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  • First I want to thank you guys for all the comments and feedback you've given me on the story. MUAH! Thanks for taking the time to do it and just reading it! You guys don't know how much I appreciate you. Even if you've read and didn't leave a comment...thank you. If you haven't read this story please do. I will only leave it up for a short period of time.

    Now just out of curiosity...and you may have to think about this...if "Does She Know" were a movie or a book would you pay to go see it or read it? BE HONEST! I always love to improve and if you wouldn't I'd like to know why? What would've made it better and more interesting.

    If this was a movie who would you pick for the cast? His leading lady Shanell? The vixen Nikki? etc.

    Would Trey Songz play himself or would you pick someone else to play his character? 

    Think about it. This is what I like to do when I write. I try to give you guys a clear picture in your head of the story. Could you capture what I was trying to portray through out the story? Especially when Shanell got cut.

    What was your favorite part in the story if you had one?

    Just wanna know your thoughts. Also I was considering continuing the story titleing it "Made To Be Together." If so I'd like to know what you would like to see happen with Trey and Shanell in this one. 

    Thanks again to all my readers.

    BESTSELLERANGEL

     

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Prittbrowniiz BestSellerAngel's picture
on August 19, 2011 - 7:08pm
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First I want to thank you guys for all the comments and feedback you've given me on the story. MUAH! Thanks for taking the time to do it and just reading it! You guys don't know how much I appreciate you. Even if you've read and didn't leave a comment...thank you. If you haven't read this story please do. I will only leave it up for a short period of time.

Now just out of curiosity...and you may have to think about this...if "Does She Know" were a movie or a book would you pay to go see it or read it? BE HONEST! I always love to improve and if you wouldn't I'd like to know why? What would've made it better and more interesting.

If this was a movie who would you pick for the cast? His leading lady Shanell? The vixen Nikki? etc.

Would Trey Songz play himself or would you pick someone else to play his character? 

Think about it. This is what I like to do when I write. I try to give you guys a clear picture in your head of the story. Could you capture what I was trying to portray through out the story? Especially when Shanell got cut.

What was your favorite part in the story if you had one?

Just wanna know your thoughts. Also I was considering continuing the story titleing it "Made To Be Together." If so I'd like to know what you would like to see happen with Trey and Shanell in this one. 

Thanks again to all my readers.

BESTSELLERANGEL

 

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@DIONCA - Thanks you so much! OMG! You have to read "Does She Know" if you're enjoying this story than you will really enjoy that one. That's where it all started. It's still on the site if you want to read it. I never took it down. Thanks again for the love.

Dionca's picture

I havent read this one yet but Ive read all thats up of the sequel. You are doing an excellent job and I wouldnt change anything about the story. I was just telling my bestfriend last night that if this ever became a book I would read it or if this ever became a movie I would go watch it and buy it. To be honest Trey may can consider his own sitcom since he's into acting now, this is two seasons worth right here. I'm just throwing in suggestions. I really hope he sees this and it gives him ideas :-)

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@Numba1Hon - LOL!!!

JamRoC_4eVa's picture

thanks glad i could i could help.. @ Numba1Hon girlur a mess, y u wanna kill shanell,lol..

Numba1Hon's picture

Terrible to say, but as long as Trey stays alive is all good.

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@JamRoc_4eVa - I love that idea!

@Numba1Hon - Aw poor Shanell...hasn't she been through enough already? Then to get shot and die...LOL!!!

I love the ideas you never know what I will use.

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@JamRoC_4eVa OMG. Great idea!!! (continuation) -- And then Trey does everything to try and save Shanell, but Shanell dies and then Trey sinks into despondency and starts drinking heavily, immersing himself entirely in writing and making music and going hopelessly and aimlessly from woman to woman (unusual types) until he meets the right One......

@pritTbrowniizBestSellerAngel with these kind of changes"Together" would work because the central theme would be that the main as well as some secondary characters BADLY want to be together with someone else in the story.

mexativemami85's picture

yes i would buy ur book n i would go c it. i cant wait 4 the next part...

JamRoC_4eVa's picture

girl i luv this story so much i juss had to re-read it.. so i had a crzy idea wat if their @ the alter ready to say their i do's one of trey crazy fan shoot shanell where she end up in a coma & when she's up she don't remember trey that would b crazy... Juss a idea so looking forward 4 ur new story..

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@OhSoLuhvlee - OMG! I never thought about Kerry Washington but yes she would be a good Nikki. I can see her pulling that off.

@Da Shy Scorpio - Thank you. I like the ending too. I don't know how soon I'll have the other one up but it is in the works.

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if this was a book i would surely buy it, if it was a movie i would surely go c it. as far as cast trey should play himself and idk about everybody else yet. i gotta think about it. as i read the story, i could picture everything that was happenin vividly. i had ppl around my way playin the story out in my head lol. this crazy chick down the block was nikki. i think she might b bipolar or sumthin, idk. she is boy crazy though lol. the best part was the ass whuppins (b/c i couldn't wait 4 them 2 happen lol) and the endin. it was sooooo sweet. u should continue this story. i can't wait 2 c what happens wit them now. if el shows up, i wonder if him and crystal sneaky ass r gunna get 2gether once he gets out of jail. smh. idk. but i hope u start the story soon

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Of course I would pay to go see it. I'd probably rather read it as a book because after reading this, if I saw the movie and some stuff got changed or the characters weren't right, I'd get mad. I would want Trey to play himself. Who would play Trey better than himself. I'd want a new actress to play Shanell. And I'd probably want Eva Marcille or Kerry Washington to play Nikki cause she has to be cute but crazy and I'd think they'd be good at that. It's just a thought.
My favorite part was right after Trey and Shanell made love for the first time and Trey said “Baby you gotta hold on my heart so tight right now can‘t nobody touch dat shit.” I know that's not really a part, but I love that line.

I would LOVE if you continued the story. But I feel like I've got a lot of Trey & Shanell. It might be time for a new lady in Trey's life. I really don't like the idea of a story where I don't like Trey. Those make me mad. I know Trey can't always be the good guy but I like to think so.

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@trey_num1Angel - thanks for the kind words again. Looking forward to reading your story.

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omg okay so I dont know if you rememer me but I'm @trey_num_1Angel on twitter and once again you're an amazing writer. From the looks of it you write everyday so you're definitely dedicated in what you do and you kep your readers interested. As far as a movie I would want trey to be his self and I'm not sure about the others. I wuld most definitely buy this if it were a book so you should look into it :) if yo do a continuation suprise me lol. And when I read this story I was able to vision everything that was happening so that's good. Keep up the good work. Honestly it's writers like you that I look up to because you're dedicated, you have the skill, and you do keep you're readers wondering "what's going to hapen next?". I do want to become a writer so I do look up to good writer's and you're one of them! I'm actually in the process of a story(trey songz fanfiction) so I hope to get that up here soon. Great work though!

deeliyuuup's picture

OMG this story is gonna be good. i can feel it

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@stlgirl4lyfe2010 - I'm not saying anymore than that! lol

Numba1Hon's picture

Sounds good already.

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

his voice

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@Numba1Hon - IF I do the story I have in mind he'll end of losing something that's VERY important and vital in his life and behind it you'll see a whole other side to Trey that only time can heal. The Tremaine/Trey Songz that Shanell grew to love won't be recognizable. It will test if they were "Made To Be Together." This is only a thought though it's not definite yet. I REPEAT ONLY A THOUGHT :)

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@Numba1Hon - To answer your question a new character would have to be introduced. Remember Trey dated Nikki for most of high school until senior year. Shanell's last boyfriend was El before she met Trey so another character on either end would have to come into play before these time frames.

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@pritTbrowniiz Do it. We will like Trey regardless. They practically always made Trey a bad boy in the old fan fiction. I wish I could find some of it. Can we get a hint?

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@JamRoC_4eVa That is a great idea. I luv it. I wonder if a new characters will have to be introduced.

Prittbrowniiz BestSellerAngel's picture

Getting some great story ideas....I have one in mind that I'm toying around with but if I do this you might not like Trey to much. LOL

JamRoC_4eVa's picture

Girl can u say TALENTED, thats wat u r.. Hands down 1 of my favorite story u wrote.. The story line was great and the characters was off the hook,lol.. my favorite part was when she dream nelly kiss her, that was real crazy the scene u set was REALISTIC great job again..
Yes girl plzzzz continue, i wanna c their marriage get tested with distance & a past luv that they never got ova..

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

because she is not me trust me

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@stigirl4lyfe2010
Why is that pray tell??? LOL

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I included the videos to show that when he talks, his speech flows easily, faster, and without heavy emphasis. Also, he may say dis or dat, but in the same video, he may say this or that even though more softly then sharply. In real life around family, he may relax quite a bit and go into a real slow country drawl, but as the Trey Songz persona, I think not so much. The accent is there along with some Black speech patterns, but the slow drawl with heavy emphasis is mostly gone and we see more of colloquial speech, a beautiful Southern accent, and some urban slang. You did a great job on his speech though. It was just at the beginning that I sensed a problem. You can probably figure it out better than me. I once found a book in the library on regional accents for actors. There may be something online about this. I think the story would make a good play too. I will see if I can come up with some ideas for part II.

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no I don't think raven symone could be me

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@Numba1Hon - Thank you so much for your feedback. I do agree Trey is articulate no doubt about it. His interviews most definitely but when he's relaxed and doesn't have to be in business mode his speaks more freely. At the same time I captured him the best I could considering I don't know him personally. I will definitely take your advice as far as the dialog. I should be a screen writer because I love dialog...lol but I guess not so much for a story. You wanted me to watch the youtube videos to show me what? Thank you too for your choices for a movie! Any thoughts on what you would like to see happen with Shanell and Trey in the next story?

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I read it last night and it was so good I couldn't stop. It started off slow so I thought I was going to be bored, but it was full of romance, suspense and drama. I would purchase the book since it is fan fiction about Trey. I would somehow change the beginning to make it grab you faster. Maybe break up the dialogue or maybe a little less emphasis on Eubonics especially at the beginning. . It slowed things down for me because I kept on thinking Trey sounds more articulate. I would watch this as a movie on BET or TVOne if Trey was the Star. I like a shorter version of your newer title, e.g. TOGETHER. Cast: TREY (himself), Lauren London (Shanell), Shanica Knowles (Nickki), Meagan Goode (Paige), Kyla Pratt (Chrystal), TI (EL), Raven Simon (Aileen, LOL), Eve (Ty), Queen Latifah (Aunt Sharon), Ms. April (herself). Alternates: Keke Palmer, Eva Pigsford, Jennifer Hudson, Keisha Knight Pulliam, Naturi Haughton, Tia Mowry, Rhianna, Vivica A. Fox.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vbp_CFYggjs (articulate)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2hkfDrWlYHY listen at 223 & 224 to “that”

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