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  • ALL THE IFS (PART 7) (CONCLUSION)
    October 20, 2010

    ***  THE NEXT DAY ***
     
    Larissa knew her heart was with Trey,
    but she just couldn't bring herself to hurt Damon.
    Damon was there with her through all the pain and heartache,
    so she felt obligated to stay with him.
     
    Last night kept replaying over and over again in her mind,
    how right it felt being with Trey ... like how they used to be.
    But she convinced herself that they could never be that again.
     
    Larissa drug herself out of bed and got ready for work.
    She had a feeling today was going to be a really long day.
     
    She could barely focus on work because
    all she had on her mind was this dilemma.
    Who to choose? The man she cared for deeply, Damon.
    Or the man who always had her heart, Trey.
     
    She was in a world of her own until she heard a familiar voice
    calling her name...
     
    Crystal (C) (Co-Worker): "Larissa ... Larissa!
    Can you sign off on this paperwork for me?"
     
    Larissa snaps out of her train of thought and replies...
     
    L: "Oh! Sorry about that. Sure... Just leave them on my desk."
     
    C: "Ok. Are you alright? You don't seem like your usual self."
     
    L: "Oh it's nothing. Just got some things on my mind."
     
    Crystal goes to shut the door...
     
    C: "C'mon now ... Dish!"
     
    Larissa explains about the whole situation,
    and the hard decision she had to make.
     
    C: "Sheeeesh! That's quite a story there Larissa.
    But I see where you're coming from."
     
    L: "Either way, whatever decision I make is gonna change my life."
     
    C: "Ultimately it's up to you, but what you need to do is pray and let God guide your decision."
     
    L: "Yes you're right." *sighs*
    "Thanks for the pep talk Crystal"
     
    C: "Your welcome. You have my number if you need anything."
     
    L: "Thanks." *smiles*
     
     
    Larissa finished up all her paperwork and decided to head home a little early.
    She grabbed her belongings and headed out the door.
    She sped off in her Porsche truck and headed towards the highway.
    She intended to have a nice, calm, and stress free night to herself.
     
    She ran a bubble bath, lit some candles, and put on a slow jamz mix.
    She knew she needed some relaxation.
    She slipped out of her robe and entered the tub.
     
    She took about an hour of relaxation in the tub, then got out.
    She dried off, put on something sexy, and popped open a bottle of bubbly.
    As she sat down on the couch she couldn't help but hear music...
     
    She got up and heard the sound coming from outside her door.
    Larissa slowly walked over towards the door, the song sounded really familiar.
    She got closer and realized she recognized the voice.
    It was Trey!
     
    She slowly opened the door, and Trey continued to sing...
     
    T: "I wish that I could run that back
    But in life you can't press rewind
    'Cause the only way to fix this thang
    Is to go back in time
    'Cause if I had my wayyyyy
    Yesterday would be right now
    Instead of fighting we'd be making love
    Until the sun go down

    It's like my sun won't shine
    It's like my ride don't roll
    It's like the only one thing I love
    Dont love me no more.
    It's like my right gone wrong
    It's like my ice gone warm
    Cause the only one thing I love
    Dont love me no more.

    If I hadn't a slacked up on my pimping
    You'd be here with me
    If I'd a stayed instead of dipping
    You'd still be here with me
    If I'd a prayed instead of wishing
    You'd still be here with me
    But all the ifs in the world won't bring you back again.."
     
     
    Larissa was in tears at that point, she couldn't believe it.
    As she listened to him sing she realized the answer
    was standing right in front of her.
     
    She LOVED Trey, and that moment said it all.

    Larissa jumped into Trey's arms and kissed him.
    This had been the love she had been waiting for all her life.
     
    L: "Trey I'm sorry for this rollercoaster I've been putting you through..."
     
    T: "Baby. Don't blame yourself. My stupidity is what brought us here to this point.
    But all that matters is that we're back ... And closer than ever. Larissa I LOVE YOU"
     
    (Trey looks Larissa deeply into her eyes)
     
    L: "I LOVE YOU TOO. Always and forever."
     
    Trey and Larissa embraced each other and never let each other go.
    It felt like that very moment was frozen in time.
     
    *** THE NEXT DAY ***
     
    Larissa decided to go over to Damon's house and break the news to him.
    She was sitting in her car trying to build the courage to face him...
     
    L: "Ok Larissa. You gotta do this.
    Just swallow your pride and go knock on his door..."
     
    (Larissa gets out of the car and walks up to Damon's door)
     
    ** Rings doorbell **
     
    (Damon opens the door)
     
    D: "Hey love! What's up?"
     
    (Gives her a hug)
     
    L: "Hey Damon.... Ummmm... I need to talk to you."
     
    D: "Wow... Sounds serious. Come in."
     
    (They both go over and sit on the couch)
     
    L: "Look... This is already hard enough as it is, so I'm just gonna say it.
    You know I really love and care about you, but I can't keep leading you on.
    I'm in love with someone else."
     
    (Damon's smile turned to shock)
     
    D: "WHAT??? So you come over here to tell me everything we had was a lie?"
     
    L: "No not at all, I've enjoyed every moment with you.
    But I can't keep putting my feelings aside, I have to be truthful to myself."
     
    D: *shakes his head* "Wooooow... Well I guess there's nothing else to say,
    looks like you've already made you're decision."
     
    L: "Damon... I'm so sorry."
     
    D: "I don't need you feeling guilty for me. Just do you, and I'll do me.
    Goodbye Larissa. You know the way out."
     
    (Damon leaves Larissa sitting on the couch,
    and Larissa walks over to the door and let's herself out.)
     
     
    Larissa headed over to Trey's hotel room to let him
    know that she finally had broken it off with Damon.
     
     
    (Larissa knocks on Trey's door, moments later he opens it)
     
     
    T: "Baby! What's up?"
     
     
    (Gives her a hug and kiss)
     
     
    L: "Nothing I just came back from Damon's house."
     
    T: "Oh yea? And what happened? He ain't touch you right??"
     
    L: "No. Not at all. But I did break things off with him."
     
    T: "Finally! Now I can have you all to myself!"
     
    (Trey picks up Larissa and spins her around)
     
    T: "I love you so much. And I'm glad you're hear to stay."
     
    L: "Always and forever baby..."
     
    (Trey and Larissa kiss)
     
    T: "Now it's time for daddy to give you the business." *winks*
     
    L: "You gotta catch me first..." *smiles*
     
    (She runs to the bedroom and Trey runs after her)
     
     
    THE END.

    By: Sherriann aka Shay

     
    After "All The Ifs", love bonded Trey and Larissa back together. =)

     

    So ANGELS what did ya'll think of my first story? Should I do more?

    Feedback please... =)

    I also need an ANGEL name any suggestions???

     ( Follow me @shay_bae89 and @TreysAngels914 )

     

    Check out the link to my new series "Treycapades": http://www.treysongz.com/talk/new-treycapades-1-the-restaurant/
     

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Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture
on Oct 20, 2010 - 10:38PM

***  THE NEXT DAY ***
 
Larissa knew her heart was with Trey,
but she just couldn't bring herself to hurt Damon.
Damon was there with her through all the pain and heartache,
so she felt obligated to stay with him.
 
Last night kept replaying over and over again in her mind,
how right it felt being with Trey ... like how they used to be.
But she convinced herself that they could never be that again.
 
Larissa drug herself out of bed and got ready for work.
She had a feeling today was going to be a really long day.
 
She could barely focus on work because
all she had on her mind was this dilemma.
Who to choose? The man she cared for deeply, Damon.
Or the man who always had her heart, Trey.
 
She was in a world of her own until she heard a familiar voice
calling her name...
 
Crystal (C) (Co-Worker): "Larissa ... Larissa!
Can you sign off on this paperwork for me?"
 
Larissa snaps out of her train of thought and replies...
 
L: "Oh! Sorry about that. Sure... Just leave them on my desk."
 
C: "Ok. Are you alright? You don't seem like your usual self."
 
L: "Oh it's nothing. Just got some things on my mind."
 
Crystal goes to shut the door...
 
C: "C'mon now ... Dish!"
 
Larissa explains about the whole situation,
and the hard decision she had to make.
 
C: "Sheeeesh! That's quite a story there Larissa.
But I see where you're coming from."
 
L: "Either way, whatever decision I make is gonna change my life."
 
C: "Ultimately it's up to you, but what you need to do is pray and let God guide your decision."
 
L: "Yes you're right." *sighs*
"Thanks for the pep talk Crystal"
 
C: "Your welcome. You have my number if you need anything."
 
L: "Thanks." *smiles*
 
 
Larissa finished up all her paperwork and decided to head home a little early.
She grabbed her belongings and headed out the door.
She sped off in her Porsche truck and headed towards the highway.
She intended to have a nice, calm, and stress free night to herself.
 
She ran a bubble bath, lit some candles, and put on a slow jamz mix.
She knew she needed some relaxation.
She slipped out of her robe and entered the tub.
 
She took about an hour of relaxation in the tub, then got out.
She dried off, put on something sexy, and popped open a bottle of bubbly.
As she sat down on the couch she couldn't help but hear music...
 
She got up and heard the sound coming from outside her door.
Larissa slowly walked over towards the door, the song sounded really familiar.
She got closer and realized she recognized the voice.
It was Trey!
 
She slowly opened the door, and Trey continued to sing...
 
T: "I wish that I could run that back
But in life you can't press rewind
'Cause the only way to fix this thang
Is to go back in time
'Cause if I had my wayyyyy
Yesterday would be right now
Instead of fighting we'd be making love
Until the sun go down

It's like my sun won't shine
It's like my ride don't roll
It's like the only one thing I love
Dont love me no more.
It's like my right gone wrong
It's like my ice gone warm
Cause the only one thing I love
Dont love me no more.

If I hadn't a slacked up on my pimping
You'd be here with me
If I'd a stayed instead of dipping
You'd still be here with me
If I'd a prayed instead of wishing
You'd still be here with me
But all the ifs in the world won't bring you back again.."
 
 
Larissa was in tears at that point, she couldn't believe it.
As she listened to him sing she realized the answer
was standing right in front of her.
 
She LOVED Trey, and that moment said it all.

Larissa jumped into Trey's arms and kissed him.
This had been the love she had been waiting for all her life.
 
L: "Trey I'm sorry for this rollercoaster I've been putting you through..."
 
T: "Baby. Don't blame yourself. My stupidity is what brought us here to this point.
But all that matters is that we're back ... And closer than ever. Larissa I LOVE YOU"
 
(Trey looks Larissa deeply into her eyes)
 
L: "I LOVE YOU TOO. Always and forever."
 
Trey and Larissa embraced each other and never let each other go.
It felt like that very moment was frozen in time.
 
*** THE NEXT DAY ***
 
Larissa decided to go over to Damon's house and break the news to him.
She was sitting in her car trying to build the courage to face him...
 
L: "Ok Larissa. You gotta do this.
Just swallow your pride and go knock on his door..."
 
(Larissa gets out of the car and walks up to Damon's door)
 
** Rings doorbell **
 
(Damon opens the door)
 
D: "Hey love! What's up?"
 
(Gives her a hug)
 
L: "Hey Damon.... Ummmm... I need to talk to you."
 
D: "Wow... Sounds serious. Come in."
 
(They both go over and sit on the couch)
 
L: "Look... This is already hard enough as it is, so I'm just gonna say it.
You know I really love and care about you, but I can't keep leading you on.
I'm in love with someone else."
 
(Damon's smile turned to shock)
 
D: "WHAT??? So you come over here to tell me everything we had was a lie?"
 
L: "No not at all, I've enjoyed every moment with you.
But I can't keep putting my feelings aside, I have to be truthful to myself."
 
D: *shakes his head* "Wooooow... Well I guess there's nothing else to say,
looks like you've already made you're decision."
 
L: "Damon... I'm so sorry."
 
D: "I don't need you feeling guilty for me. Just do you, and I'll do me.
Goodbye Larissa. You know the way out."
 
(Damon leaves Larissa sitting on the couch,
and Larissa walks over to the door and let's herself out.)
 
 
Larissa headed over to Trey's hotel room to let him
know that she finally had broken it off with Damon.
 
 
(Larissa knocks on Trey's door, moments later he opens it)
 
 
T: "Baby! What's up?"
 
 
(Gives her a hug and kiss)
 
 
L: "Nothing I just came back from Damon's house."
 
T: "Oh yea? And what happened? He ain't touch you right??"
 
L: "No. Not at all. But I did break things off with him."
 
T: "Finally! Now I can have you all to myself!"
 
(Trey picks up Larissa and spins her around)
 
T: "I love you so much. And I'm glad you're hear to stay."
 
L: "Always and forever baby..."
 
(Trey and Larissa kiss)
 
T: "Now it's time for daddy to give you the business." *winks*
 
L: "You gotta catch me first..." *smiles*
 
(She runs to the bedroom and Trey runs after her)
 
 
THE END.

By: Sherriann aka Shay

 
After "All The Ifs", love bonded Trey and Larissa back together. =)

 

So ANGELS what did ya'll think of my first story? Should I do more?

Feedback please... =)

I also need an ANGEL name any suggestions???

 ( Follow me @shay_bae89 and @TreysAngels914 )

 

Check out the link to my new series "Treycapades": http://www.treysongz.com/talk/new-treycapades-1-the-restaurant/
 

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Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Thank u sooooooo much sis @ Lex!
=)

juicycouture_princess10@yahoo.co's picture

sisterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr i love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Thank u soooo much! :-)

SimplyNoni's picture

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was crying smiling laughing ooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh the emotions i loved this story so much!!!!!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Damn @TreyzOnlyAngel I didnt get to follow you yet! I'm gonna do dat 2day!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Thanks @ladytangel! That's exactly how I want my stories to be, as realistic as possible. I know I cant be in Trey's mind, but listening to some of his interviews let's me know what to write! :-) And I love his interviews very entertaining! lol!

ladyt1980's picture

they r wonderful. 2 much talent. all of u angels r great w/ these stories. it seems yall have really captured who tremaine is and who trey is.

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Ok! When I get on I'll follow you! :-)

TreyzRAREAngel's picture

For some reason I cant find you so if you can find me follow me! @TreyzRAREAngel!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lol! Dats why I post the link of da next part at da bottom of each of my parts so people can just move to da next without hassle! :-)

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

@shay_yuuup - when you doing the next one? I'm going to wait a while - I think the threads are booming with fan fictions. I personally start getting confused...I be on part 2 of someone's story, part 3 of someone else's & then part 1 of someone else...I gotta keep going back reading the last story so I can remember what happened. Too much damn work. I'll wait a bit until the threads clear up.

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Awwwwww! Thanks @Barbie!
I'll be starting on da next one soon!

PRETTY_BLACKGIRL's picture

THIS WAS VERY CREATIVE!!!!! I LOVE IT AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK......I'M ALL READY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT ONE :-)

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

@shay_bae89

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

My handle is @shay_bae89! Follow me.

TreyzRAREAngel's picture

Im glad u came up with the idea for your next story. But I got one that is off the charts. How can I contact u? Whats your Twitter hanger so I can DM you?

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

I've been brainstorming and came up with an idea for da next story! :-)

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Thanks @JesusIsMySavior! :-)
@TreyzOnlyAngel Love those suggestions! :-) And dat would be great just let me know. Why aren't u confident enough? U should! I wasnt either! lol!

TreyzRAREAngel's picture

PoeticAngel or Million$Angel because the way you write, you need to do more stories on here but you may just need to do them for yourself because you could make some money! If you wanna do a collaborative storytelling I got some ideas I can throw at you! I wrote a couple myself. Im not confident enough to post them yet though lol.

JesusIsMySavior's picture

Well I wouldn't have thought it was your first fan fiction. Nope not bad at all.

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

I will just brainstorming for now! And thank you! :-)

Ashley_Natelie's picture

ii loved it! Great First story... you do another one...

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lmao! Thanks @JesusIsMySavior! Its my first fan fiction story! I dont think I did dat bad! :-) And Thank you @Anmariee :-)

JesusIsMySavior's picture

I tell you those that have been posting stories have me wanting to write. But I know my stories would be tame compared to what has been posted. :)

Anmariee_1ofTrey'sFinest's picture

I LOVED IT!!!!

JesusIsMySavior's picture

Is this the first story you ever wrote?

I loved this story. Please continue to write. You are a very good writer.

I thought when you mentioned always and forever I thought you were going to have Trey bust a line or two from that song. LOL

I'm happy you didn't make Damon a nutcase. LOL

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

If you have any ideas for my next story let me know here or on Twitter!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Awwwwwww! Your comment just made my day @mii_sunflower! Thanks. I'm not goin to school for writing, I'm goin for law. But writing has always been a strong skill of mine since Elementary. Been winning writing contests since 1st grade, so its sort of like a hobby for right now. :-)

mii_sunflower's picture

ok shay-yuuup i loved ur story i printed it out cause i was at work and i just had to read it WOW i fell in love with it so much i just knew you was going to school to be a writter. the best part was the end when trey was singing i cryed the story was great even if we didnt know trey just a great love story all together. BEST STORY YET. please write more and thanks for this sorty u really did good ! #STATUESQUEANGEL

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Thanks @ Lashawnda! I need some brainstorm ideas! Any suggestions ladies for the next story?

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