse for shooting him. I mean I shot someone and it kinda scares me that I don’t feel bad for doing it. I guess it’s because it’s him. He’s lucky I didn’t go for his heart. Then again that would’ve been a wasted bullet seeing as though he doesn’t have one. I didn’t get any charges filed against me and neither did Trey. It was found to be purely self-defense. During this time, Trey did as I asked and gave me my space. I knew we needed to talk and I would have a lot of explaining to do once we did. I just needed to get my head together. I was missing him like crazy. It was so many times that I wanted to call him, but I didn’t. I did get to talk to Ty before she left. We didn’t get to hang out but she told me she whipped Nikki’s ass for me. I couldn’t believe it. Part of me wished I could’ve seen it but after the way Aleen beat Crystal’s ass I don’t think I need to watch any fights. Ty also let me know that Nikki was never pregnant. It was all a lie. I was so relieved and happy. I asked her how was Trey doing. She said he’s about the same as me. She told me the only reason why he hasn’t called was for one, he wanted to respect my wishes and two he was advised to let things die down between us, since it was plastered everywhere that I had shot someone. I hate the tabloids and certain blogs. They’re really painting me like I’m this crazy person. Sometimes I wish I was, because then I wouldn’t care about what I did and who it affected. I have started counseling. I’ve only had one session so far but it has been helpful. I let my counselor know that I won’t be seeing her for a little bit, because I needed to get away. She actually thought it was a good idea.

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SMH I'm glad dat hoe ain't pregnant

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