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    October 18, 2010

    *** TWO MONTHS AFTER ***
     
    Two whole months had passed since Trey and Larissa had seen each other.
    They tried to keep in contact as much as possible,
    but with their hectic schedules the calls and texts were becoming less and less evident.
     
    Even though business was booming for Larissa,
    she couldn't help but miss Tremaine.
    She sat at her desk and reminisced about his smile,
    his eyes, his soft lips, and the way he made her feel.
     
    So Larissa decided to plan a one week trip to surprise Trey in Atlanta.
    A visit to see the love of her life was LONG overdue.
    But she still had to have a talk with him,
    just to make sure that he would be in the ATL at that time,
    so her planned wouldn't be foiled.
     
    So she called up Trey and started up a conversation...
     
     
    **Phone Rings twice**
     
     
    T: "Hey baby. What's up?"
     
    L: "Hey. Nothing much. You ran across my mind, so I decided to give you a call."
     
    T: "Awww! Really? Damn I miss you. It's been wayyy too long."
     
    L: "I know it has. And I miss you too love."
     
    T: "I heard business has been off the charts for you lately. Congrats."
     
    L: "Yes. It's been incredible."
     
    T: "I'm so proud of you baby."
     
    L: "Awwww! Thank you. You haven't been doing so bad yourself. Congrats on your recent endorsements."
     
    T: "Thank you sweetheart. I appreciate it."
     
    L: "So what do you have planned for the upcoming week?"
     
    T: "Ummm... Got a couple of magazine and radio interviews lined up that I gotta take of."
     
    L: "Oh ok. Will you be in Atlanta?"
     
    T: "Yea. I'll be there next week after I get back from New York."
     
     
    "Perfect" is what Larissa thought the minute Trey uttered those words.
     
     
    L: "Ohhhh ok. Sounds good. Well I'll let you get back to work bae, we can just Skype later on tonight."
     
    T: "Aight. You gonna get naked for me?" *laughs*
     
    L: "Ugghhh? Hush! This ain't one of your lil freaky videos." *chuckles*
     
    T: *laughs* Aight later baby. I love you. Muaahhh!"
     
    L: "I love you too. Muaahhh!"
     
     
    Larissa hatched he plan into action. She searched for flights and booked her ticket.
    She also rented a 2010 Camaro to get her around Atlanta while she was in town.
     
    She went shopping, got her hair and nails done, and took the initiative of stopping
    by Victoria's Secret to pick up some sexy underwear and lingerie.
    Larissa had to make sure she was on her A game, since she hadn't seen Trey in so long.
     
     
    *** THE NEXT WEEK ***
     
    The day had arrived, Larissa took a cab to the airport for her flight to Atlanta.
    She was excited, anxious, and nervous all at the same time.
    Since this was gonna be a surprise, she was hoping everything would fall into place perfectly.
     
     
    Larissa went through all the airport security checks,
    and got on her flight. She took her seat by the window,
    and looked outside as the plane was taking off.
     
     
     
    L: "Trey I hope you're ready for me baby ... ATL here I come."
     
     
    After a couple of hours Larissa finally landed in Atlanta.
    She got her bags, took a taxi, and headed to the car rental place.
     
    She paid the driver and went inside to pick the Camaro up she had rented for the week.
    The associate handed her the keys, and helped her put her bags inside the car.
     
    A (Associate): "Hope you enjoy the car Ms. Barnes.
    If you have any problems please don't hesitate to call."
     
    L: "Thank you so much and I will. See you in a week." *smiles*
     
    A: "Have a great day."
     
    L: "Thanks, you too."
     
     
    Larissa speeds off and heads towards the highway.
    It felt like the longest drive of her life,
    but Trey's condo was only 15 minutes away.
     
     
    She finally reached the front entrance of the condo and had her car valeted.
    Trey had given Larissa a spare key and had her name on list of contacts downstairs,
    in case of emergencies.
    So she was all set, she grabbed her bags and headed upstairs.
     
     
    Larissa finally got to Trey's floor, she tried to keep as quiet as possible.
    She got to Tremaine's door and quietly turned the key and opened it.
    She drug her bags in quietly behind her and left them behind the door,
    and slowly shut the door behind her.
     
     
    Larissa started heading towards Trey's bedroom, she paused and listened.
    She heard sounds coming from the room.
    She walked closer and closer towards his bedroom door,
    only for the sounds to get louder and louder.
     
     
    Larissa slowly creaked opened the door and spotted Trey laying on his back
    with a dark haired latina on top of him.
    She couldn't believe it, after everything they had been through,
    Trey had been creeping around on her.
     
     
    Tears began to well up in her eyes as she watched the man
    she loved make love to another woman.
     
     
    (Larissa burst the door open)
     
     
    L: "TREMAINE!!! What the fuck is going on here???
    After everything we've been through, you do this to me???"
     
     
    Trey was dumbfounded, he threw the girl off of him,
    grabbed his robe and ran over to Larissa.
     
     
     
    T: "Baby ... I ... Please ... Just hear me out..."
     
    L: "I don't wanna hear shit you have to say Tremaine!!!
    I don't even know who you are anymore.
    This is definitely not the man I fell in love with."
     
    T: "LARISSA!!! Baby ... Just let me explain!!"
     
    L: "Explain what???!! I walk in here to surprise my man only to find him
    in bed fuckin' some trashy ass slut???"
     
     
    Larissa had murder in her eyes as she looked at the homewrecking woman.
     
     
    L: "You better get her out of here before I throw that bitch over the balcony!!!"
     
    T: "Just get out of here! LEAVE!!"
     
     
     
    Mistress gathers her clothing and walks past Larissa and Trey.
     
     
     
    Mistress (M): *Looks at Larissa*
    "Maybe if you were doing your job at home none of this would've happened!"
    *smirk on face*
     
     
    (Larissa gets in her face)
     
     
     
    L: "Listen here you low class, worthless, quick to get on your knees ass bitch! I will..."
     
     

    (Trey seperates them and looks at the other woman...)
     
     

    T: "Just get out man!!! FUCK!!"
     
    M: "Yea whateva! You'll be back ... I'm leaving!"
     
     
    (Mistress exits Trey's condo, and he goes over to lock the door)
     
     
    T: "Wait wait, wait! Baby we gotta talk! PLEASE!"
     
    L: "Trey there is NOTHING you can tell me at this point,
    I loved you with all my heart and soul.
    I just can't believe this shit!!!"
     
    T: "Baby just..."
     
    L: "Noooooo! Fuck you! It's OVER! Don't contact me, don't have your people contact me,
    act like I never existed! You're dead to me!"
     
    (Trey blocks the door and tries to hold Larissa)
     
    L: "Get your hands off of me!!! *slaps him*
    I don't know who else you been touchin, suckin, or fuckin!
    NOW MOVE!"
     

    Trey decided not to fight it anymore, she let her go through the door.
    He knew he MESSED up. The love of his life was about to walk out of his life ... FOR GOOD.
    He knew he couldn't live without her, so he chased her all the way downstairs.
     

    By the time he reached the lobby, Larissa had already thrown her bags in the back of her car.
     
    T: "LARISSA!!! Wait baby please! DON'T GO! I NEED YOU!"
     
    L: "Goodbye Tremaine! It was fun while it lasted..."
     
     
    (Larissa presses the gas and speeds off into the night...)
     
     
    Trey was left there standing all alone with a teardrop falling down his cheek.
    His love was now lost...

     

    Click Link for Part 6: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/all-the-ifs-part-6

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Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture
on Oct 18, 2010 - 06:32PM

*** TWO MONTHS AFTER ***
 
Two whole months had passed since Trey and Larissa had seen each other.
They tried to keep in contact as much as possible,
but with their hectic schedules the calls and texts were becoming less and less evident.
 
Even though business was booming for Larissa,
she couldn't help but miss Tremaine.
She sat at her desk and reminisced about his smile,
his eyes, his soft lips, and the way he made her feel.
 
So Larissa decided to plan a one week trip to surprise Trey in Atlanta.
A visit to see the love of her life was LONG overdue.
But she still had to have a talk with him,
just to make sure that he would be in the ATL at that time,
so her planned wouldn't be foiled.
 
So she called up Trey and started up a conversation...
 
 
**Phone Rings twice**
 
 
T: "Hey baby. What's up?"
 
L: "Hey. Nothing much. You ran across my mind, so I decided to give you a call."
 
T: "Awww! Really? Damn I miss you. It's been wayyy too long."
 
L: "I know it has. And I miss you too love."
 
T: "I heard business has been off the charts for you lately. Congrats."
 
L: "Yes. It's been incredible."
 
T: "I'm so proud of you baby."
 
L: "Awwww! Thank you. You haven't been doing so bad yourself. Congrats on your recent endorsements."
 
T: "Thank you sweetheart. I appreciate it."
 
L: "So what do you have planned for the upcoming week?"
 
T: "Ummm... Got a couple of magazine and radio interviews lined up that I gotta take of."
 
L: "Oh ok. Will you be in Atlanta?"
 
T: "Yea. I'll be there next week after I get back from New York."
 
 
"Perfect" is what Larissa thought the minute Trey uttered those words.
 
 
L: "Ohhhh ok. Sounds good. Well I'll let you get back to work bae, we can just Skype later on tonight."
 
T: "Aight. You gonna get naked for me?" *laughs*
 
L: "Ugghhh? Hush! This ain't one of your lil freaky videos." *chuckles*
 
T: *laughs* Aight later baby. I love you. Muaahhh!"
 
L: "I love you too. Muaahhh!"
 
 
Larissa hatched he plan into action. She searched for flights and booked her ticket.
She also rented a 2010 Camaro to get her around Atlanta while she was in town.
 
She went shopping, got her hair and nails done, and took the initiative of stopping
by Victoria's Secret to pick up some sexy underwear and lingerie.
Larissa had to make sure she was on her A game, since she hadn't seen Trey in so long.
 
 
*** THE NEXT WEEK ***
 
The day had arrived, Larissa took a cab to the airport for her flight to Atlanta.
She was excited, anxious, and nervous all at the same time.
Since this was gonna be a surprise, she was hoping everything would fall into place perfectly.
 
 
Larissa went through all the airport security checks,
and got on her flight. She took her seat by the window,
and looked outside as the plane was taking off.
 
 
 
L: "Trey I hope you're ready for me baby ... ATL here I come."
 
 
After a couple of hours Larissa finally landed in Atlanta.
She got her bags, took a taxi, and headed to the car rental place.
 
She paid the driver and went inside to pick the Camaro up she had rented for the week.
The associate handed her the keys, and helped her put her bags inside the car.
 
A (Associate): "Hope you enjoy the car Ms. Barnes.
If you have any problems please don't hesitate to call."
 
L: "Thank you so much and I will. See you in a week." *smiles*
 
A: "Have a great day."
 
L: "Thanks, you too."
 
 
Larissa speeds off and heads towards the highway.
It felt like the longest drive of her life,
but Trey's condo was only 15 minutes away.
 
 
She finally reached the front entrance of the condo and had her car valeted.
Trey had given Larissa a spare key and had her name on list of contacts downstairs,
in case of emergencies.
So she was all set, she grabbed her bags and headed upstairs.
 
 
Larissa finally got to Trey's floor, she tried to keep as quiet as possible.
She got to Tremaine's door and quietly turned the key and opened it.
She drug her bags in quietly behind her and left them behind the door,
and slowly shut the door behind her.
 
 
Larissa started heading towards Trey's bedroom, she paused and listened.
She heard sounds coming from the room.
She walked closer and closer towards his bedroom door,
only for the sounds to get louder and louder.
 
 
Larissa slowly creaked opened the door and spotted Trey laying on his back
with a dark haired latina on top of him.
She couldn't believe it, after everything they had been through,
Trey had been creeping around on her.
 
 
Tears began to well up in her eyes as she watched the man
she loved make love to another woman.
 
 
(Larissa burst the door open)
 
 
L: "TREMAINE!!! What the fuck is going on here???
After everything we've been through, you do this to me???"
 
 
Trey was dumbfounded, he threw the girl off of him,
grabbed his robe and ran over to Larissa.
 
 
 
T: "Baby ... I ... Please ... Just hear me out..."
 
L: "I don't wanna hear shit you have to say Tremaine!!!
I don't even know who you are anymore.
This is definitely not the man I fell in love with."
 
T: "LARISSA!!! Baby ... Just let me explain!!"
 
L: "Explain what???!! I walk in here to surprise my man only to find him
in bed fuckin' some trashy ass slut???"
 
 
Larissa had murder in her eyes as she looked at the homewrecking woman.
 
 
L: "You better get her out of here before I throw that bitch over the balcony!!!"
 
T: "Just get out of here! LEAVE!!"
 
 
 
Mistress gathers her clothing and walks past Larissa and Trey.
 
 
 
Mistress (M): *Looks at Larissa*
"Maybe if you were doing your job at home none of this would've happened!"
*smirk on face*
 
 
(Larissa gets in her face)
 
 
 
L: "Listen here you low class, worthless, quick to get on your knees ass bitch! I will..."
 
 

(Trey seperates them and looks at the other woman...)
 
 

T: "Just get out man!!! FUCK!!"
 
M: "Yea whateva! You'll be back ... I'm leaving!"
 
 
(Mistress exits Trey's condo, and he goes over to lock the door)
 
 
T: "Wait wait, wait! Baby we gotta talk! PLEASE!"
 
L: "Trey there is NOTHING you can tell me at this point,
I loved you with all my heart and soul.
I just can't believe this shit!!!"
 
T: "Baby just..."
 
L: "Noooooo! Fuck you! It's OVER! Don't contact me, don't have your people contact me,
act like I never existed! You're dead to me!"
 
(Trey blocks the door and tries to hold Larissa)
 
L: "Get your hands off of me!!! *slaps him*
I don't know who else you been touchin, suckin, or fuckin!
NOW MOVE!"
 

Trey decided not to fight it anymore, she let her go through the door.
He knew he MESSED up. The love of his life was about to walk out of his life ... FOR GOOD.
He knew he couldn't live without her, so he chased her all the way downstairs.
 

By the time he reached the lobby, Larissa had already thrown her bags in the back of her car.
 
T: "LARISSA!!! Wait baby please! DON'T GO! I NEED YOU!"
 
L: "Goodbye Tremaine! It was fun while it lasted..."
 
 
(Larissa presses the gas and speeds off into the night...)
 
 
Trey was left there standing all alone with a teardrop falling down his cheek.
His love was now lost...

 

Click Link for Part 6: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/all-the-ifs-part-6

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Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Thanks! =)

AriellBigg's picture

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

ladyt1980's picture

wonderful keeps getting betta!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

=)

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

Yeh!!! Bout to read it now!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Its up now... lol!

RITTALUV's picture

@shay_yuuup wheres part 6 at?!?!?!?!? lol i cant wait to read it!!

RITTALUV's picture

omg i cant wait!!

JesusIsMySavior's picture

I guess I can stay up that long. LOL

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

I should be done by 10:30!

JesusIsMySavior's picture

Lord I hope I'm up when you post it. :)

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Part 6 will be up 2night! =)

KA-LEE-YA...KALEYIA's picture

*cries* wtf?????? omg i cnt wait to part 6

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lmao! U should do dat.

RITTALUV's picture

omg i cant wait!! ill b waiting for it lol i guess i should do some schoolwork before u post it lol ehh nahh lol

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Chapter 6 will be up 2night! Be on the lookout ladies! :-)

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Chapter 6 I still havent gotten to yet! :-(

JesusIsMySavior's picture

LOL I know :(

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lmao! I cant give away too much...

JesusIsMySavior's picture

Dang thanks for stopping it here. LOL

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lol! Sorry...

Anmariee_1ofTrey'sFinest's picture

you got me in suspense....urrrrrgghhh

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Part 6 will be up 2morrow! :-)

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lmao! Girl you know I cant give away too much! And yes I'm not quite done with this story yet so I'll keep goin til its complete... lol!

WhitneyDesiree''s picture

KEEP ON GOIN!!!!!!

SexySagLuvSongz's picture

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! WHY YOU LEAVE ME HANGIN' LIKIE THAT???? Like everybody said though.....you can't just pop up on a man like that. Especially if it's Trey AND it's been 2 whole months since you seen him....uh unhhhh......she should have told him before she got there or called when she landed. But I know it had to hurt still......man I can't wait until part 6!!!!!!!!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lmao! Thanks girls! Yea I wanted to make the characters as real as possible. Lol!

VirgoBrnEyez's picture

I love it. Girl you got some talent. You made Trey exactly what he is, a man who is not perfect We just wish he was. Most men have dog tendecies anyway. Oh girl shoulda knew better, LOL!!! Keep it coming.

@LadyAJ03's picture

Nice...I knew this ish was gon' get super interesting...Rissa don't play LOL

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lol! Everyone said da same thing.

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