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    October 21, 2010

    Okay Angels, this is my first Trey Tale, Sorry if it’s too long. I want to get some feedback to see what you ladies think. I am open to any criticism.

     

    Keep in mind I am writing this as if I am Trey, so it’s from His point of view!

     

     

    FIRST DATE SEX

     

     

    I wake up to the sound of my alarm going off at 6am, and as I go to move, I feel as though I am strapped to the mattress of my own hotel room. “Damn” I think to myself as I look around to witness the fact that I have three fine ass half naked women weighing me down. I couldn’t help but to smile while thoughts of me being `the mothafuckin man` ran crazy in my mind. “When am I going to stop this madness” I think inside as I attempt to detangle myself from this love safari. I’m nasty, so the first thought in my mind is what exactly I did to these women? This shit was really looking like the “Sex Room” video that I shot with Luda just a couple months back. When I attempted to sit up,  shawty to the left of me, wrapped her arm around my neck squeezing me like a teddy bear  saying “don’t go baby” all with her eyes still closed. Damn she strong for her to still be sleeping. Apparently I needed help with this. I didn’t want to wake them though. I was not in the mood for them to be begging me to stay there longer and I honestly didn’t know ANY of there names. I strained my right arm as far as I could and it gave me just enough leeway to reach my Blackberry off the nightstand. I sent a quick text to Alonzo that read “Help Lol Smiley Face”. He used his hotel key to come in. He came in with a smile from ear to ear that made me smile back. I kind of shrugged my shoulders with a devilish grin as I signaled to him to be as quiet as possible not to wake the girls, but at the same time, get them off of me!

                He did just that as I escaped down the hallway as smooth as I could, almost naked. The only things on my body were my Rocawear briefs and socks. I felt real dirty, but that is what happens when you a freak like me. When I look down at myself, I was feigning for a shower. I don’t know why this became so amusing to me, but I couldn’t help but say “damm I wild” as I headed to in the washroom. I heard one of the girls say “where’s Trey?” which made me feel a little guilty for running off like that, but I had work and I’m sure they did too.

     

    After the coast was clear, when Alonzo called out to me that everybody left, I went inside the bathroom to get myself together. I had a radio interview at Hot97 at 8, autograph signing at 10:30 than to top it off, I had my date with the radio winner of “Win a date with Trey: Trey Date” that evening. I was hoping that she would be a little more normal or at least down to earth out of all the other females that won a date with me in the past. I mean it’s cool to be a fan, but since I actually take my time out to show these young ladies a good time, I would for once, like the date to be interesting you know? Like, have something more on your mind than “I love you Sooo Much” I know that already baby, that’s why you here. Anyway, I took off my briefs to step in the shower. As I looked at them, I decided to just toss em’. I wasn’t even gonna try to wear them again. I looked down at my dick, smiled cause I’m blessed, and told him he was finna get me in some shit that I couldn’t escape one day Fo Sho! I turned on the water to a good temperature than I stepped inside. At that moment I start thinking of the movie Coming to America how that nigga Eddie Murphy didn’t even have to wash his own self up. I wondered if I would ever be that fortunate. Than I thought on second hand, that is some lazy shit. I turned around with my back to the shower as I felt a stinging pain shoot across it. I opened the shower door, to see if I could see the mirror from here, when I did, I seen a big ass scratch across my back, Shit, shawty dug her nails deep. She was trying to remove my tattoo I thought smiling. I bet she ain’t go as deep as me though. I pondered for a minute which one of the three did it before I came up with the conclusion that it was the light skinned thick one. She looked like a freak too. I gotta make sure this is covered, I thought.  My confidence level was boosted once again. “Is it illegal to have an ego the size of Pluto, when I know that I’m flyer than any guy that you know?” I rapped to myself as I stepped out the shower reaching for my towel. I brushed my teeth, threw some lotion on, than put on some Armani cologne. For the ladies of course, to help get em moist. HAHA

     

    Since I had my radio interview up first, I figured I would just throw on my gray RocaWear sweat suit with the blue piping with some Air Forces. My stylist can get me dressed up right later on, I thougt to myself. I walked out the bathroom heading down the hall, looking at my watch. Damn, its 7:15, I don’t have time to sit and eat. I’m hungry as shit. In front room was my assistant Gutta and Lonzo was playing Madden 2011. These two had a thing for gambling over these games at any giving time. If they could play these jawns in the car I know they would. “Leggooo” I told them, “I’m not tryna be late to this jawn, that’s not a good look”. I grabbed a quick snack out the fridge, and decided to throw on some Gucci shades to try and disguise myself a little bit. Noise in the street is dope, but it gets on a nigga nerves sometimes. I love my fans and all my angels, but a nigga need a day where I can just cut the phone off and just look at the water. I dropped a hundred dollar tip on the bed for whoever did the housekeeping because she was going to be cleaning this room for the whole day. Hot 97 here I comeI said as me and the crew left the hotel.

                                                               

                                                    After the Interview at Hot 97

               

    The Hot 97 interview was dope. A lot of shawty’s was asking me about Lauren London though. I can’t answer that. We supposed to be talking about Passion Pain & Pleasure and they all in my personal life. It’s cool though. I guess that’s what comes with the territory. I tell em like this I “let all ride, I was wit everybody. If you say it than that’s what it is.” Everybody was mainly asking me to follow them on Twitter though. Lol “No problem baby I got you, I definitely got you” I told them.

     

    I am now on my way to my autograph signing, but first a nigga needs some thing to eat. We stop at some chicken spot to get me some chicken fingers real quick. There were about three or four females who recognized me and ran up to me screaming, “OMG your Trey Songz”, “Tremaine I love you”, “Can I have a picture with you” the whole nine. I thought to myself Damn; I guess the Gucci’s didn’t work. I acknowledged them all, took a quick group pic with them and a solo pic with the girl who I think told me her name was “Ticia”. I gotta do a lot better with names I thought. Anyway, she had on a Trey’s Angel tee with the charm bracelet, so I had to show her extra love because I knew she was angel. She said she was on the way to the signing, and even though she just met me out here, she was STILL going to wait in that long ass line. That’s shows much love for ya boy.

     

    When we got the singing, it was packed! I can’t even begin to guess how many people were there. I loved it though. That’s what makes me who I am. I was set up at the table to face all the people that were here for me. I saw Trey’s Angel Tee shirts, banners, cameras flashing at me, and there were over 1000 people screaming for me. I have seen it all. Passion, Pain & Pleasure: Love Faces was playing…..I heard my voice coming from the speakers”My hands rubbing on your skin, lets go hard don’t hold it in, Love Faces” as one the managers got on the microphone and said “make sure you take your CD covers out of your CDs” I began signing and showing all my fans how much I loved them

     

                                                    Later That Evening

     

                Back at the hotel I decided to take a little rest to be fully prepared for my date this evening. When I got up, I was thinking I gotta change clothes man; I hit up my stylist Rebecca Alexis, to see what she had planned for me to wear that night.  I told her I didn’t want to Red Carpet Fresh, but I also didn’t want to be RocaWear sweat suit relaxed. I wanted let this young lady know that I had class, but I wanted her to be comfortable and maybe if she seen me in my comfort zone, she would relax more and be herself. Anyway Becca said she just went with something from the RocaWear Campaign. She went with the Octane Jean, Benelli Plaid Shirt, with the Acknowledge Jacket. On my feet she picked a pair of Dior Homme calf leather sneakers, and of course she put a little Marc Jacob on the wrist. I told her that was dope, so I decided to relax for a little while longer until it was time for me to get Ready. No pun intended. I was on Twitter for about a half an hour. I was about to sign off to hop in the shower than I noticed an interested tweet. Her twitter handle was TashNTrey. Her tweet said, “At the end of @Treysongz commercial my 2 yr old said….Yuuup!” I retweeted that, signed out than preceded to get dressed.

     

                I took another shower than made my way back to the room where all my clothes we spread across the bed. I silently thanked Rebecca and got dressed. As I arrived in my limo at Joe’s Shanghai Restaurant, I noticed we were going to be eating Chinese. I look at my Jacob, it was 8:02pm. And I’m on time I thought to myself. The dress code was casual dining, but it still seemed so up scale. I was seated in the spot that was reserved for me and my special date. The waiter asked me if I was ready to order. I just ordered a bottle of Moet for my table than I let her know that I was waiting for a date. I told her she would only have to come over if and when I signaled for her. I looked down at my Jacob one more time. 8:05. I can’t believe shawty is late on me. That’s not what’s hittin at all I thought. I took out my Blackberry to send a text to Lonzo. “Shawty didn’t get here yet. We got the right place right?” Two minutes later, I got a text back. The message read “Fo Sho, she picked the spot herself.” That’s unusual I thought. If she doesn’t get here in the next five, I will just get some take out and call it a night. I start to sing to myself “I don’t want to miss the way ya body feels no more” just when something caught my attention, or should I say someone that cut my imitation of myself off right away.

     

                Baby walks in the room with a style that was admirable it could shut the whole place down. I was like breaking my neck around to get a good look at her. Damn she was fine. I usually don’t get that embedded when I see females, but this right here, was all about spontaneity. My dick usually has the habit of making me look at a woman’s physical attributes before anything else, but baby was looking right. She had A nice caramel complexion, beautiful light brown eyes, perky ass titties that were just screaming “lick me”. She had a tiny ass waist with a fat ass that you could see from the front. She had on an all black dress that enhanced her every curve. It hung low in the front showing off a little bit of cleavage. Her dress was either Gucci or Armani, but either way, baby had taste.  I cursed out loud to myself”Fuck, why couldn’t this be my date? I tried not to stare, but this girl seemed flawless. I wanted her. I felt myself starting to tense up and feel a little warm. I was feigning for this girl. My conscience hollered out to me Straghten up Nigga, you tripping. In actuality, I was tripping. Here I was acting like a straight junkie. I just woke up to three women who I obviously dicked down, and now I’m drooling at the table over yet another female who probably waiting for somebody. I stopped looking at her, looked down at my Jacob that now read 8:15 and decided I was leaving. Just as I was about to leave, the beauty I was staring just drooling over was at my table.

     

    “Um Trey?” she said. “I don’t really know if you know who I am. I’m sorry I’m late I was just a little nervous about being alone with you”

     

    “It’s cool, what up doe?” I said. I start to squint my eyes cause up close shawty was looking real familiar. I stood up, reached for a handshake, but got a hug. Than it hit me, I knew where I remembered her from. As we let go of the hug, she said

     

    “I don’t know if you remember me, but my name is”

     

    “Ticia” I said cutting her off “I met you earlier at the chicken spot”…

     

                                                   

                If you liked this, come back to read part 2… and see how everything turned out

                           

                                        (Please criticize so I can improve)

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HIs-LastTime's picture
on Oct 21, 2010 - 04:20PM

Okay Angels, this is my first Trey Tale, Sorry if it’s too long. I want to get some feedback to see what you ladies think. I am open to any criticism.

 

Keep in mind I am writing this as if I am Trey, so it’s from His point of view!

 

 

FIRST DATE SEX

 

 

I wake up to the sound of my alarm going off at 6am, and as I go to move, I feel as though I am strapped to the mattress of my own hotel room. “Damn” I think to myself as I look around to witness the fact that I have three fine ass half naked women weighing me down. I couldn’t help but to smile while thoughts of me being `the mothafuckin man` ran crazy in my mind. “When am I going to stop this madness” I think inside as I attempt to detangle myself from this love safari. I’m nasty, so the first thought in my mind is what exactly I did to these women? This shit was really looking like the “Sex Room” video that I shot with Luda just a couple months back. When I attempted to sit up,  shawty to the left of me, wrapped her arm around my neck squeezing me like a teddy bear  saying “don’t go baby” all with her eyes still closed. Damn she strong for her to still be sleeping. Apparently I needed help with this. I didn’t want to wake them though. I was not in the mood for them to be begging me to stay there longer and I honestly didn’t know ANY of there names. I strained my right arm as far as I could and it gave me just enough leeway to reach my Blackberry off the nightstand. I sent a quick text to Alonzo that read “Help Lol Smiley Face”. He used his hotel key to come in. He came in with a smile from ear to ear that made me smile back. I kind of shrugged my shoulders with a devilish grin as I signaled to him to be as quiet as possible not to wake the girls, but at the same time, get them off of me!

            He did just that as I escaped down the hallway as smooth as I could, almost naked. The only things on my body were my Rocawear briefs and socks. I felt real dirty, but that is what happens when you a freak like me. When I look down at myself, I was feigning for a shower. I don’t know why this became so amusing to me, but I couldn’t help but say “damm I wild” as I headed to in the washroom. I heard one of the girls say “where’s Trey?” which made me feel a little guilty for running off like that, but I had work and I’m sure they did too.

 

After the coast was clear, when Alonzo called out to me that everybody left, I went inside the bathroom to get myself together. I had a radio interview at Hot97 at 8, autograph signing at 10:30 than to top it off, I had my date with the radio winner of “Win a date with Trey: Trey Date” that evening. I was hoping that she would be a little more normal or at least down to earth out of all the other females that won a date with me in the past. I mean it’s cool to be a fan, but since I actually take my time out to show these young ladies a good time, I would for once, like the date to be interesting you know? Like, have something more on your mind than “I love you Sooo Much” I know that already baby, that’s why you here. Anyway, I took off my briefs to step in the shower. As I looked at them, I decided to just toss em’. I wasn’t even gonna try to wear them again. I looked down at my dick, smiled cause I’m blessed, and told him he was finna get me in some shit that I couldn’t escape one day Fo Sho! I turned on the water to a good temperature than I stepped inside. At that moment I start thinking of the movie Coming to America how that nigga Eddie Murphy didn’t even have to wash his own self up. I wondered if I would ever be that fortunate. Than I thought on second hand, that is some lazy shit. I turned around with my back to the shower as I felt a stinging pain shoot across it. I opened the shower door, to see if I could see the mirror from here, when I did, I seen a big ass scratch across my back, Shit, shawty dug her nails deep. She was trying to remove my tattoo I thought smiling. I bet she ain’t go as deep as me though. I pondered for a minute which one of the three did it before I came up with the conclusion that it was the light skinned thick one. She looked like a freak too. I gotta make sure this is covered, I thought.  My confidence level was boosted once again. “Is it illegal to have an ego the size of Pluto, when I know that I’m flyer than any guy that you know?” I rapped to myself as I stepped out the shower reaching for my towel. I brushed my teeth, threw some lotion on, than put on some Armani cologne. For the ladies of course, to help get em moist. HAHA

 

Since I had my radio interview up first, I figured I would just throw on my gray RocaWear sweat suit with the blue piping with some Air Forces. My stylist can get me dressed up right later on, I thougt to myself. I walked out the bathroom heading down the hall, looking at my watch. Damn, its 7:15, I don’t have time to sit and eat. I’m hungry as shit. In front room was my assistant Gutta and Lonzo was playing Madden 2011. These two had a thing for gambling over these games at any giving time. If they could play these jawns in the car I know they would. “Leggooo” I told them, “I’m not tryna be late to this jawn, that’s not a good look”. I grabbed a quick snack out the fridge, and decided to throw on some Gucci shades to try and disguise myself a little bit. Noise in the street is dope, but it gets on a nigga nerves sometimes. I love my fans and all my angels, but a nigga need a day where I can just cut the phone off and just look at the water. I dropped a hundred dollar tip on the bed for whoever did the housekeeping because she was going to be cleaning this room for the whole day. Hot 97 here I comeI said as me and the crew left the hotel.

                                                           

                                                After the Interview at Hot 97

           

The Hot 97 interview was dope. A lot of shawty’s was asking me about Lauren London though. I can’t answer that. We supposed to be talking about Passion Pain & Pleasure and they all in my personal life. It’s cool though. I guess that’s what comes with the territory. I tell em like this I “let all ride, I was wit everybody. If you say it than that’s what it is.” Everybody was mainly asking me to follow them on Twitter though. Lol “No problem baby I got you, I definitely got you” I told them.

 

I am now on my way to my autograph signing, but first a nigga needs some thing to eat. We stop at some chicken spot to get me some chicken fingers real quick. There were about three or four females who recognized me and ran up to me screaming, “OMG your Trey Songz”, “Tremaine I love you”, “Can I have a picture with you” the whole nine. I thought to myself Damn; I guess the Gucci’s didn’t work. I acknowledged them all, took a quick group pic with them and a solo pic with the girl who I think told me her name was “Ticia”. I gotta do a lot better with names I thought. Anyway, she had on a Trey’s Angel tee with the charm bracelet, so I had to show her extra love because I knew she was angel. She said she was on the way to the signing, and even though she just met me out here, she was STILL going to wait in that long ass line. That’s shows much love for ya boy.

 

When we got the singing, it was packed! I can’t even begin to guess how many people were there. I loved it though. That’s what makes me who I am. I was set up at the table to face all the people that were here for me. I saw Trey’s Angel Tee shirts, banners, cameras flashing at me, and there were over 1000 people screaming for me. I have seen it all. Passion, Pain & Pleasure: Love Faces was playing…..I heard my voice coming from the speakers”My hands rubbing on your skin, lets go hard don’t hold it in, Love Faces” as one the managers got on the microphone and said “make sure you take your CD covers out of your CDs” I began signing and showing all my fans how much I loved them

 

                                                Later That Evening

 

            Back at the hotel I decided to take a little rest to be fully prepared for my date this evening. When I got up, I was thinking I gotta change clothes man; I hit up my stylist Rebecca Alexis, to see what she had planned for me to wear that night.  I told her I didn’t want to Red Carpet Fresh, but I also didn’t want to be RocaWear sweat suit relaxed. I wanted let this young lady know that I had class, but I wanted her to be comfortable and maybe if she seen me in my comfort zone, she would relax more and be herself. Anyway Becca said she just went with something from the RocaWear Campaign. She went with the Octane Jean, Benelli Plaid Shirt, with the Acknowledge Jacket. On my feet she picked a pair of Dior Homme calf leather sneakers, and of course she put a little Marc Jacob on the wrist. I told her that was dope, so I decided to relax for a little while longer until it was time for me to get Ready. No pun intended. I was on Twitter for about a half an hour. I was about to sign off to hop in the shower than I noticed an interested tweet. Her twitter handle was TashNTrey. Her tweet said, “At the end of @Treysongz commercial my 2 yr old said….Yuuup!” I retweeted that, signed out than preceded to get dressed.

 

            I took another shower than made my way back to the room where all my clothes we spread across the bed. I silently thanked Rebecca and got dressed. As I arrived in my limo at Joe’s Shanghai Restaurant, I noticed we were going to be eating Chinese. I look at my Jacob, it was 8:02pm. And I’m on time I thought to myself. The dress code was casual dining, but it still seemed so up scale. I was seated in the spot that was reserved for me and my special date. The waiter asked me if I was ready to order. I just ordered a bottle of Moet for my table than I let her know that I was waiting for a date. I told her she would only have to come over if and when I signaled for her. I looked down at my Jacob one more time. 8:05. I can’t believe shawty is late on me. That’s not what’s hittin at all I thought. I took out my Blackberry to send a text to Lonzo. “Shawty didn’t get here yet. We got the right place right?” Two minutes later, I got a text back. The message read “Fo Sho, she picked the spot herself.” That’s unusual I thought. If she doesn’t get here in the next five, I will just get some take out and call it a night. I start to sing to myself “I don’t want to miss the way ya body feels no more” just when something caught my attention, or should I say someone that cut my imitation of myself off right away.

 

            Baby walks in the room with a style that was admirable it could shut the whole place down. I was like breaking my neck around to get a good look at her. Damn she was fine. I usually don’t get that embedded when I see females, but this right here, was all about spontaneity. My dick usually has the habit of making me look at a woman’s physical attributes before anything else, but baby was looking right. She had A nice caramel complexion, beautiful light brown eyes, perky ass titties that were just screaming “lick me”. She had a tiny ass waist with a fat ass that you could see from the front. She had on an all black dress that enhanced her every curve. It hung low in the front showing off a little bit of cleavage. Her dress was either Gucci or Armani, but either way, baby had taste.  I cursed out loud to myself”Fuck, why couldn’t this be my date? I tried not to stare, but this girl seemed flawless. I wanted her. I felt myself starting to tense up and feel a little warm. I was feigning for this girl. My conscience hollered out to me Straghten up Nigga, you tripping. In actuality, I was tripping. Here I was acting like a straight junkie. I just woke up to three women who I obviously dicked down, and now I’m drooling at the table over yet another female who probably waiting for somebody. I stopped looking at her, looked down at my Jacob that now read 8:15 and decided I was leaving. Just as I was about to leave, the beauty I was staring just drooling over was at my table.

 

“Um Trey?” she said. “I don’t really know if you know who I am. I’m sorry I’m late I was just a little nervous about being alone with you”

 

“It’s cool, what up doe?” I said. I start to squint my eyes cause up close shawty was looking real familiar. I stood up, reached for a handshake, but got a hug. Than it hit me, I knew where I remembered her from. As we let go of the hug, she said

 

“I don’t know if you remember me, but my name is”

 

“Ticia” I said cutting her off “I met you earlier at the chicken spot”…

 

                                               

            If you liked this, come back to read part 2… and see how everything turned out

                       

                                    (Please criticize so I can improve)

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kaneadenson@gmail.com's picture

I really enjoyed the intro even though i read part two first... it was good definitely had my attention.

ccarty175@yahoo.com's picture

love it so far! i like how you are writing on his side of thinking. cant wait to read the rest!

HIs-LastTime's picture

@angelic50 , here is part TWO !!! hope you like it!!

http://www.treysongz.com/talk/first-date-sex-part-2/

AngelicTrey's picture

Girl I like it so far. Keep coming wit more.Love It. Bong!!!!!!!! Leggo!!!!!!!

HIs-LastTime's picture

Thanks Girl !!! I hope he did read it... @Leigh Ueal... Part 2 is up

lisaleigh30's picture

Girl you doing your thing, I'm sure Trey loves it too!

HIs-LastTime's picture

JesusIsMySavior's picture

Can't wait for part 2.

HIs-LastTime's picture

Thanks So Much @TheBarbieCop

TheBarbieCop's picture

@Mrs.Neverson2011 I CAN NOT criticize...your story was amazing! You are doing a great job of portraying Trey as himself...LoL I really like how your story is some what realistic by you using the facts...b/c I read that twitter quote just the other night and remember Trey doing and saying a lot of the things you put in the story. I am very impressed and I give your story two thumbs up! I can not wait to read part 2! GREAT JOB!!!

HIs-LastTime's picture

Thanks Ladies!!! Part 2 is in the making right now... Stay Tuned.

JesusIsMySavior's picture

@CutTGurl609

I'm not a big reader either. But all the stories posted here have kept my attention.

@Mrs.Neverson2011

You did a very good job with your research.

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

Yes - I can't wait for part 2 either!!! Great job @Mrs.Neverson2011!!!

RITTALUV's picture

@Mrs.Neverson2011 awww yea u def did a good job on this one!! gathering up info on him shows u r a really dedicated angel as well to make sure u got him down pat! lol keep up the good work i cant wait see read part 2!!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Yep! I love how u did dat! I love watching his interviews he reminds me of someone I would chill wit for real! I love making people laugh... so I know if I ever get a chance 2 really hang out with him one day it would be too funny! Lol!

HIs-LastTime's picture

I'm back with another comment ladies. I feel as though I should have said more. For everybody that liked it, I really appreciate you. I was so shaken up this morning that the previous comment is all i could get out at the time. I am more than Happy!!!

Its love how you ladies feel as though Trey is really speaking or that you could see him in the situation.

its like this, its a like a study process for me. I listen to some interviews, read up some of the things he likes. ex: he said he had a favorite RocaWear sweat suit like the one in the story, so i added that in. & if you go on Trey's Twitter, the RT in the story is an actual RT from his page.

Some of things in this story Trey "actually said", took a lot of notes and developed his style, and incorporated it into my story somehow.

If I'm going to be TREY I gotta come correct. I am so glad that you liked it though....

And i didnt have one negative COMMENT !!! thanks so much

HIs-LastTime's picture

OMG THANKS LADIES!!!!

I am smiling so hard right now!!!
I'm very excited that you guys liked It and showed much love!!!

Thanks Ladies...

By popular demand, I must finish the story, Thank SO MUCH AGAIN!!!

WhitneyDesiree''s picture

YEP DAT SEEMS LIKE THE WAY TREY WUD ACT.....KEEP EM COMIN PLZ!!!!!

iLovemesumTREY's picture

it sounds exactly like him , its crazy! lmao. part 2 #leggoooo

CutTiGurl609's picture

I like the story. Good job. I don't even like reading but this kept my attention and makes me want to read more of it. It was so funny I was laughin the whole time. You are very talented.

Anmariee_1ofTrey'sFinest's picture

Different & On Point....Part 2 Please!!!

Ibelikeyuppp's picture

PART 2!! PART2!!

@LadyAJ03's picture

I like how this flows...I can hear him talkin too...I feel like I need to read it aloud to get the full effect.. I love it because it is different and it kept my attention...keep writing!

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

Your story is good and I can imagine this story from his perspective and hear him talking in my head cant wait for part 2

ladyt1980's picture

u no its funny how gud we no trey. this sounds just like him. u did very gud cant wait 4 pt. 2

florence_3's picture

your story is real good can't wait to part 2

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lol! Dats what I couldnt help but bust out laughin at some of the lines! Cuz I was like dis sounds just like Trey! :-)

JesusIsMySavior's picture

@shay_yuuup

You are right many of the lines he said in the story does sound like things Trey would say.

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Lmao! @Tricia! And yea I agree @JesusIsMySavior ... I feel like we're really reading his thoughts. Lmao!

JesusIsMySavior's picture

Girl you know how to have people wanting to read more cutting it off just when things are really interesting. LOL

As others have said I like how you are writing from his view.

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