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    October 03, 2010

    SUP ANGELS...

    Some of Yall asked for it so I came to deliver...This is the first snippet of the first TreysAngels fan fiction staring TREY!!! LOL!!! I love comments...I love feedback...tell me what you guys want to read and watch me make it happen!!! If you are not following me yet...do so twitter.com/LadyAJ03...That is @LadyAJ03. If you write let's get in on a collab!!!Here Goes:

    WONDER WOMAN

    After a long day all Trey wanted to do was rest but he had to get ready for his show. After kickin’ everyone out of his dressing room he sat in silence. Usually he hated to sit with quiet around him but today it seemed to give him a calm and peaceful feeling. The light tap on his door shook him out of his thoughts…

     

    T: Hey…I said Alone. That means leave me in here…Alone (back turned to the door)

    The door creeked open and Trey could hear heels clicking behind him. He turned an noticed a beautiful stranger standing in front of him with an innocent look on her face that made him smile.  Her body was amazing…the perfect hour glass shape and her face was flawless from her big brown eyes to her full pouty lips.

    T: Can I help you? (He asked nicely with a smile)

    A: Hi, I’m Alyssa…My brother helped me sneak back here so that I could tell you to have a good show.

    T: Thank you baby (He stands to hug her)

    As Trey walked toward the mystery lady their eyes met. Something happened in that moment. He couldn’t explain it so he tried to ignore what he was feeling. Wrapping his arms around her felt so right… like he had held her a thousand times.

    A: Why are you looking at me like that?

    T: I feel like I know you from somewhere. Have we met?

    A: No…believe me I would remember.

    T: Well…I have to get ready for the show…

    Trey was saying his goodbyes but his arms would not leave her waist…It was something about her that was, well…Different. Her stare made him weaken as he leaned in to kiss her on the cheek but she had other plans, brushing her lips against his. Their lips locked and he felt a shiver all over his body…Her lips tasted so good…so familiar…Who was this girl?

    A: (Pulling away slowly)…Have a nice show.

    As quickly as she entered she disappeared. Trey was left standing there…in shock and amazed at how she took control and kept his attention for so long. Joey, lead security for the venue knocked to warn Trey that he had fifteen minutes…

    T: Hey Joey, did you see that girl?

    J: What girl?

    T: The one that was just in here… Kinda short, White dress, long hair…

    J: Oh, yeah…wasn’t she hot…

    T: Where did she go?

    J: She went back to her seat. Why?

    T: Have someone find her and give her my number for me.

    J: Sure. But I’m surprised you let her leave without it if you don’t mind me saying…

    (Later)

    The show was amazing and Trey felt on top of the world. There would be no after party…he needed sleep. All he could think about was all of the faces in the crowd…his Angels that always held it down for him. Counting his blessings would take a lifetime and he still wouldn’t be able to thank god enough for the love given to him by so many.  After showering he threw himself across the hotel mattress and tried to relax. Just as his eyes closed his phone buzzed.

     The Text Read :  Y didn’t u just ask for my num? LOL J.

    Trey Licked his lips and smiled before texting back : Y didn’t u hit me sooner…I want 2 see u.

     

    Do you think Alyssa is going to see Trey right away or make him sweat? Is she really a stranger or from Trey’s past??  You will see next time… If you want to add on to it you can…otherwise I will pick up where I left off and continue the story every other day…Thanx for readin’ … Let me know what you think…just how R Rated do you think this one should get?? J

     

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@LadyAJ03's picture
on Oct 3, 2010 - 09:45PM

SUP ANGELS...

Some of Yall asked for it so I came to deliver...This is the first snippet of the first TreysAngels fan fiction staring TREY!!! LOL!!! I love comments...I love feedback...tell me what you guys want to read and watch me make it happen!!! If you are not following me yet...do so twitter.com/LadyAJ03...That is @LadyAJ03. If you write let's get in on a collab!!!Here Goes:

WONDER WOMAN

After a long day all Trey wanted to do was rest but he had to get ready for his show. After kickin’ everyone out of his dressing room he sat in silence. Usually he hated to sit with quiet around him but today it seemed to give him a calm and peaceful feeling. The light tap on his door shook him out of his thoughts…

 

T: Hey…I said Alone. That means leave me in here…Alone (back turned to the door)

The door creeked open and Trey could hear heels clicking behind him. He turned an noticed a beautiful stranger standing in front of him with an innocent look on her face that made him smile.  Her body was amazing…the perfect hour glass shape and her face was flawless from her big brown eyes to her full pouty lips.

T: Can I help you? (He asked nicely with a smile)

A: Hi, I’m Alyssa…My brother helped me sneak back here so that I could tell you to have a good show.

T: Thank you baby (He stands to hug her)

As Trey walked toward the mystery lady their eyes met. Something happened in that moment. He couldn’t explain it so he tried to ignore what he was feeling. Wrapping his arms around her felt so right… like he had held her a thousand times.

A: Why are you looking at me like that?

T: I feel like I know you from somewhere. Have we met?

A: No…believe me I would remember.

T: Well…I have to get ready for the show…

Trey was saying his goodbyes but his arms would not leave her waist…It was something about her that was, well…Different. Her stare made him weaken as he leaned in to kiss her on the cheek but she had other plans, brushing her lips against his. Their lips locked and he felt a shiver all over his body…Her lips tasted so good…so familiar…Who was this girl?

A: (Pulling away slowly)…Have a nice show.

As quickly as she entered she disappeared. Trey was left standing there…in shock and amazed at how she took control and kept his attention for so long. Joey, lead security for the venue knocked to warn Trey that he had fifteen minutes…

T: Hey Joey, did you see that girl?

J: What girl?

T: The one that was just in here… Kinda short, White dress, long hair…

J: Oh, yeah…wasn’t she hot…

T: Where did she go?

J: She went back to her seat. Why?

T: Have someone find her and give her my number for me.

J: Sure. But I’m surprised you let her leave without it if you don’t mind me saying…

(Later)

The show was amazing and Trey felt on top of the world. There would be no after party…he needed sleep. All he could think about was all of the faces in the crowd…his Angels that always held it down for him. Counting his blessings would take a lifetime and he still wouldn’t be able to thank god enough for the love given to him by so many.  After showering he threw himself across the hotel mattress and tried to relax. Just as his eyes closed his phone buzzed.

 The Text Read :  Y didn’t u just ask for my num? LOL J.

Trey Licked his lips and smiled before texting back : Y didn’t u hit me sooner…I want 2 see u.

 

Do you think Alyssa is going to see Trey right away or make him sweat? Is she really a stranger or from Trey’s past??  You will see next time… If you want to add on to it you can…otherwise I will pick up where I left off and continue the story every other day…Thanx for readin’ … Let me know what you think…just how R Rated do you think this one should get?? J

 

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MsAngione's picture

Your awesome! I write, we have to collab!!!

TREYSANGELBEAUTY's picture

GIRL THE IMAGINATION I GOT ON THIS GET IT GIRL

mii_sunflower's picture

BOUT TO READ CHAP. 2

ladyt1980's picture

very gud about 2 read chap. 2

AngelicTrey's picture

It is good so far. Can't wait to read chapter 2!

Kikamiko's picture

This is good!...about to go read the other 2.:)

@Cursha's picture

I love it.....keep dem comin.

KA-LEE-YA...KALEYIA's picture

LOVE IT..... i cn t wait for more.....

lala072 AspecialAngel's picture

This was good girl.... keep it up with the stories...

ANGEL_KIAH84's picture

Omg .I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SOOOOOOO good and I agree with @shay_yuuup you should a Fan fiction blog !!!!! I would join.

A_Perfect_Angel's picture

OMG!!!! You have a God given talent.. I loved every part of this story & I can't wait to read pt 2..You really should put this together and give it to Trey I think he would really like it...This was a great idea...keep it comin'

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Yea u should really start dat Trey Fan Fiction blog girl!

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

Okay, so I read part 2 before I read part 1...but take that as a compliment. After reading part 2 I had to come back and read part 1. LOVE IT!!! Get XXX rated - we grown & sexy, and if we're lusting after Trey...then we're all a little kinky anyway! ;-)

@LadyAJ03's picture

Hey everybody...The next addition to this story has been posted on a new blog called Wonder Woman pt.2 because I couldn't fit it all as a comment (character limit). Check it out!!! DOn't forget to comment...We do this for Trey...I would be so excited if he ever got a chance to read this so I know I have to make it good!!!

SexySagLuvSongz's picture

Tight, tight, tight!!!! This is sooooo tight......I love it!! Everybody is right you are a good writer. I am an avid reader so I know good stories!!! Can't wait to continue reading.

@LadyAJ03's picture

Guys I am lovin' all of the love...Will be hittin' yall soon!!!

Linz84's picture

That was good!!! Your a good writer!! LOL WHY YOU LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT? I WANT TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

OMG! This was sooooooo good and its only Part I! Sheeeesh!
Good job! =) lol

CharBaby's picture

LOVE IT GIRL!!!!! IM SO HAPPY WE DECIDED TO START THE TREY FICTION STORUES.......CANT WAIT TIL U ADD MORE!!!!

Raven RambunctiousAngel's picture

OMG This Was Great!!! Your Really A Good Writer... Why- because you leave the readers wanting more!! keep it Coming.... Trey Should See This! i Cant Wait To See What Happens next!!! :)
R Rated Is Cool.... Trey Likes Things To Get A Little Nasty... lOl :)

thelsteve@hotmail.com's picture

Great start...can't wait to read the rest! I would get a little more "r" rated but not so much that we can't use our imaginations! And you know Trigga's Angels have some way out there imaginations! LMAO...

AriellBigg's picture

OMG. this is sooo good.! lmfao .i am on the edge of my seat. lol why'd yu leave me hanging? yu should write books about this stuff. omg.!

beauti_yanna's picture

Girl this was GREAT it held my attention from beginning to end pls hurry and write the rest i wanna know what happens btwn Trey and Alyssa!!!!!

SpiritualAngel's picture

I love it so far I am sitting here reading this and asking myself is this girl in my head. It's like you were reading my mind. I think it should get real R Rated. Keep it up can't wait to read some more.

yatta95's picture

Good story but not too exrated 4 me let me fill in some of the story lol =}

britbrat86's picture

MORE!!!!!! i hope she makes him sweat but great job so far

iLovemesumTREY's picture

you did a GREAT job! this is just the beginning..im so anxious to see whats goin to happen next :)
keep it coming.

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