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    October 16, 2010

    ***THE NEXT DAY***
     
    Trey had a couple interviews lined up that day. He loved being in Miami, it had a laid back vybe to it. On his way to 99 Jamz all he could do was think about Larissa.
    She had his mind BLOWN, literally.
     
    Of course Trey was known for being the "panty droppa" "Mr. Invented Sex" and the neighbors damn sure knew his name, but it wasn't about that.
    He met plenty of beautiful women on a day to day basis, but it was just something about this girl. He couldn't put his finger on it, all he knew was that he had to have her.
     
    Just as all kind of thoughts were running through his mind all of a sudden he was snapped back to reality.
     

    Alonzo (Bodyguard): "Trey ... Trey! Man wake up nigga. We gotta head up to this interview right now."

    T: "My bad. I just got alot on my mind."

    A: "What you in love now nigga?" *laughs*

    T: "Naw! *laughs* But I did meet this beautiful ... beautiful girl last night"

    A: "That's an everyday thing Trey, come with something harder than that"

    T: "Naw... This girl has something different about her. I'm still trying to figure out what it is.
    I'm planning something real special tonight for her though." *smirk on his face*

    A: "Nigga she must have done some type of spell on you, cuz yo nose wide open right about now" *laughs*

    T: "Fuck outta here... *laughs* Let me just go knock this interview out of the way and then get everything set up after..."
     

    After all his interviews that day, Trey finally had time to focus on the special night he wanted to have with Larissa.
    He had been setting the special night up all day via calls, texts, and emails. He wanted to make sure every detail was perfect.
     

    The plan was to have an intimate dinner on the rooftop of the very hotel they were staying at... The Fountainbleau.
    Even though Larissa's room was right next to his, he made sure he was gone all day so they wouldn't run into each other.
     

    Trey went up to the roof to meet up with the planner, everything was set.
    There was a nice candle-light dinner set up, with rose petals scattered all over the table top, and a rose petal trail leading up to the romantic rendezvous they had planned oh so well.
     

    He was definitely satisfied with the outcome of what he envisioned in his mind. Trey had also had the planner set his room up into a "tropical oasis" full of tropical flowers, tropical drinks, and the whole nine yards. He had to make sure he pulled out the big guns for this girl.
     

    Jasmine (Planner): "Well is everything to your liking Mr. Neverson?"

    T: "Yes I have to say you really pulled this off perfectly Jasmine, just like I envisioned it"

    J: "Well that's certainly my job. I hope everything goes well with you and your date." *smiles*

    T: "Thanks. I really appreciate all you've done, and I hope everything goes well too. I think she'll love it" *smiles*
     
    Trey went to his room to get ready. His stylist had picked out the perfect outfit choice. He went to go shower up, shave, brush his teeth, and make sure every detail was perfect this evening.

    After all the grooming and putting himself together, Trey looked in the mirror and dabbed some cologne on. The ladies loved it, so he knew his scent would drive her crazy.
     
    He observed the room and everything around him and his decided to hit up Larissa and see if she was ready.
     

    **calls Larissa**
     
    *rings three times*
     
    L: "Hello"

    T: "You lucky girl, I was just about to hang up" *laughs*

    L: "Hmmph ... No patience I see."

    T: "Naw baby, it's all good. Are you ready? Or do you still need some more time?"

    L: "I'm just about ready, just putting on some finishing touches to my makeup."

    T: "Ok perfect. When should I pick you up from your room next door? *laughs*

    L: "Hahaha ... I see someone has jokes. And give me 15 more minutes. And just come by and knock on my door."

    T: "Ok sweetheart. I'll do that. See you in a few."

    L: "Ok"

    T: "Bye"

    L: "Bye"
     

    Trey was anxious to get the date started, he couldn't wait to see Larissa's beautiful face and smile again.
    He watched the clock and decided to give her an extra five minutes and head over to her room.

    Trey took a second look at himself in the mirror and made sure his swagga was right, grabbed the room key, and headed out the door.
     
    He was in front of Larissa's door and his heart started racing, no woman had made him feel like this in awhile.

    He took a deep breath and thought to himself "Trey get a hold of yourself, get it together, show her you want her, and go for it.."  
     

    **Trey knocks on door**
     

    After a few moments Larissa greeted him at the door, he was in awe...
    She had on the definition of a freakum dress. Her one shoulder black dress fit her curves just right.

    Her hair dropped to her shoulders in the most perfect curls, and her cheetah print Steve Madden heels matched her clutch.
    Her makeup wasn't overdone and was just right, she looked natural, but went bold with the red lipstick.

    He thought in his mind "Damn the things I would do to this girl..." But he quickly snapped back to reality.
     
    T: "Damn... I mean ... you look beautiful tonight."

    L: "Awwww... Thanks. You really think so?"

    T: "Baby I wouldn't lie to you." *smiles*

    L: *laughs* "So what do you have planned tonight Trey?"

    T: "It's a surprise... Close your eyes."

    L: "What? Are you trying to kidnap me boy?"

    T: *chuckles* "Just relax baby and go with the flow. Now close your eyes."

    L: *sighs* Ok..."
     

    *Trey blindfolds Larissa and leads her all the way to the staircase*
     He removes the blindfold and she looks and says...
     

    L: "Our date is on a staircase? What the..."

    T: "Girl just hush up and follow the rose petals" *laughs*
     

    *Larissa looks down at the rose petals leading upstairs*
     
    L: *chuckles* "Oh... Sorry"
     

    *They follow the rose petals all the way to the rooftop*
     
    T: "Well what do you think?"

    L: "OMG! You did all this? It is soooo beautiful Trey"
     
    Larissa gazed at everything Trey had prepared for her and she almost teared up, it was so beautiful.
    Trey led her to her seat and made sure she was comfortable, after that he took his seat.
     
    L: "Wow Trey. You really put your all into this didn't you?"

    T: "Of course baby. No half steppin' here. When I said I'll take you places you've never seen before, I meant it."

    L: "Well at least you're showing me instead of just telling me. That tells me alot about you."

    T: "So you're saying your impressed?"

    L: "Yes.... So far." *chuckles*

    T: "Well I gotta change that "so far" into a "YUUUP" *laughs*

    L: *laughs* Good one... That was actually a good one."

    T: "I gotta keep a smile on your face, it's too beautiful not to be seen."
     

    *Larissa blushes*
     
    After a little conversation Trey and Larissa had their meal and talked some more.
    They were both obviously feeling each other, but now Trey had to take her to see the other suprised he planned for her.
    The "tropical oasis" he had planned in his room...

     

    Click link for Part 3: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/all-the-ifs-part-3/

     
     

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Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture
on Oct 16, 2010 - 11:25PM

***THE NEXT DAY***
 
Trey had a couple interviews lined up that day. He loved being in Miami, it had a laid back vybe to it. On his way to 99 Jamz all he could do was think about Larissa.
She had his mind BLOWN, literally.
 
Of course Trey was known for being the "panty droppa" "Mr. Invented Sex" and the neighbors damn sure knew his name, but it wasn't about that.
He met plenty of beautiful women on a day to day basis, but it was just something about this girl. He couldn't put his finger on it, all he knew was that he had to have her.
 
Just as all kind of thoughts were running through his mind all of a sudden he was snapped back to reality.
 

Alonzo (Bodyguard): "Trey ... Trey! Man wake up nigga. We gotta head up to this interview right now."

T: "My bad. I just got alot on my mind."

A: "What you in love now nigga?" *laughs*

T: "Naw! *laughs* But I did meet this beautiful ... beautiful girl last night"

A: "That's an everyday thing Trey, come with something harder than that"

T: "Naw... This girl has something different about her. I'm still trying to figure out what it is.
I'm planning something real special tonight for her though." *smirk on his face*

A: "Nigga she must have done some type of spell on you, cuz yo nose wide open right about now" *laughs*

T: "Fuck outta here... *laughs* Let me just go knock this interview out of the way and then get everything set up after..."
 

After all his interviews that day, Trey finally had time to focus on the special night he wanted to have with Larissa.
He had been setting the special night up all day via calls, texts, and emails. He wanted to make sure every detail was perfect.
 

The plan was to have an intimate dinner on the rooftop of the very hotel they were staying at... The Fountainbleau.
Even though Larissa's room was right next to his, he made sure he was gone all day so they wouldn't run into each other.
 

Trey went up to the roof to meet up with the planner, everything was set.
There was a nice candle-light dinner set up, with rose petals scattered all over the table top, and a rose petal trail leading up to the romantic rendezvous they had planned oh so well.
 

He was definitely satisfied with the outcome of what he envisioned in his mind. Trey had also had the planner set his room up into a "tropical oasis" full of tropical flowers, tropical drinks, and the whole nine yards. He had to make sure he pulled out the big guns for this girl.
 

Jasmine (Planner): "Well is everything to your liking Mr. Neverson?"

T: "Yes I have to say you really pulled this off perfectly Jasmine, just like I envisioned it"

J: "Well that's certainly my job. I hope everything goes well with you and your date." *smiles*

T: "Thanks. I really appreciate all you've done, and I hope everything goes well too. I think she'll love it" *smiles*
 
Trey went to his room to get ready. His stylist had picked out the perfect outfit choice. He went to go shower up, shave, brush his teeth, and make sure every detail was perfect this evening.

After all the grooming and putting himself together, Trey looked in the mirror and dabbed some cologne on. The ladies loved it, so he knew his scent would drive her crazy.
 
He observed the room and everything around him and his decided to hit up Larissa and see if she was ready.
 

**calls Larissa**
 
*rings three times*
 
L: "Hello"

T: "You lucky girl, I was just about to hang up" *laughs*

L: "Hmmph ... No patience I see."

T: "Naw baby, it's all good. Are you ready? Or do you still need some more time?"

L: "I'm just about ready, just putting on some finishing touches to my makeup."

T: "Ok perfect. When should I pick you up from your room next door? *laughs*

L: "Hahaha ... I see someone has jokes. And give me 15 more minutes. And just come by and knock on my door."

T: "Ok sweetheart. I'll do that. See you in a few."

L: "Ok"

T: "Bye"

L: "Bye"
 

Trey was anxious to get the date started, he couldn't wait to see Larissa's beautiful face and smile again.
He watched the clock and decided to give her an extra five minutes and head over to her room.

Trey took a second look at himself in the mirror and made sure his swagga was right, grabbed the room key, and headed out the door.
 
He was in front of Larissa's door and his heart started racing, no woman had made him feel like this in awhile.

He took a deep breath and thought to himself "Trey get a hold of yourself, get it together, show her you want her, and go for it.."  
 

**Trey knocks on door**
 

After a few moments Larissa greeted him at the door, he was in awe...
She had on the definition of a freakum dress. Her one shoulder black dress fit her curves just right.

Her hair dropped to her shoulders in the most perfect curls, and her cheetah print Steve Madden heels matched her clutch.
Her makeup wasn't overdone and was just right, she looked natural, but went bold with the red lipstick.

He thought in his mind "Damn the things I would do to this girl..." But he quickly snapped back to reality.
 
T: "Damn... I mean ... you look beautiful tonight."

L: "Awwww... Thanks. You really think so?"

T: "Baby I wouldn't lie to you." *smiles*

L: *laughs* "So what do you have planned tonight Trey?"

T: "It's a surprise... Close your eyes."

L: "What? Are you trying to kidnap me boy?"

T: *chuckles* "Just relax baby and go with the flow. Now close your eyes."

L: *sighs* Ok..."
 

*Trey blindfolds Larissa and leads her all the way to the staircase*
 He removes the blindfold and she looks and says...
 

L: "Our date is on a staircase? What the..."

T: "Girl just hush up and follow the rose petals" *laughs*
 

*Larissa looks down at the rose petals leading upstairs*
 
L: *chuckles* "Oh... Sorry"
 

*They follow the rose petals all the way to the rooftop*
 
T: "Well what do you think?"

L: "OMG! You did all this? It is soooo beautiful Trey"
 
Larissa gazed at everything Trey had prepared for her and she almost teared up, it was so beautiful.
Trey led her to her seat and made sure she was comfortable, after that he took his seat.
 
L: "Wow Trey. You really put your all into this didn't you?"

T: "Of course baby. No half steppin' here. When I said I'll take you places you've never seen before, I meant it."

L: "Well at least you're showing me instead of just telling me. That tells me alot about you."

T: "So you're saying your impressed?"

L: "Yes.... So far." *chuckles*

T: "Well I gotta change that "so far" into a "YUUUP" *laughs*

L: *laughs* Good one... That was actually a good one."

T: "I gotta keep a smile on your face, it's too beautiful not to be seen."
 

*Larissa blushes*
 
After a little conversation Trey and Larissa had their meal and talked some more.
They were both obviously feeling each other, but now Trey had to take her to see the other suprised he planned for her.
The "tropical oasis" he had planned in his room...

 

Click link for Part 3: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/all-the-ifs-part-3/

 
 

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Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Thanks for all the feedback ladies! I appreciate it.

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

It is up! Part 3 link is up! Check it out...

AngelicTrey's picture

2nd storie even hotter. Can't wait for chapter 3 gurl. Bong!!!!!!!!!!! Leggo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Thank you so much @ladytangel and @lashawnda! I'll try to get Part 3 up by this afternoon or 2night!

Lashawnda_3's picture

that was good its like reading a good book you have to make the next part soon

ladyt1980's picture

doing a great job babe, its wonderful now i really want 2 read part 3 so hurry.

Essence711's picture

This is getting good. It actually made me smile. Part 3 - Next!! LOL

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

I meant keep it*

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Hahaha! Sorry @love_songz just wanna keep and interesting not give away too much too early! Lol!
And thanks @lala072!

BossLadySims's picture

Ok, you gotta stop leavin me hangin like this.................

lala072 AspecialAngel's picture

good work

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lol! Sorry! Its coming soon though...

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

man why u leave us hanging can't wait to read part 3

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

@Ibelikeyuppp Nope not tonight love! But probably tomorrow though. I haven't started 3 just yet.

Ibelikeyuppp's picture

Come on that was such a TEASE!!! But you are a good writer from what I'm seeing and it's not because its of Trey lol... is part 3 gonna be up tonight??

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lmao!!!! U know it is @Tricia or maybe... Hmmm? Lol!
@Daniel_Shawn Thanks love!

Part 3 coming soon...

Daniel_Shawn's picture

OMG I'M ACTUALLY JEALOUS OF THIS CHICK LOL GOOD JOB GIRL UR THE BUSINESS

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

@LadyAJ03 - RIGGHHHTTT!!!! Don't know why @shay_yuuup was scared. This reads awesome. I can see everything taking place. If a book makes me feel like I'm watching the movie...it's good. THIS IS GOOD GIRL!!! Looking forward to part 3. Don't know what's happening in part 3, but the freak in me says, "I hope there is some sex involved in part 3." LMAO

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Thank you! @Tasha

Dependable Angel's picture

Very Good...

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lmmmaaaaaoooo! Thanks @LadyAJ! Glad I decided to do this.

@LadyAJ03's picture

You know why I like this...It reads very well...i'm not gonna just say "I like It" I want you to know that you got skills...IDK why u were sooooooo Chicken!!! LOL

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