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    Does She Know 

     

    “Trey why you gotta act like that?”

    “Look Nikki…I’m not gone do this with you no more…I’m done!”

    “But I said I was sorry. I just don’t like how friendly you are.”

    “You don’t like shit! If I say hello to someone who speaks to me it’s a problem…if I’m playin around it’s a problem…if I’m hangin wit my boys it’s a problem…what da fuck!”

    “I can’t help it if I love you the way I do Trey. You always have girls on ya dick, tryna be in ya face in school, when they know we’re together.”

    “They don’t mean shit to me…you never believe me doe…why you wanna stay if you don’t truss me?”

    “I wanna trust you…it’s just hard. I feel like you’ve been pulling away from me lately. You leave me every summer and I know it’s for your music, but when you come back…it’s always a change.”

    “Look baby…I’m sorry things had to go down like this, but I thinks it’s for the best if we just chill.” Nikki starts crying.

    “No! You can’t just end it like this!”

    “Nikki please don’t do dat…please baby…this is hard enough.”

    “GET OUT TREY!” he stares at her face as the tears continue to run down it making her mascara run. “GET OUT!” pointing to the door…He leaves out of the front door as she wished.

     

    One year later

     

    “Yo shawty can I hollar at chu for a minute?” The young lady turns back around and walks over to Tremaine’s locker. She’s holding her books in her hand staring him in the face.

    “How you doin?” Tremaine is scanning over her shapely body.

    “I’m fine.” 

    “Sweetheart what’s ya name?”

    “Shanell.”

    “I never seen you here before you must be new.”

    “I am. I just transferred here for my senior year. Today is my first day.”

    “It’s also your lucky day. Look I’ma do you a favor and carry these books….taking them out of her hands…for you to ya class.

    “That won’t be necessary…looking to get a name…”

    “Tremaine but you can call me Trey.” 

    “Well Trey…taking the books back…thanks for the offer, but I can carry my books myself. I will however take you up on your offer to walk me to my class. I’m not sure where this room is…” showing him her schedule.

    “Oh you got Mrs. Auburn…you goin my way.” walks her down the hall and up the steps to the classroom. 

    “Thanks for showing me where to go. I guess you better hurry up and get to yours before the bell rings.” 

    “Baby I’m gud…my class is right across the hall…” nodds head in that direction smiling. Shanell smiles back. 

    “Well thanks again Trey.” 

    “You’re welcome baby.” Suddenly Paige walks by Trey and Shanell since they were standing by the classroom doorway. 

    Mumbles “He at it again…agitated…Move fool!” 

    “Aye Paige…what I tell you bout dat…watch ya mouth…you can’t be da man all da time.” Shanell didn’t know what to think and just stood there listening to the two of them.

    “Kiss my bootylicious black ass Trey!” Then she apologizes to Shanell.

    “Sorry you had to hear that…he plucks my nerves.” Then she rolls her eyes at him and walks in the room. Shanell then stared back at Trey.

    “I’ll see you later baby.” Then he hurriedly makes his way across the hall.

     

    Once class was over Trey was looking for Shanell but didn’t catch up to her again until he spotted her when he had lunch. He noticed her sitting with Paige. Paige was on the cheerleading squad and also the captain. Trey decided to go over and break up their little conversation they had going on.

     

    “What happened?” Shanell and Paige both looked at Trey wondering what he was talking about, but his focus was on Shanell.

    “What do you mean what happened?” she curiously asked.

    “I thought I was showing you to ya classes. You don’t need me already?” Paige folded her arms and looked at Trey like he was selling bullshit.

    “Oh…I’m sorry. I only meant that one class.”

    “Don’t pay him any mind Shanell. What do you want Trey?”

    “Not yo ass.” Shanell looks at Trey with her mouth wide open from his response. Then Trey laughs it off and walks behind Paige to hug her. “Nah I’m just playing. How you doin today baby?” Shanell still looked puzzled. Paige sees her face and explains as Trey is still hugging her from behind.

    “He’s plays around like this all the time. We have this love hate thing going on. I pays him no mind.” she stressed. Then he lets her go and puts his focus back on Shanell.

    “You need a hug too baby?” 

    “I’m good.”

    “You sho? I’ve been told I give the best hugs…you should lemme show you and then you can tell me whatchu think.” Shanell smiles.

    “I’ll take your word for it.”

    “Yeah ight. I’ll see y’all later.”

    “Trey wait!” he looks back to see what Paige wants.

    “Is it true that your performing again in the school’s talent show?”

    “How you find dat out?”

    “Is it? Just tell me because if you are I want to be there.” Then Shanell looked at Trey.

    “Perform…as in what?”

    “I guess you’ll have to come to the show and find out baby.” Then he walked off. Shanell couldn’t wait to find out so she asked Paige and she told her that Trey sings. She was surprised. She thought to herself, he has good looks and can sing…I better watch him. 

     

    *******

     

    Nikki saw Trey talking to Paige and Shanell. She was sitting in the lunchroom with her girls and decided to go and see what was going on with Trey. She caught him as he was at the vending machine.

     

    “So you’re not going to speak to me today? You got time to talk to everyone else.”

    “You know it’s not even like dat. I haven’t seen you till now…everythang cool?”

    “Everything’s great….sooo you know the new girl already?” Trey puts a handful of skittles in his mouth…chewing

    “Yeah I know her.”

    “So you tryna talk to her now?” Trey sighs.

    “How long we gone do this Nikki?”

    “Do what…I can’t wanna know who’s about to take my place.”

    “Do yaself a favor baby…leggo…I still love you doe…I’ll talk to you later.” he walks away

    “You can’t say that to me Trey and expect me to give up on us…she yells…I’m gonna get you back!”

    to be continued

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Does She Know 

 

“Trey why you gotta act like that?”

“Look Nikki…I’m not gone do this with you no more…I’m done!”

“But I said I was sorry. I just don’t like how friendly you are.”

“You don’t like shit! If I say hello to someone who speaks to me it’s a problem…if I’m playin around it’s a problem…if I’m hangin wit my boys it’s a problem…what da fuck!”

“I can’t help it if I love you the way I do Trey. You always have girls on ya dick, tryna be in ya face in school, when they know we’re together.”

“They don’t mean shit to me…you never believe me doe…why you wanna stay if you don’t truss me?”

“I wanna trust you…it’s just hard. I feel like you’ve been pulling away from me lately. You leave me every summer and I know it’s for your music, but when you come back…it’s always a change.”

“Look baby…I’m sorry things had to go down like this, but I thinks it’s for the best if we just chill.” Nikki starts crying.

“No! You can’t just end it like this!”

“Nikki please don’t do dat…please baby…this is hard enough.”

“GET OUT TREY!” he stares at her face as the tears continue to run down it making her mascara run. “GET OUT!” pointing to the door…He leaves out of the front door as she wished.

 

One year later

 

“Yo shawty can I hollar at chu for a minute?” The young lady turns back around and walks over to Tremaine’s locker. She’s holding her books in her hand staring him in the face.

“How you doin?” Tremaine is scanning over her shapely body.

“I’m fine.” 

“Sweetheart what’s ya name?”

“Shanell.”

“I never seen you here before you must be new.”

“I am. I just transferred here for my senior year. Today is my first day.”

“It’s also your lucky day. Look I’ma do you a favor and carry these books….taking them out of her hands…for you to ya class.

“That won’t be necessary…looking to get a name…”

“Tremaine but you can call me Trey.” 

“Well Trey…taking the books back…thanks for the offer, but I can carry my books myself. I will however take you up on your offer to walk me to my class. I’m not sure where this room is…” showing him her schedule.

“Oh you got Mrs. Auburn…you goin my way.” walks her down the hall and up the steps to the classroom. 

“Thanks for showing me where to go. I guess you better hurry up and get to yours before the bell rings.” 

“Baby I’m gud…my class is right across the hall…” nodds head in that direction smiling. Shanell smiles back. 

“Well thanks again Trey.” 

“You’re welcome baby.” Suddenly Paige walks by Trey and Shanell since they were standing by the classroom doorway. 

Mumbles “He at it again…agitated…Move fool!” 

“Aye Paige…what I tell you bout dat…watch ya mouth…you can’t be da man all da time.” Shanell didn’t know what to think and just stood there listening to the two of them.

“Kiss my bootylicious black ass Trey!” Then she apologizes to Shanell.

“Sorry you had to hear that…he plucks my nerves.” Then she rolls her eyes at him and walks in the room. Shanell then stared back at Trey.

“I’ll see you later baby.” Then he hurriedly makes his way across the hall.

 

Once class was over Trey was looking for Shanell but didn’t catch up to her again until he spotted her when he had lunch. He noticed her sitting with Paige. Paige was on the cheerleading squad and also the captain. Trey decided to go over and break up their little conversation they had going on.

 

“What happened?” Shanell and Paige both looked at Trey wondering what he was talking about, but his focus was on Shanell.

“What do you mean what happened?” she curiously asked.

“I thought I was showing you to ya classes. You don’t need me already?” Paige folded her arms and looked at Trey like he was selling bullshit.

“Oh…I’m sorry. I only meant that one class.”

“Don’t pay him any mind Shanell. What do you want Trey?”

“Not yo ass.” Shanell looks at Trey with her mouth wide open from his response. Then Trey laughs it off and walks behind Paige to hug her. “Nah I’m just playing. How you doin today baby?” Shanell still looked puzzled. Paige sees her face and explains as Trey is still hugging her from behind.

“He’s plays around like this all the time. We have this love hate thing going on. I pays him no mind.” she stressed. Then he lets her go and puts his focus back on Shanell.

“You need a hug too baby?” 

“I’m good.”

“You sho? I’ve been told I give the best hugs…you should lemme show you and then you can tell me whatchu think.” Shanell smiles.

“I’ll take your word for it.”

“Yeah ight. I’ll see y’all later.”

“Trey wait!” he looks back to see what Paige wants.

“Is it true that your performing again in the school’s talent show?”

“How you find dat out?”

“Is it? Just tell me because if you are I want to be there.” Then Shanell looked at Trey.

“Perform…as in what?”

“I guess you’ll have to come to the show and find out baby.” Then he walked off. Shanell couldn’t wait to find out so she asked Paige and she told her that Trey sings. She was surprised. She thought to herself, he has good looks and can sing…I better watch him. 

 

*******

 

Nikki saw Trey talking to Paige and Shanell. She was sitting in the lunchroom with her girls and decided to go and see what was going on with Trey. She caught him as he was at the vending machine.

 

“So you’re not going to speak to me today? You got time to talk to everyone else.”

“You know it’s not even like dat. I haven’t seen you till now…everythang cool?”

“Everything’s great….sooo you know the new girl already?” Trey puts a handful of skittles in his mouth…chewing

“Yeah I know her.”

“So you tryna talk to her now?” Trey sighs.

“How long we gone do this Nikki?”

“Do what…I can’t wanna know who’s about to take my place.”

“Do yaself a favor baby…leggo…I still love you doe…I’ll talk to you later.” he walks away

“You can’t say that to me Trey and expect me to give up on us…she yells…I’m gonna get you back!”

to be continued

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That was it. I searched the envelope to see if maybe there was more still stuck in it and all of a sudden my cabin door opened and it made me jump. When I turned around Trey was right there. He shocked the shit out of me. He walked over to me and the tears just fell even more because he picked up where his letter left off.
“Because I know that I need you in my life always and I’m never lettin you go…no matter how much you try to get away from me…places hand on my face gently wiping tears away…you were made for me Shanell. We were Made To Be Together.” Trey took a small ring box out of his pocket and opened it.
“Shanell Monae Weiss will you marry me?” I couldn’t believe this was happening. I was so overjoyed and emotional I barely could get out the words, but they finally showed up.
“Yes baby yes!” He placed the ring on my finger and we gave each other the most passionate kiss that, let’s just say led to other things…my cast and him lifting my leg…a non mutha fuckin factor. He was right though, I believe we were “Made To Be Together.” It’s about time the world knew it too.

The End

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Shanell baby when we’re apart I rack my brain tryna make sure that I’m being the man that you deserve because I love you so much. I question myself all the time

Does she know because of her I want to be a better man…
Does she know that I gave my heart to her a long time ago and no one else can take it…
Does she know that I’m giving my all to her because anything less is unworthy…
Does she know that I always pray for her because she’s a blessing and I can’t thank God enough for sending her to me…
Does she know that she can trust me because I will always be true to her…
Does she know she gives me strength on days I’m tired and just wanna be left alone…
Does she know I do what I do because I want her to be proud of me…
Does she know there’s not a day that goes by that I’m not thinking about what’s best for her…
Does she know every decision I make, I make it carefully with her always in mind…
Does she know that when she hurts she’s not alone and all I want to do is take her pain away…
Does she know I will die trying to protect her and keep her safe from harm…
Does she know that there is nothing in this world that I wouldn’t do to make her happy…
Does she know that I want to spend this lifetime making her happy…

Baby I have all these thoughts that go through my mind all the time…because you are my life…and without you I’m nothing but a shell of a man. I need you to know that I will always love you…and I respect what we have because I respect you. You don’t ever have to wonder where you stand with me baby…because as long as there is breath in my body, I will spend my life showing you…because I don’t ever wanna wonder or question Does She Know…because it will be clear…and I’ll be confident…She Does Know…that I love her, cherish her, place no one above her because…

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Me and Aleen had separate cabins and when I got to mine, I plopped right in the chair and broke down and cried. I cried like a baby. It had been so long since I was able to shed any tears but at that moment it was no stopping them. I reached for a tissue and noticed an envelope with my name on it laying beside the tissue box on the small coffee table. I opened it. It read :

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My cousin Aleen was going to spend her vacation here with me, but my mom wanted me to come and see her so we decided to go back on a cruise. I think I would enjoy myself better this time because it’s just a regular cruise. No celebrities and no Nikki. I told Evan and Marcus that I will be going away alone, so they might want to tell Trey. I wouldn’t tell them where I was going though. I learned my lesson on that. I did apologize to them for taking their memory cards and giving them the slip that day. They didn’t like that at all, but they said they’d forgive me.

*******

Me and Aleen was on our way. I was looking forward to this. We were waiting to board.
“So you still haven’t spoke to Trey yet?”
“No.”
“Shanell…stop being like this. He really loves you. Are you blind or something? I mean how can you not see that everything that he’s done has been out of love. Now you know that the bitch lied about being pregnant and she drugged him in the first place to get him to sleep wit her. I’m sure Trey had many opportunities to sleep with Nikki before she did this and he didn’t. SO WHAT if he didn’t tell you before you found out about it. I’m sure he was. You just happen to hear it from Nikki first, but if you wouldn‘t of heard that conversation you would‘ve heard it from Trey that same day. He’s a man too. You know they’re built to protect. He was protecting your feelings first, he wasn’t trying to be secretive.”
“And how do you know this?”
“Because I…I just know dammit!”
“Ok miss counselor…don‘t bite my head off.”
“Well you‘re making me wanna whip your ass. I would love to have a man that will stick by me no matter what, because his ass has definitely done that with you and you ain‘t even his wifey yet.” Aleen was right. I have to say as soon as we started boarding the ship and I started walking to my cabin, I realized I made a big mistake. I wasn’t getting away at all coming here. Everything was reminding me of when Trey was here with me.

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I was so glad the investigation was over. El will be charged for Breaking and Entering, violating his retraining order and since he‘s been a repeated offender I hope they throw the book at him. It’s unbelievable but I have no remorse for shooting him. I mean I shot someone and it kinda scares me that I don’t feel bad for doing it. I guess it’s because it’s him. He’s lucky I didn’t go for his heart. Then again that would’ve been a wasted bullet seeing as though he doesn’t have one. I didn’t get any charges filed against me and neither did Trey. It was found to be purely self-defense. During this time, Trey did as I asked and gave me my space. I knew we needed to talk and I would have a lot of explaining to do once we did. I just needed to get my head together. I was missing him like crazy. It was so many times that I wanted to call him, but I didn’t. I did get to talk to Ty before she left. We didn’t get to hang out but she told me she whipped Nikki’s ass for me. I couldn’t believe it. Part of me wished I could’ve seen it but after the way Aleen beat Crystal’s ass I don’t think I need to watch any fights. Ty also let me know that Nikki was never pregnant. It was all a lie. I was so relieved and happy. I asked her how was Trey doing. She said he’s about the same as me. She told me the only reason why he hasn’t called was for one, he wanted to respect my wishes and two he was advised to let things die down between us, since it was plastered everywhere that I had shot someone. I hate the tabloids and certain blogs. They’re really painting me like I’m this crazy person. Sometimes I wish I was, because then I wouldn’t care about what I did and who it affected. I have started counseling. I’ve only had one session so far but it has been helpful. I let my counselor know that I won’t be seeing her for a little bit, because I needed to get away. She actually thought it was a good idea.

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SMH I'm glad dat hoe ain't pregnant

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SMH I'm glad dat hoe ain't pregnant

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SMH I'm glad dat hoe ain't pregnant

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hehehehehehe

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i knew nikki wasn't pregnant

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okay can I kick my cousin ass now to make her have some damn sense

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I was standing there the whole time just waiting and listening.
“You know what Trey…it’s late and I’m tired. I gotta go.”
“Are you comin home tonight?”
“No. I really need some time alone.” I hobbled on my crutches and went to my car. He walked with me.
“You sure you gone be ok?”
“I’ll be fine Trey.”
“Shanell we need to talk baby.” I opened the car door and sat in my car. Trey hands me my crutches.
“We will, but not right now ok Trey. Can you allow me some space for now…please?”
“Why da fuck you keep doin this?” I shut the car door, started it and rolled down the window.
“I’m not gonna argue with you Trey.”
“I’m tryna talk to you…I don’t wanna argue. All diss shit needs to be discussed.”
“Well I’m not ready to talk right now because I’m too afraid of what I might say.”
“Ight…it’s cool…have it your way….I’ll talk to you later.” Then he left.

*******

Trey called Nikki to see if she would answer her phone. It was pretty late but he was curious to know if she was ok since she was fighting and suppose to be pregnant. He didn’t get an answer. He told Buggzi he wanted to go over to the hospital. Buggzi thought it was to see El. Trey explained to him that he needed to see if Nikki was there and why. They road over. Trey walked up to the information desk to see if Nikki had been brought in, they said she was. They gave him the room number and told him which way to go. Once he got up to the nurses station he asked how to be directed to her room. He was asked what relation he was to the patient. He told them she was a relative.
“Oh ok. I’m her nurse. I just came out from checking on her.”
“How is she?”
“She was banged up pretty bad but she’ll recover.”
“How bout the baby?”
“Baby? What baby?”
“She was carryin a baby right?” grabs chart
“No. It doesn’t say anything about a pregnancy in here.”
“Really?”
“scans chart No nothing.”
“Ok thanks.” Trey left.

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“Ya bitch ass don’t deserve to live. Talk shit now mofuker I dare you. I told you, you wasn’t shit without that gun in ya hand didn’t I?” Trey was pressing it further in his mouth. He was gagging. “You spit up on me I’ll really shoot ya ass…you ever come anywhere near my girl you’ll be a dead man walkin…understand bitch ass.” Trey removed the gun so he could respond. He started coughing first but he finally coughed up a yes. Trey pistol whipped him which knocked him out and once he stood up he stomped him in his gunshot wound. The cops came in with their guns aimed and telling everyone to freeze. They told Trey to put the gun down slowly. He laid it right on the island. They started to frisk him. I explained to them that he took the gun away from me and that I had shot El. They continured to ask questions to get to the bottom of everything. Finally they wanted all of us to come down to the police station. An ambulance took El to the hospital and we all went to the station like we were asked. Everyone separately went in for questioning and gave formal statements. The police said if they had any further questions they’d be in touch. Trey was waiting for me as I came out of the room. I looked at him in silence.
“Are you sure you gonna be ok?”
“Yeah.” Then Trey’s cell phone rang.
“What’s up?” It was Ty.
“Where the hell are you guys?”
“It’s a long story…where you at?”
“I’m back at my hotel room. Did you ever find Shanell?”
“Yeah. I’m wit her right now.”
“Oh good. I whipped ya ex ass tonight…gave her a ass whippen to remember. Had dat bitch laid out on the grass.”
“You bullshittin me right?”
“No! I told you I was gonna get her.”
“Damn!” Trey was thinking about the baby but Ty didn’t know she was pregnant.
“What’s wrong now? I thought you’d be thanking me.”
“Nah it’s not dat…was she able to get up and go in her house?”
“Fuck no! I told you I beat her ass. She probably in the hospital.”
“Ight…look lemme call you back.”

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“Don’t move another inch and I said don’t call me that.”
“Sweetness…come on now…you better than this…don‘t do this...”
“I said don’t call me sweetness! Do you know how the sight of you disgust me…still aiming gun…I hate you! And don‘t pretend to think that you know me because you don‘t.”
“You have every right to feel that way…”
“Don’t patronize me! How does it feel to have a gun pointed at you El? It doesn’t feel too good now does it?”
“You right. I deserve this but just gimme…he takes another step closer “POW!!”
“AHHH SHIIITTTT!!!!” I shot him in the leg. He was on the floor holding it. I picked up my cell phone and called the police. I told them that I had a breakin and someone was shot.
I was told the police along with an ambulance would be here any minute. He was just moaning and moving around in pain.
“Thanks for putting your fingerprints on the screw driver that you used to break in my house. Oh yes officer part of it is broken off in the lock on the door. He also has a restraining order against him and shouldn’t even be near me.”
“AHHH…Why you…why you do this…” The next thing I know Trey and Buggzi comes barging through the door that wasn’t fully shut. He see’s El on the floor bleeding and his gun in my hand. His eyes were glued to me.
“Shanell baby gimme the gun?”
“Don’t take this gun away from me Trey. I don‘t want you to touch it.”
“Why? My fingeprints are already on it. Gimme the gun baby.” Trey takes the gun out of my hand.
touches my chin “You ok? He didn’t touch you anywhere did he?”
“No I’m fine.” Then he walks over by El and bends down with the gun pointing it at him.
Trey nigga whatchu doin? He already shot…come on man.” Trey ignored Buggzi’s words. El just laid there in pain afraid.
“Mofucker I should shoot ya ass right now.” He takes the barrel of the gun and puts it on his mouth.
“Open it up!” El was refusing until Trey cocked it.
“Trey man whatchu doin? Gimme the gun man…this nigga ain’t worth it.”
“Baby please give Buggzi the gun.”

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Shanell

I really had no idea if El was gonna show up here or not but I was prepared for him. It was almost 10:00 pm. I was about to go get some sleep when I get a knock on the door. I look out the peek hole and it was him. I played it cool and talked to him through the door at first to make it look unexpected.
“El what are you doing here?”
“Shanell please just let me talk to you…please.”
“I just want you to leave me alone.”
“I promise you will never have to see me again. It’s just a few things that I really need to say to you. I promise afterwards to leave you alone.” I opened up the door. He noticed I had a screw driver on the floor when he came in and picked it up. I told him he could put it anywhere. Then I told him to stand back over by the door. He was just looking at me.
“What happened to you?”
“The clock is ticking El.”
“God you’re so beautiful. You know that?”
“What do you want to talk about El?”
“Sweetness I’m sorry. I know you don’t want to hear it but I am. Shanell I’ve been doing a lot of soul searching man and thinking about all the things that I put you through. A lot of it was due to drugs and just the way I was living. I did a lot of things that I regret. Sweetness when I did those things to you it wasn’t me. It was the drugs but I swear to you that I never meant to hurt you…I love you mo…“ I cut him off.
“Don’t…I can’t hear you say that to me. How dare you tell me you love me…and don’t call me sweetness…just don’t! You’ve made my life hell. Do you see what you’ve done to me? I have to live with this every single day of my life. I have had nightmares about that day...I still do. So for you to come here and tell me that you’re sorry, you will never be as sorry as I am that I’ve ever met you. Sorry doesn‘t take this scar off my face. Sorry doesn‘t change the hell that I‘ve been through along with Trey. What is sorry is ya ass standing in front of me.”
“Sweetness don’t say that.” He starts moving toward me. I pull out a gun.

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Dat Baby Long Gon Now, Ya Stupid Bitch!!!

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Nikki stupid for coming off that step.

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man this is getting good i'm waiting 4 the next part

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next part

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She watched Trey as he grabbed her arm trying to desperately get any information from Nikki if she had it. Ty decided to get out of the car. She walks over to Trey as he was on his way back to his car. Nikki just stayed on her step.
“No luck?”
“No. She said she hasn’t seen her.”
“Didn’t you say she had a house that’s up for rent? You think she would go there?” Trey kissed Ty, he was so happy to have another spot to try that he didn’t think of. He jumped in the truck and assumed Ty was right behind him. She wasn’t. She went to handle some business with Nikki. Nikki was wondering why she was still there.
“Long time no see Nikki.”
“What do you want Ty?”
“If you come down off your step I’ll tell you.” Nikki walks off her porch, fold her arms and stands in front of Ty. Big mistake. Ty cracked her right in her face then upper cut her on the chin. Nikki was stumbling because she didn’t expect to get hit. Ty made her teeth bite her tongue and her mouth instantly started bleeding. She kneed her in the stomach real good knocking the wind out of her. It made her bawl over and fall on the ground and then she gave her a left and a right hand punch in her face again breaking her nose. Once she saw that she figured she punished her enough.
“Fuck wit my best friend again ya stupid bitch!” She gave her one last kick and then Ty jumped in the car and left. Nikki was just laying on the grass squirming around holding her stomach finally able to scream from the pain. It was dark outside so hardly no one was out at the time. As Ty was pulling off she looked in her rear view mirror and did see someone in a panic trying to help her.
sighs “I still should’ve choked dat bitch!”

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“Man she was in her car and we were following her since she wanted to drive…
“Hold up, hold up! You let her drive?”
“I didn’t have a choice.”
“Ight so how she get away from you?”
“We stopped at a hardware store like she wanted and when it was time to go she turned another way on the street and dipped on us. I’m calling you from a pay phone because she took our memory cards out our phones…”
“What the fuck she do that for?”
“Ya guess is as good as mine. We bout to try to find her now. I just wanted to let you know in case you caught up to her before we did.”
“Damn! And you said you callin from a pay phone?”
“Yeah man me and Evan can’t use our phones.”
“Ight try to stay in touch and keep me posted.”
“Will do.”
“Ight…peace.”

Trey hung up with Marcus and walked over to Buggzi. He was talking to Ty since they all were suppose to have dinner together, little did Trey know Buggzi had some news for him too.

“Trey man listen…”
“Hold up…we gotta find Shanell.”
“I know. I just got word that El is in town.”
“Dat mofucker here?”
“I’m afraid so.”
“Ight…Shanell just got away from Evan and Marcus…look I don’t know what’s goin on but we need to find her.” Trey immediately left to go to the car. Ty followed behind him and Bugzzi in her rental. Trey went to the condo first to get his gun. Buggzi had already new what he was looking for. Ty was clueless.
“Fuck! It’s gone!”
“Nigga how’s it gone? You sure that’s where you hid it?”
“Yeah!”
“Well you and Shanell the only two that be up in here.” They both look at each other. Ty still didn’t know what was going on.
“Trey what are you looking for?”
“We definitely gotta find her.”
“Trey do you think El has Shanell?”
“Ty I on’t know what to think. I just know I need to find her and if he’s anywhere near her dat mofucker must don’t value his life too much.” They head out the condo. Trey decided to go by Nikki’s first to see if she might’ve saw her. Ty didn’t know who’s house they were at until she saw Nikki come out of it.

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I asked each one of them at different times if I could see their phones…you know very casually so it didn’t spark suspicion. I struck up conversation on phones first like I was inquiring about getting a new one and wanted to know what they thought about the phones they had. I managed to take there memory cards out of them when I distracted there attention else where. Once that was done I told them they could go to the car since I was ready to pay for the items that I had gotten. I was parked on the side of the store on a small street and they were parked in front of it maybe three cars away from the entrance. I got in the car and I’m sure they were expecting me to make a right hand turn so they could follow me but I didn’t. I turned left and dipped. The street they were on was a one way so they couldn’t catch me. I needed them out of the way.

I decided to go to my house that I was having rented out. It was back up for rent now so I decided to stay there. It was furniture in it but only for staging. It felt strange being in this house. I don’t even really know if I’ll make it through the night here. I knew if El decided to come and see me this is the address that he has and I wanted to be here and prepared. I had so much bottled up in me that I had to get off my chest for his ears only. I made sure to park my car away from the house just in case anyone thought to come here looking for me. I knew they would be but I needed to be alone for as long as I could. Even if El was a no show. I needed time to get my mind right and fully take in this whole Nikki situation. I put the things that I brought from the hardware store in place. Now I just needed the mouse to come and take the bait.

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Trey

Trey had just finished up a radio interview when his cell phone rang.
“Yo who diss?”
“Trey it’s Marcus.”
“Oh my bad I didn’t recognize the number…what‘s up?”
“We seem to have lost Shanell.”
“What?” Trey was confused. “You lost her?”

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It’s Saturday morning and I had a lot to do today. I had Evan and Marcus drop me off at a hotel last night. Trey called and wanted to know where I was staying. I wouldn’t tell him and when I didn’t he called Marcus. I see what I have to do now when I need to have some privacy and right now privacy is a top priority. Evan and Marcus told me to call them if I decide to go anywhere. I will definitely do that this time. Trey was really upset with them about leaving me before, but he promised me he wouldn’t say anything to them and he never did. I can’t believe the things we’re going through right now. The thought of him having sex with Nikki and her possibly being pregnant has me mad as hell right now. I know it wasn’t his fault if she drugged him but that still doesn’t change the fact that he hid this from me. It also doesn’t change the fact that a baby could be in his life and by her. I am crushed by this, but surprisingly I haven’t cried. I don’t know is was wrong with me but I can’t cry. I felt that maybe it would help if I did, but I couldn’t. I was too angry, hurt, disgusted, you name it I felt it. Every bitter emotion you could think of I was feeling. I was going to draw on it and just let it give me strength to do what I needed to do.

I called Evan and told him that I wanted to drive myself around today. He thought I was crazy. He really didn’t feel comfortable with the idea but I forced him to take me to the condo so I could get my car. I told him I really needed to feel like I had control of something and they would just have to follow me around. Once I had my car I pulled up to a hardware store to pick up a few things. I made sure I parked in a spot where Evan and Marcus couldn’t park behind me. I had to give them the slip but first I needed to get a hold of there phones. I asked them both to come in the store with me. They were wondering what I needed to get in a hardware store anyway. I just pretended that I had some questions about certain tools.

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Finally i can comment i read the whole thing very very very good story. Shanell and Trey went through A LOT. crystal needed her ass beaten and nikki needs to get her life chocked out of her. i cant wait to read more. @stlgirl4lyfe2010 u gave crystal ass a good beating lmao.

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damn it make me talk some since in my cousins head

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damn damn damn *in my martin voice lol. i'm sooooo glad crystal got that ass beat and i can't wait 4 nikki 2 get it 2. paige needs an ass whuppin 2. now that she's been hangin wit crystal shady ass i don't really like her any more. i hope nikki crazy ass not preggo. if she is, oh boy! :O

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If you really was concerned about doing the right thing, I wouldn‘t have been finding this out from Nikki.”
“I knew dat was all you would see. Fuck the fact that she drugged me and took advantage of my ass. Dat don’t count for shit!”
“It counts. I hate the fact that she did that to you. I hate it even more that you didn’t tell me that she did it.”
“I’m sorry! What more can I say. I had every intention of you hearin it from me.”
“There’s nothing more you can say.”
“So how long you plan on being away from me this time?”
“I don’t know Trey.”
“Why you doin this?” I’m on my crutches heading to the door while Trey reluctantly has my bag in his hand.
“Because I need to and I’m gonna need for you to let me ok?”
“Ight. You do what you needa do, because I’m definitely gonna do what I need to.”

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“Dats why I ain’t been able to find it. She has the one wit the cross on it?” I shook my head yes. “She must’ve took it that day because I ain’t never give it to her.”
“So Nikki drugged you and got you to sleep with her?”
“Yeah…she did.”
“What did she drug you with Trey?”
“I don’t know…by the time I went they couldn’t trace what it was in my system.”
“So it’s possible she could be pregnant by you.”
“I mean for all I know she might not be pregnant. She liable to say anything, so until I have proof it’s bullshit.” Yeah I had reached my breaking point.
“This is some bullshit! I can’t stand the fact that you keep, keeping important information away from me like I‘ma damn child. Do you think that little of me that I’m so fragile and have to be handled with care that you can‘t be honest with me Trey?”
“So I’m wrong for caring about your feelings and wanting to put them first before dumping more bullshit on you all at once? It’s wrong for me to take in consideration the circumstances before I bring you some fucked up news like this? I’m wrong for dat?”
“It’s been a month now and I’m just now finding out about this Trey. Don’t give me that circumstances bullshit. What were the circumstances two weeks ago? What were they one week ago? All were opportunities for you to tell me this but you didn’t.”
“No I didn’t! It still don’t mean that I wasn’t gonna tell you about it.” I grabbed my crutches and got up off the bed.
“Where you going?”
“Away from you!” I grabbed my duffle bag and hobbled on my crutches to pack it.
questions…“Away from me…I can’t win wit you sometimes…no matter how hard I try. The minute I think I‘m doin the right thing by you I get shot the fuck down.”
“You weren’t honest with me Trey. You screwed your ex. It may not have been intentional but that’s all the more reason why you should’ve told me. Now it just seems suspect and now I have to worry about you possibly being a father on top of it.

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Trey turns his head down and his smile fades away. He wasn‘t sure if he should ask about what she had to say or just cut Shanell off and tell her himself about what‘s he‘s put off for too long.”
“She didn’t start no shit did she?”
“It wouldn’t be her if she didn’t.” He sits beside me.
“Look, it’s a few things I need to talk to you about that deals with Nikki.”
“Oh so you know already about what I’m gonna say?”
“Probably.” I instantly felt uneasy because if he was going to tell me what I thought he was, I don’t know if I could take it.”
“Trey are you about to tell me that what she just said to me is true?” I could tell by his body language that he was hesitant to tell me anything.
“Baby I don’t know exactly what Nikki had to say to you but…”
“Trey please tell me you didn’t sleep with her and now she’s carrying your baby…please tell me she’s lying…” He got quiet for a second. “Oh my God!”
grabs hand “Baby listen to me.” I push him.
“GET AWAY FROM ME!” I continuously push him away so he wraps his arms around me so I can’t push him and have to stay put.
“Listen to me! I didn’t knowingly sleep wit her.”
“Get off me Trey.”
“No! You gone hear me out! She put somethin in my drink that had me all fucked up. I didn’t know what I was doing wit her. You gotta believe me.” I was so bitter. She finally had gotten what she wanted and I’m looking like a damn fool.
“So the pregnancy is true?”
“I hope not. I don’t really know yet.” This whole time I was staring straight ahead. I finally looked at Trey.
“If she drugged you why did you keep this from me?” He loosened his grip.
“Shanell it was so much that hit you baby when this happened. I just couldn’t tell you this too. Baby believe me I was gonna tell you. It just never seemed like a good time. You had just found out about El…then the accident…the timing just wasn’t right….I know you won’t believe this but I actually was gonna talk to you about it today.”
“Why does she have your chain?”

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“Don’t Shanell me! Why are you spreading lies? You’re not pregnant by Trey and you never will be. Why can’t you except that fact that he doesn’t want ya ass.”
“Oh really! Well that’s where you’re wrong. If he didn’t want me how could I be pregnant by him?”
“You’re sick! Trey hasn’t even been anywhere near you and when he was, you were never alone.”
“Oh we were alone alright, when he made love to me in the hotel room after our dinner on the cruise. He also gave me this…takes chain out of purse…yes he wanted me to have it too.”
“You’re lying! He would never sleep with you.” I tried to grab his chain but she pulled it away. She rubs her belly.
“I guess you’ll believe it in eight months won’t you?” I removed one of my crutches and tried to hit her with it when Evan stopped it.” Nikki quickly moved out of the way anyway.
“NO! Come on Shanell let’s go. Here…hands me the crutch…put this back under you…let‘s get out of here.” Everyone was staring at us in the store. Nikki looked at her friend.
“Come on Charmaine let’s go.”

My mind was about to explode. I was so angry I couldn’t even cry anymore. I heard MJB song singing in my head “I’m not gone cry, I’m not gone cry, I’m not gone shed no tears.” I refused to go there. I made it home and noticed that Trey had been here since there was a dish in the sink. I also noticed a few other things that caught my attention. I knew he was coming back so I just waited patiently. In the meantime I unpacked my things, took a pain pill and decided to lay down. Trey did his usual, he came in the room and kissed me on the cheek letting me know he was home. I slowly sat up on the bed.

“Baby you didn’t hafta get up…how’s the leg doing?”
“It was bothering me earlier until I took some pain medicine but if feels alright, right now.”
“Dat’s good.”
“You know a funny thing happened today while I was getting some more medicine.” He smiles.
“What happened?”
“I ran into Nikki.”

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