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    June 25, 2011

     

    Does She Know 

     

    “Trey why you gotta act like that?”

    “Look Nikki…I’m not gone do this with you no more…I’m done!”

    “But I said I was sorry. I just don’t like how friendly you are.”

    “You don’t like shit! If I say hello to someone who speaks to me it’s a problem…if I’m playin around it’s a problem…if I’m hangin wit my boys it’s a problem…what da fuck!”

    “I can’t help it if I love you the way I do Trey. You always have girls on ya dick, tryna be in ya face in school, when they know we’re together.”

    “They don’t mean shit to me…you never believe me doe…why you wanna stay if you don’t truss me?”

    “I wanna trust you…it’s just hard. I feel like you’ve been pulling away from me lately. You leave me every summer and I know it’s for your music, but when you come back…it’s always a change.”

    “Look baby…I’m sorry things had to go down like this, but I thinks it’s for the best if we just chill.” Nikki starts crying.

    “No! You can’t just end it like this!”

    “Nikki please don’t do dat…please baby…this is hard enough.”

    “GET OUT TREY!” he stares at her face as the tears continue to run down it making her mascara run. “GET OUT!” pointing to the door…He leaves out of the front door as she wished.

     

    One year later

     

    “Yo shawty can I hollar at chu for a minute?” The young lady turns back around and walks over to Tremaine’s locker. She’s holding her books in her hand staring him in the face.

    “How you doin?” Tremaine is scanning over her shapely body.

    “I’m fine.” 

    “Sweetheart what’s ya name?”

    “Shanell.”

    “I never seen you here before you must be new.”

    “I am. I just transferred here for my senior year. Today is my first day.”

    “It’s also your lucky day. Look I’ma do you a favor and carry these books….taking them out of her hands…for you to ya class.

    “That won’t be necessary…looking to get a name…”

    “Tremaine but you can call me Trey.” 

    “Well Trey…taking the books back…thanks for the offer, but I can carry my books myself. I will however take you up on your offer to walk me to my class. I’m not sure where this room is…” showing him her schedule.

    “Oh you got Mrs. Auburn…you goin my way.” walks her down the hall and up the steps to the classroom. 

    “Thanks for showing me where to go. I guess you better hurry up and get to yours before the bell rings.” 

    “Baby I’m gud…my class is right across the hall…” nodds head in that direction smiling. Shanell smiles back. 

    “Well thanks again Trey.” 

    “You’re welcome baby.” Suddenly Paige walks by Trey and Shanell since they were standing by the classroom doorway. 

    Mumbles “He at it again…agitated…Move fool!” 

    “Aye Paige…what I tell you bout dat…watch ya mouth…you can’t be da man all da time.” Shanell didn’t know what to think and just stood there listening to the two of them.

    “Kiss my bootylicious black ass Trey!” Then she apologizes to Shanell.

    “Sorry you had to hear that…he plucks my nerves.” Then she rolls her eyes at him and walks in the room. Shanell then stared back at Trey.

    “I’ll see you later baby.” Then he hurriedly makes his way across the hall.

     

    Once class was over Trey was looking for Shanell but didn’t catch up to her again until he spotted her when he had lunch. He noticed her sitting with Paige. Paige was on the cheerleading squad and also the captain. Trey decided to go over and break up their little conversation they had going on.

     

    “What happened?” Shanell and Paige both looked at Trey wondering what he was talking about, but his focus was on Shanell.

    “What do you mean what happened?” she curiously asked.

    “I thought I was showing you to ya classes. You don’t need me already?” Paige folded her arms and looked at Trey like he was selling bullshit.

    “Oh…I’m sorry. I only meant that one class.”

    “Don’t pay him any mind Shanell. What do you want Trey?”

    “Not yo ass.” Shanell looks at Trey with her mouth wide open from his response. Then Trey laughs it off and walks behind Paige to hug her. “Nah I’m just playing. How you doin today baby?” Shanell still looked puzzled. Paige sees her face and explains as Trey is still hugging her from behind.

    “He’s plays around like this all the time. We have this love hate thing going on. I pays him no mind.” she stressed. Then he lets her go and puts his focus back on Shanell.

    “You need a hug too baby?” 

    “I’m good.”

    “You sho? I’ve been told I give the best hugs…you should lemme show you and then you can tell me whatchu think.” Shanell smiles.

    “I’ll take your word for it.”

    “Yeah ight. I’ll see y’all later.”

    “Trey wait!” he looks back to see what Paige wants.

    “Is it true that your performing again in the school’s talent show?”

    “How you find dat out?”

    “Is it? Just tell me because if you are I want to be there.” Then Shanell looked at Trey.

    “Perform…as in what?”

    “I guess you’ll have to come to the show and find out baby.” Then he walked off. Shanell couldn’t wait to find out so she asked Paige and she told her that Trey sings. She was surprised. She thought to herself, he has good looks and can sing…I better watch him. 

     

    *******

     

    Nikki saw Trey talking to Paige and Shanell. She was sitting in the lunchroom with her girls and decided to go and see what was going on with Trey. She caught him as he was at the vending machine.

     

    “So you’re not going to speak to me today? You got time to talk to everyone else.”

    “You know it’s not even like dat. I haven’t seen you till now…everythang cool?”

    “Everything’s great….sooo you know the new girl already?” Trey puts a handful of skittles in his mouth…chewing

    “Yeah I know her.”

    “So you tryna talk to her now?” Trey sighs.

    “How long we gone do this Nikki?”

    “Do what…I can’t wanna know who’s about to take my place.”

    “Do yaself a favor baby…leggo…I still love you doe…I’ll talk to you later.” he walks away

    “You can’t say that to me Trey and expect me to give up on us…she yells…I’m gonna get you back!”

    to be continued

    BESTSELLERANGEL

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on Jun 25, 2011 - 05:12PM

 

Does She Know 

 

“Trey why you gotta act like that?”

“Look Nikki…I’m not gone do this with you no more…I’m done!”

“But I said I was sorry. I just don’t like how friendly you are.”

“You don’t like shit! If I say hello to someone who speaks to me it’s a problem…if I’m playin around it’s a problem…if I’m hangin wit my boys it’s a problem…what da fuck!”

“I can’t help it if I love you the way I do Trey. You always have girls on ya dick, tryna be in ya face in school, when they know we’re together.”

“They don’t mean shit to me…you never believe me doe…why you wanna stay if you don’t truss me?”

“I wanna trust you…it’s just hard. I feel like you’ve been pulling away from me lately. You leave me every summer and I know it’s for your music, but when you come back…it’s always a change.”

“Look baby…I’m sorry things had to go down like this, but I thinks it’s for the best if we just chill.” Nikki starts crying.

“No! You can’t just end it like this!”

“Nikki please don’t do dat…please baby…this is hard enough.”

“GET OUT TREY!” he stares at her face as the tears continue to run down it making her mascara run. “GET OUT!” pointing to the door…He leaves out of the front door as she wished.

 

One year later

 

“Yo shawty can I hollar at chu for a minute?” The young lady turns back around and walks over to Tremaine’s locker. She’s holding her books in her hand staring him in the face.

“How you doin?” Tremaine is scanning over her shapely body.

“I’m fine.” 

“Sweetheart what’s ya name?”

“Shanell.”

“I never seen you here before you must be new.”

“I am. I just transferred here for my senior year. Today is my first day.”

“It’s also your lucky day. Look I’ma do you a favor and carry these books….taking them out of her hands…for you to ya class.

“That won’t be necessary…looking to get a name…”

“Tremaine but you can call me Trey.” 

“Well Trey…taking the books back…thanks for the offer, but I can carry my books myself. I will however take you up on your offer to walk me to my class. I’m not sure where this room is…” showing him her schedule.

“Oh you got Mrs. Auburn…you goin my way.” walks her down the hall and up the steps to the classroom. 

“Thanks for showing me where to go. I guess you better hurry up and get to yours before the bell rings.” 

“Baby I’m gud…my class is right across the hall…” nodds head in that direction smiling. Shanell smiles back. 

“Well thanks again Trey.” 

“You’re welcome baby.” Suddenly Paige walks by Trey and Shanell since they were standing by the classroom doorway. 

Mumbles “He at it again…agitated…Move fool!” 

“Aye Paige…what I tell you bout dat…watch ya mouth…you can’t be da man all da time.” Shanell didn’t know what to think and just stood there listening to the two of them.

“Kiss my bootylicious black ass Trey!” Then she apologizes to Shanell.

“Sorry you had to hear that…he plucks my nerves.” Then she rolls her eyes at him and walks in the room. Shanell then stared back at Trey.

“I’ll see you later baby.” Then he hurriedly makes his way across the hall.

 

Once class was over Trey was looking for Shanell but didn’t catch up to her again until he spotted her when he had lunch. He noticed her sitting with Paige. Paige was on the cheerleading squad and also the captain. Trey decided to go over and break up their little conversation they had going on.

 

“What happened?” Shanell and Paige both looked at Trey wondering what he was talking about, but his focus was on Shanell.

“What do you mean what happened?” she curiously asked.

“I thought I was showing you to ya classes. You don’t need me already?” Paige folded her arms and looked at Trey like he was selling bullshit.

“Oh…I’m sorry. I only meant that one class.”

“Don’t pay him any mind Shanell. What do you want Trey?”

“Not yo ass.” Shanell looks at Trey with her mouth wide open from his response. Then Trey laughs it off and walks behind Paige to hug her. “Nah I’m just playing. How you doin today baby?” Shanell still looked puzzled. Paige sees her face and explains as Trey is still hugging her from behind.

“He’s plays around like this all the time. We have this love hate thing going on. I pays him no mind.” she stressed. Then he lets her go and puts his focus back on Shanell.

“You need a hug too baby?” 

“I’m good.”

“You sho? I’ve been told I give the best hugs…you should lemme show you and then you can tell me whatchu think.” Shanell smiles.

“I’ll take your word for it.”

“Yeah ight. I’ll see y’all later.”

“Trey wait!” he looks back to see what Paige wants.

“Is it true that your performing again in the school’s talent show?”

“How you find dat out?”

“Is it? Just tell me because if you are I want to be there.” Then Shanell looked at Trey.

“Perform…as in what?”

“I guess you’ll have to come to the show and find out baby.” Then he walked off. Shanell couldn’t wait to find out so she asked Paige and she told her that Trey sings. She was surprised. She thought to herself, he has good looks and can sing…I better watch him. 

 

*******

 

Nikki saw Trey talking to Paige and Shanell. She was sitting in the lunchroom with her girls and decided to go and see what was going on with Trey. She caught him as he was at the vending machine.

 

“So you’re not going to speak to me today? You got time to talk to everyone else.”

“You know it’s not even like dat. I haven’t seen you till now…everythang cool?”

“Everything’s great….sooo you know the new girl already?” Trey puts a handful of skittles in his mouth…chewing

“Yeah I know her.”

“So you tryna talk to her now?” Trey sighs.

“How long we gone do this Nikki?”

“Do what…I can’t wanna know who’s about to take my place.”

“Do yaself a favor baby…leggo…I still love you doe…I’ll talk to you later.” he walks away

“You can’t say that to me Trey and expect me to give up on us…she yells…I’m gonna get you back!”

to be continued

BESTSELLERANGEL

check out more stories by me on celebluvgasms.com The Love Treyces Collection

Follow me on twitter @pritTbrowniiz

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vivianbryan62's picture

i remeber this one i like this one too

Prittbrowniiz BestSellerAngel's picture

@TSangel_Ty - Yay! Ty is back :)

I'm really glad to know that you guys would read this again. That's what's up! This story is one of my favorites as well. I was surprised to see it resurfaced lol

Ty Ranae's picture

im gonna re-read this i love this story!

SpiritualAngel's picture

Girl I had to read this story over!!!!!

Ms_Neek19's picture

ok im so late but thanks for posting the link to my page i really enjoyed this and cant wait for the third part

mekaloves86's picture

Thank you for putting it to the front even though I just finally finished reading it today I have to say this was an Amazing story I looooved it I now know why Shanell has that scar on her face who El is how Nikki got pregant by Trey (if its his) lol and why @Stlgirl4lyfe2010 keep calling Shanell her cousin lol it was great how you did that and with Treys best friend Ty that was great these story truly passes the time when I'm at work you have a true gift keep the stories coming :)

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For those of you reading "Made To Be Together" and didn't read "Does She Know" I brought it up to the front just in case you wanted to read how Trey and Shanell began there journey.

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@cresiapaige - lol on the typing...it's not too much to read. I hope if you haven't read it all yet that you will. I think you'll enjoy it and the interest level won't make it seem like it's a lot to read at all.

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*fast

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even tho its too much to read gurl you must tipe fats

cresiapaige's picture

your stories are very good

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Just wanted to bring this up to the front for reading. I will be removing this post. Thanks guys.

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@mexativeami85 - Thanks!

Songz101 - I will try my best not to keep you guys waiting too long. :)

@cresiapaige - WOW!!! Thanks! :) I'm glad you liked it!

Really appreciate the comments guys.

mexativemami85's picture

very good job!!! i love this story...

Songz 101's picture

it,s don't keep us waiting too long for the other part

cresiapaige's picture

wow this story is WOW REALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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@Da Shy Scorpio - Yeah I don't know how soon I'll have it completed to post but there will be another one.

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i'm sooooo glad nikki finally got that ass whuppin lol. but awwww. that endin was so sweet. had me in tears. i'm glad they gunna get married. that means u gunna have 2 do another part. yay lol :)

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Don't forget to leave comments if your still reading. I'll probably leave this up till the end of the month :) Thank you!

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Thank you guys...I'm glad you liked :)

JamRoC_4eVa's picture

finally caught up, girl this was crzay thank god they beat crystal& nikki ass,lol.. Girl i really enjoy this, thats wat up trey stepping up to the plate u go boo..looking forward 4 the next...

TreysQuietAngel's picture

Finially done reading it... loved it especially the end. **claps**

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For those of you reading "Does She Know" please leave a comment so I'll know you're still reading or have read. I'd hate to take this down and you're in the middle of reading it. Thanks! It will only be up for a little bit longer. Then on to the next one! :)

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@Trey's_Tenshi - Aw thank you. I'm glad your enjoying it so far. Please check out my post for "Does She Know Readers Only" once you've finished this.

TreysQuietAngel's picture

Just began reading...read up to sec-4m... greatttttt story girl! I'm really enjoying it.

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

Claps this was good and glad I talked some damn sense into Shanell.

OhSoLuhvlee's picture

Awww...It's over. I love the ending but I'm sad it's over. I loved checking the website everyday to see if you posted more to the story. I love this whole story. Everything. It actually seemed like something Trey would do. I hope you keep posting more stories.

SheLovesTrey_X3's picture

AAAWWWWWW I loved this story woooo yesssss! trey & shanell .

deeliyuuup's picture

*claps* amazing story i loved the end when trey left the letter then came in and finished the rest.
Fantastic job!!!!!!

Cneislove's picture

awwww good job girl! great story!

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