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    October 18, 2010

    *** TWO MONTHS AFTER ***
     
    Two whole months had passed since Trey and Larissa had seen each other.
    They tried to keep in contact as much as possible,
    but with their hectic schedules the calls and texts were becoming less and less evident.
     
    Even though business was booming for Larissa,
    she couldn't help but miss Tremaine.
    She sat at her desk and reminisced about his smile,
    his eyes, his soft lips, and the way he made her feel.
     
    So Larissa decided to plan a one week trip to surprise Trey in Atlanta.
    A visit to see the love of her life was LONG overdue.
    But she still had to have a talk with him,
    just to make sure that he would be in the ATL at that time,
    so her planned wouldn't be foiled.
     
    So she called up Trey and started up a conversation...
     
     
    **Phone Rings twice**
     
     
    T: "Hey baby. What's up?"
     
    L: "Hey. Nothing much. You ran across my mind, so I decided to give you a call."
     
    T: "Awww! Really? Damn I miss you. It's been wayyy too long."
     
    L: "I know it has. And I miss you too love."
     
    T: "I heard business has been off the charts for you lately. Congrats."
     
    L: "Yes. It's been incredible."
     
    T: "I'm so proud of you baby."
     
    L: "Awwww! Thank you. You haven't been doing so bad yourself. Congrats on your recent endorsements."
     
    T: "Thank you sweetheart. I appreciate it."
     
    L: "So what do you have planned for the upcoming week?"
     
    T: "Ummm... Got a couple of magazine and radio interviews lined up that I gotta take of."
     
    L: "Oh ok. Will you be in Atlanta?"
     
    T: "Yea. I'll be there next week after I get back from New York."
     
     
    "Perfect" is what Larissa thought the minute Trey uttered those words.
     
     
    L: "Ohhhh ok. Sounds good. Well I'll let you get back to work bae, we can just Skype later on tonight."
     
    T: "Aight. You gonna get naked for me?" *laughs*
     
    L: "Ugghhh? Hush! This ain't one of your lil freaky videos." *chuckles*
     
    T: *laughs* Aight later baby. I love you. Muaahhh!"
     
    L: "I love you too. Muaahhh!"
     
     
    Larissa hatched he plan into action. She searched for flights and booked her ticket.
    She also rented a 2010 Camaro to get her around Atlanta while she was in town.
     
    She went shopping, got her hair and nails done, and took the initiative of stopping
    by Victoria's Secret to pick up some sexy underwear and lingerie.
    Larissa had to make sure she was on her A game, since she hadn't seen Trey in so long.
     
     
    *** THE NEXT WEEK ***
     
    The day had arrived, Larissa took a cab to the airport for her flight to Atlanta.
    She was excited, anxious, and nervous all at the same time.
    Since this was gonna be a surprise, she was hoping everything would fall into place perfectly.
     
     
    Larissa went through all the airport security checks,
    and got on her flight. She took her seat by the window,
    and looked outside as the plane was taking off.
     
     
     
    L: "Trey I hope you're ready for me baby ... ATL here I come."
     
     
    After a couple of hours Larissa finally landed in Atlanta.
    She got her bags, took a taxi, and headed to the car rental place.
     
    She paid the driver and went inside to pick the Camaro up she had rented for the week.
    The associate handed her the keys, and helped her put her bags inside the car.
     
    A (Associate): "Hope you enjoy the car Ms. Barnes.
    If you have any problems please don't hesitate to call."
     
    L: "Thank you so much and I will. See you in a week." *smiles*
     
    A: "Have a great day."
     
    L: "Thanks, you too."
     
     
    Larissa speeds off and heads towards the highway.
    It felt like the longest drive of her life,
    but Trey's condo was only 15 minutes away.
     
     
    She finally reached the front entrance of the condo and had her car valeted.
    Trey had given Larissa a spare key and had her name on list of contacts downstairs,
    in case of emergencies.
    So she was all set, she grabbed her bags and headed upstairs.
     
     
    Larissa finally got to Trey's floor, she tried to keep as quiet as possible.
    She got to Tremaine's door and quietly turned the key and opened it.
    She drug her bags in quietly behind her and left them behind the door,
    and slowly shut the door behind her.
     
     
    Larissa started heading towards Trey's bedroom, she paused and listened.
    She heard sounds coming from the room.
    She walked closer and closer towards his bedroom door,
    only for the sounds to get louder and louder.
     
     
    Larissa slowly creaked opened the door and spotted Trey laying on his back
    with a dark haired latina on top of him.
    She couldn't believe it, after everything they had been through,
    Trey had been creeping around on her.
     
     
    Tears began to well up in her eyes as she watched the man
    she loved make love to another woman.
     
     
    (Larissa burst the door open)
     
     
    L: "TREMAINE!!! What the fuck is going on here???
    After everything we've been through, you do this to me???"
     
     
    Trey was dumbfounded, he threw the girl off of him,
    grabbed his robe and ran over to Larissa.
     
     
     
    T: "Baby ... I ... Please ... Just hear me out..."
     
    L: "I don't wanna hear shit you have to say Tremaine!!!
    I don't even know who you are anymore.
    This is definitely not the man I fell in love with."
     
    T: "LARISSA!!! Baby ... Just let me explain!!"
     
    L: "Explain what???!! I walk in here to surprise my man only to find him
    in bed fuckin' some trashy ass slut???"
     
     
    Larissa had murder in her eyes as she looked at the homewrecking woman.
     
     
    L: "You better get her out of here before I throw that bitch over the balcony!!!"
     
    T: "Just get out of here! LEAVE!!"
     
     
     
    Mistress gathers her clothing and walks past Larissa and Trey.
     
     
     
    Mistress (M): *Looks at Larissa*
    "Maybe if you were doing your job at home none of this would've happened!"
    *smirk on face*
     
     
    (Larissa gets in her face)
     
     
     
    L: "Listen here you low class, worthless, quick to get on your knees ass bitch! I will..."
     
     

    (Trey seperates them and looks at the other woman...)
     
     

    T: "Just get out man!!! FUCK!!"
     
    M: "Yea whateva! You'll be back ... I'm leaving!"
     
     
    (Mistress exits Trey's condo, and he goes over to lock the door)
     
     
    T: "Wait wait, wait! Baby we gotta talk! PLEASE!"
     
    L: "Trey there is NOTHING you can tell me at this point,
    I loved you with all my heart and soul.
    I just can't believe this shit!!!"
     
    T: "Baby just..."
     
    L: "Noooooo! Fuck you! It's OVER! Don't contact me, don't have your people contact me,
    act like I never existed! You're dead to me!"
     
    (Trey blocks the door and tries to hold Larissa)
     
    L: "Get your hands off of me!!! *slaps him*
    I don't know who else you been touchin, suckin, or fuckin!
    NOW MOVE!"
     

    Trey decided not to fight it anymore, she let her go through the door.
    He knew he MESSED up. The love of his life was about to walk out of his life ... FOR GOOD.
    He knew he couldn't live without her, so he chased her all the way downstairs.
     

    By the time he reached the lobby, Larissa had already thrown her bags in the back of her car.
     
    T: "LARISSA!!! Wait baby please! DON'T GO! I NEED YOU!"
     
    L: "Goodbye Tremaine! It was fun while it lasted..."
     
     
    (Larissa presses the gas and speeds off into the night...)
     
     
    Trey was left there standing all alone with a teardrop falling down his cheek.
    His love was now lost...

     

    Click Link for Part 6: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/all-the-ifs-part-6

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Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture
on Oct 18, 2010 - 06:32PM

*** TWO MONTHS AFTER ***
 
Two whole months had passed since Trey and Larissa had seen each other.
They tried to keep in contact as much as possible,
but with their hectic schedules the calls and texts were becoming less and less evident.
 
Even though business was booming for Larissa,
she couldn't help but miss Tremaine.
She sat at her desk and reminisced about his smile,
his eyes, his soft lips, and the way he made her feel.
 
So Larissa decided to plan a one week trip to surprise Trey in Atlanta.
A visit to see the love of her life was LONG overdue.
But she still had to have a talk with him,
just to make sure that he would be in the ATL at that time,
so her planned wouldn't be foiled.
 
So she called up Trey and started up a conversation...
 
 
**Phone Rings twice**
 
 
T: "Hey baby. What's up?"
 
L: "Hey. Nothing much. You ran across my mind, so I decided to give you a call."
 
T: "Awww! Really? Damn I miss you. It's been wayyy too long."
 
L: "I know it has. And I miss you too love."
 
T: "I heard business has been off the charts for you lately. Congrats."
 
L: "Yes. It's been incredible."
 
T: "I'm so proud of you baby."
 
L: "Awwww! Thank you. You haven't been doing so bad yourself. Congrats on your recent endorsements."
 
T: "Thank you sweetheart. I appreciate it."
 
L: "So what do you have planned for the upcoming week?"
 
T: "Ummm... Got a couple of magazine and radio interviews lined up that I gotta take of."
 
L: "Oh ok. Will you be in Atlanta?"
 
T: "Yea. I'll be there next week after I get back from New York."
 
 
"Perfect" is what Larissa thought the minute Trey uttered those words.
 
 
L: "Ohhhh ok. Sounds good. Well I'll let you get back to work bae, we can just Skype later on tonight."
 
T: "Aight. You gonna get naked for me?" *laughs*
 
L: "Ugghhh? Hush! This ain't one of your lil freaky videos." *chuckles*
 
T: *laughs* Aight later baby. I love you. Muaahhh!"
 
L: "I love you too. Muaahhh!"
 
 
Larissa hatched he plan into action. She searched for flights and booked her ticket.
She also rented a 2010 Camaro to get her around Atlanta while she was in town.
 
She went shopping, got her hair and nails done, and took the initiative of stopping
by Victoria's Secret to pick up some sexy underwear and lingerie.
Larissa had to make sure she was on her A game, since she hadn't seen Trey in so long.
 
 
*** THE NEXT WEEK ***
 
The day had arrived, Larissa took a cab to the airport for her flight to Atlanta.
She was excited, anxious, and nervous all at the same time.
Since this was gonna be a surprise, she was hoping everything would fall into place perfectly.
 
 
Larissa went through all the airport security checks,
and got on her flight. She took her seat by the window,
and looked outside as the plane was taking off.
 
 
 
L: "Trey I hope you're ready for me baby ... ATL here I come."
 
 
After a couple of hours Larissa finally landed in Atlanta.
She got her bags, took a taxi, and headed to the car rental place.
 
She paid the driver and went inside to pick the Camaro up she had rented for the week.
The associate handed her the keys, and helped her put her bags inside the car.
 
A (Associate): "Hope you enjoy the car Ms. Barnes.
If you have any problems please don't hesitate to call."
 
L: "Thank you so much and I will. See you in a week." *smiles*
 
A: "Have a great day."
 
L: "Thanks, you too."
 
 
Larissa speeds off and heads towards the highway.
It felt like the longest drive of her life,
but Trey's condo was only 15 minutes away.
 
 
She finally reached the front entrance of the condo and had her car valeted.
Trey had given Larissa a spare key and had her name on list of contacts downstairs,
in case of emergencies.
So she was all set, she grabbed her bags and headed upstairs.
 
 
Larissa finally got to Trey's floor, she tried to keep as quiet as possible.
She got to Tremaine's door and quietly turned the key and opened it.
She drug her bags in quietly behind her and left them behind the door,
and slowly shut the door behind her.
 
 
Larissa started heading towards Trey's bedroom, she paused and listened.
She heard sounds coming from the room.
She walked closer and closer towards his bedroom door,
only for the sounds to get louder and louder.
 
 
Larissa slowly creaked opened the door and spotted Trey laying on his back
with a dark haired latina on top of him.
She couldn't believe it, after everything they had been through,
Trey had been creeping around on her.
 
 
Tears began to well up in her eyes as she watched the man
she loved make love to another woman.
 
 
(Larissa burst the door open)
 
 
L: "TREMAINE!!! What the fuck is going on here???
After everything we've been through, you do this to me???"
 
 
Trey was dumbfounded, he threw the girl off of him,
grabbed his robe and ran over to Larissa.
 
 
 
T: "Baby ... I ... Please ... Just hear me out..."
 
L: "I don't wanna hear shit you have to say Tremaine!!!
I don't even know who you are anymore.
This is definitely not the man I fell in love with."
 
T: "LARISSA!!! Baby ... Just let me explain!!"
 
L: "Explain what???!! I walk in here to surprise my man only to find him
in bed fuckin' some trashy ass slut???"
 
 
Larissa had murder in her eyes as she looked at the homewrecking woman.
 
 
L: "You better get her out of here before I throw that bitch over the balcony!!!"
 
T: "Just get out of here! LEAVE!!"
 
 
 
Mistress gathers her clothing and walks past Larissa and Trey.
 
 
 
Mistress (M): *Looks at Larissa*
"Maybe if you were doing your job at home none of this would've happened!"
*smirk on face*
 
 
(Larissa gets in her face)
 
 
 
L: "Listen here you low class, worthless, quick to get on your knees ass bitch! I will..."
 
 

(Trey seperates them and looks at the other woman...)
 
 

T: "Just get out man!!! FUCK!!"
 
M: "Yea whateva! You'll be back ... I'm leaving!"
 
 
(Mistress exits Trey's condo, and he goes over to lock the door)
 
 
T: "Wait wait, wait! Baby we gotta talk! PLEASE!"
 
L: "Trey there is NOTHING you can tell me at this point,
I loved you with all my heart and soul.
I just can't believe this shit!!!"
 
T: "Baby just..."
 
L: "Noooooo! Fuck you! It's OVER! Don't contact me, don't have your people contact me,
act like I never existed! You're dead to me!"
 
(Trey blocks the door and tries to hold Larissa)
 
L: "Get your hands off of me!!! *slaps him*
I don't know who else you been touchin, suckin, or fuckin!
NOW MOVE!"
 

Trey decided not to fight it anymore, she let her go through the door.
He knew he MESSED up. The love of his life was about to walk out of his life ... FOR GOOD.
He knew he couldn't live without her, so he chased her all the way downstairs.
 

By the time he reached the lobby, Larissa had already thrown her bags in the back of her car.
 
T: "LARISSA!!! Wait baby please! DON'T GO! I NEED YOU!"
 
L: "Goodbye Tremaine! It was fun while it lasted..."
 
 
(Larissa presses the gas and speeds off into the night...)
 
 
Trey was left there standing all alone with a teardrop falling down his cheek.
His love was now lost...

 

Click Link for Part 6: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/all-the-ifs-part-6

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Raven RambunctiousAngel's picture

I Didn't Want To Comment Until The End But I Must say I Love This Part of Your Story!!! Things Like This Really Do Happen And I Love The fact that You didn't Make Trey Seem As Perfect As We want To Believe He Is!! Can't Wait For Part 6 But I Guess I have To!! Nice Work...!! =)

Totally Agree With @Trinaa33

MsJJBabyee's picture

LOL why was i like Trey you dogg!! LMAO then i was like oh shit this isnt reall ... i was like sorry trey loool ... girlll keep em comingggg!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

@trinaa33 Lmao! Girl she should have known betta! *smh*

trinaa33 WiseAngel's picture

SMH! Don't Larissa know you can't surprise a man as fine as Trey, because he will surprise you! I love it girl Leggoo!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Thanks ladies! I will. Ya'll just gotta bear with me cuz during the week I have class. But I'll try my hardest to get it up as soon as possible. =)

CharBaby's picture

OMGGG I CANT WAIT TIL TIL PART 6!!!!!

RITTALUV's picture

@tricia girl u read my mind!! lol i completely agree with u! @shay_yuuup im loving these stories girl!! keep them coming!!

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

Can't wait!!!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

LMMMAAAOOOOO @Tricia! Aggghhhhh!
U gotta love Trey man! Hahaha! Part 6 coming soon! =)

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

I knew it! I knew it! When Larissa made the decision to surprise him I knew right then & there that she was going to be in for a surprise. This is TREY we talking about. I love me some Trey ladies, but I'm not at all delusional about him. He a hoe...and I love his hoe-ish ways! If Trey & I hooked up, I'd already know the business. And with a nigga that fine...why should he be faithful?!?!?! Later on in life maybe, but right now in his 20's, he needs to live it up! Especially because if he was tied down, none of us would have a chance. LOL Spread the love baby. Make yo' way over to my house next! Loved it @shay-yuuup!!!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Awwwwwww! Thanks @Ashley_Natelie! I will be coming with Part 6 soon.

And LMAO! Everyone keeps telling me they are mad at Trey in this story. C'mon ladies it's just a story! Lol! @stlgirl4lyfe2010

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

Man Trey needs his damn ass beat I'm mad

Ashley_Natelie's picture

sooo sad iit stopped here....new reader and im loving it...catching writing fever myself...you are very talented

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lmao! I know we Angels didn't want to see Trey in this light, but they story needed a twist. Lol!
Thanks for the feedback ladies!

AngelicTrey's picture

Girl this chapter almost had me in tears. How could my babe Trey do that Larissa like.I thought they had something special but I guess all things must come to an end. I hope in chapter 6 they can give this love one more go but then again it might not cause Trey did cheat on her. All he had to do was wait a lil more time an she would have came to him. Love is Truly Lost. Bong!!!!! Leggo!!!!!!!

Daniel_Shawn's picture

omfg girl....wooo cant wait for the next part

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Yea decided to include a twist! Glad you guys like it so far! =)

mizcedezbaby's picture

Dangg......girl you suprised me on this one!!! I loved it though. You always keep me wanting more.

Lashawnda_3's picture

wow speachless cant wait for part 6

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