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    October 25, 2010

    The Last Time Part 2

     Alyssa pushed to door open and smiled…She made it and Trey was nowhere in sight…The suite was huge with plenty of space to work with so she got started… Trey was always surprising her it was time to return the favor. Throwing her purse onto the table next to the bed she turned and placed her hands on her head… “ I can’t believe I left my bag down by the elevator!” She yelled to herself. Quickly retracing her steps she traveled back down to the elevator to the lobby where she stopped to take a call from Tasha…Her bag wasn’t where she left it…and the anxiety was building up inside of her…

    Bellman: Ma’am…Are you the owner of the bag that was here in the Lobby

    Alyssa: Oh My Goodness…Yes…It’s Purple with gold designs on it…

    Bellman: Right this way…We put it away hoping you would come for it…

    Alyssa breathed a sigh of relief and followed the man to the back office where he kept her bag of treats…

    (Meanwhile)

    Helen couldn’t believe she let Trey talk her into going up to his room…There was no way she was staying the night… no way he was going to win her over just like that… “ He has a woman” she told herself… but she couldn’t stop following him to the door…

    Helen: I’m not so sure about this Trey...

    Trey: Just come on girl (opening the door)

    Trey knew something was off when he noticed all the lights on in his room…He walked in cautiously and it all started to make sense once he made his way over to the bed…The Coach bag sitting on the nightstand was the same one he bought for Alyssa before he left…

    Helen: You expecting somebody?

    Trey: Naw…but it looks like I might have a visitor…I think you need to go…

    Helen: So now you are kickin’ me out…

    Trey: You just need to go for now…I’ll call you tomorrow…

    Helen: Right…I won’t hold my breath (Turns to leave)

    Trey: Aye… (Turning her to face him)…I’m going to call you tomorrow

    Helen: Whatever you say man…

    Helen walked out quickly with purpose…She didn’t want him to see the longing in her eyes…he didn’t need to know that she was going to wait by that phone praying that he would keep his promise…Girl or no Girl he wanted her…but she intended to make sure this time Trey was going make all the moves…no more expectations…no more disappointments…

    Trey watched Helen walk away and prepared himself to be surprised when Alyssa walked through the door…Her skin glowed and her smile reminded him of all of the love they shared…Trey wanted to believe his heart telling him that she was all he needed but he couldn’t ignore what was about to go down with Helen…Or what already went down with Helen…

    Alyssa: I’m so Sorry Baby… I wanted to surprise you…but then I forgot my bag… and the people down stairs took forever…

    Trey smiled…she was so sexy when she rambled on and on… walking over to her he gently took the bag from her and set it down beside them before pulling her into his embrace…

    Trey: You lookin good baby…Like you got a lil thicker since I last saw you

    Alyssa: That’s just cuz you miss me… I just wish I was able to do everything I planned and…

    Trey: (Placing his finger over her mouth) Shh…Trust me…I am surprised…

    Alyssa: (smiles)Wow…you sure had fun tonight…

    The smell of the liquor on Trey’s breath caught her off guard but didn’t stop Alyssa from joining her lips to his…she loved the way he kissed her so slow…and the way he held her…it was always special…like he would never see her again…Putting her face to Trey’s neck she took in his scent…noticing that it was mixed with an unfamiliar one…

    Alyssa: Is that perfume on you??

    Trey: could be…do you know how many people hugged all on me tonight…

    Alyssa: Someone hugged up really close…you got lipstick all on your collar…

    Trey: I’m sorry baby (looking away)…

    Alyssa: Don’t worry about it…You’re not gonna leave that on anyway…(bringing his face back to hers with a smile) Why don’t you go take a hot shower and meet me back here…I can at least give you one of the special things I planned…

    Trey obeyed and headed for the bathroom feeling guiltier than Jennifer Hudson with a Krispy Kreme doughnut…As the water rolled over his skin his mind traveled over the last year and a half he spent with Alyssa…he could have had his pick of any girl and he chose her…a car accident couldn’t stop him from needing her…but he still had unfinished business with Helen…there was still something there…something powerful…

    Alyssa smiled to herself while she prepared herself to give Trey a night to remember…the perfume and lipstick on his collar confirmed her need to step it up with him…He never gave her a reason to worry and she trusted him with her life…but now it was time to take things to the next level so she whipped out the blindfold and the hand cuffs…time to play cops and robbers…

    (The Next Morning)

    Alyssa frowned when she noticed that Trey wasn’t beside her when she woke up…He never left without waking her with a kiss to say goodbye…The handwritten note he left for her on the nightstand explained his disappearance…She couldn’t help but smile at the thoughtfulness of his words…He was always so smooth…turning on her phone she called CiCi to thank her again…

    C: Hello

    A: Hey girl! I just wanted to thank you again…there were some setbacks but last night was great!

    C: You welcome…anything for the girl that keeps Trey happy…trust me, life is better when he is happy…

    A: I just wish he wasn’t so busy in meetings today…I really wanted to spend the day with him…

    C: What meetings? (Confused Tone)

    A: He left me a note saying that he would be busy in meetings all day…we’re supposed to meet for dinner…

    C: Oh…Maybe he set some stuff up I don’t know about…

    A: Well I have to let you go..I have another call…thanks again girl!

    Alyssa clicked over to Tasha, who spoke in an unusual tone that immediately made her worry…

    T: Why haven’t you been picking up your phone!? Girl, I been blowin’ you up!!

    A: I had my phone off…Is everything ok?

    T: Girl I could ask you the same thing…Did you know Trey was with Helen last night?

    A: (Laughs) Girl, Stop readin’ mediatakeout…Trey was with me last night, trust me… I have the pep in my step to prove it…

    T: Well he was doublin’ up because he was with Helen at John Singleton’s party and they left together all hugged up…I got pictures to prove that!!

    A: There were a lot of people at that party…Trey is allowed to have friends

    T: Friends don’t kiss other friends on the mouth and put their hands in private places…You know Marcus? He was out there to do Brandy’s hair and they went together… he saw the whole thing…

    The lump in Alyssa’s throat kept her silent…the flips in her stomach made her queasy…It was all coming back to her…the perfume…the lipstick on his collar…

    T: And Girl that ain’t the worst of it…I told Marcus to keep an eye out on Trey and he spotted him this morning walking into the Hotel where she is staying...

    Alyssa choked back her tears…hurt was turning to anger fast…she let out a soft laugh to keep from crying…

    T: I had to tell you girl…

    A: Don’t even worry about it…I’m cool…Are they still there? Can Marcus locate them again?

    T: I don’t know…I’ll call him right now and let you know when I get something…Just promise me one thing…

    A: What?

    T: That you won’t do nothin’ stupid…We have an image to protect…You were a good woman before Trey so you’ll be fine girl..no matter what…

    A: Tash…Don’t worry about a thing…I got this…

     I guess Trey ain’t as slick as he think he is…Don’t he know people be watchin’ him! LOL…Check me out next time for the confrontation…Do you think Alyssa is gon’ go ham on both of them or keep her cool like she promised??? You don’t wanna miss Part 3!!! If you are just joining me…go back and read Pt.1 and if you don’t know who Alyssa is…links to all of my other stories are at the bottom of the Pt. 1 post!!! Thanks for all of the Support!!!! http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-1-fan-story/

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on Oct 25, 2010 - 10:26PM

The Last Time Part 2

 Alyssa pushed to door open and smiled…She made it and Trey was nowhere in sight…The suite was huge with plenty of space to work with so she got started… Trey was always surprising her it was time to return the favor. Throwing her purse onto the table next to the bed she turned and placed her hands on her head… “ I can’t believe I left my bag down by the elevator!” She yelled to herself. Quickly retracing her steps she traveled back down to the elevator to the lobby where she stopped to take a call from Tasha…Her bag wasn’t where she left it…and the anxiety was building up inside of her…

Bellman: Ma’am…Are you the owner of the bag that was here in the Lobby

Alyssa: Oh My Goodness…Yes…It’s Purple with gold designs on it…

Bellman: Right this way…We put it away hoping you would come for it…

Alyssa breathed a sigh of relief and followed the man to the back office where he kept her bag of treats…

(Meanwhile)

Helen couldn’t believe she let Trey talk her into going up to his room…There was no way she was staying the night… no way he was going to win her over just like that… “ He has a woman” she told herself… but she couldn’t stop following him to the door…

Helen: I’m not so sure about this Trey...

Trey: Just come on girl (opening the door)

Trey knew something was off when he noticed all the lights on in his room…He walked in cautiously and it all started to make sense once he made his way over to the bed…The Coach bag sitting on the nightstand was the same one he bought for Alyssa before he left…

Helen: You expecting somebody?

Trey: Naw…but it looks like I might have a visitor…I think you need to go…

Helen: So now you are kickin’ me out…

Trey: You just need to go for now…I’ll call you tomorrow…

Helen: Right…I won’t hold my breath (Turns to leave)

Trey: Aye… (Turning her to face him)…I’m going to call you tomorrow

Helen: Whatever you say man…

Helen walked out quickly with purpose…She didn’t want him to see the longing in her eyes…he didn’t need to know that she was going to wait by that phone praying that he would keep his promise…Girl or no Girl he wanted her…but she intended to make sure this time Trey was going make all the moves…no more expectations…no more disappointments…

Trey watched Helen walk away and prepared himself to be surprised when Alyssa walked through the door…Her skin glowed and her smile reminded him of all of the love they shared…Trey wanted to believe his heart telling him that she was all he needed but he couldn’t ignore what was about to go down with Helen…Or what already went down with Helen…

Alyssa: I’m so Sorry Baby… I wanted to surprise you…but then I forgot my bag… and the people down stairs took forever…

Trey smiled…she was so sexy when she rambled on and on… walking over to her he gently took the bag from her and set it down beside them before pulling her into his embrace…

Trey: You lookin good baby…Like you got a lil thicker since I last saw you

Alyssa: That’s just cuz you miss me… I just wish I was able to do everything I planned and…

Trey: (Placing his finger over her mouth) Shh…Trust me…I am surprised…

Alyssa: (smiles)Wow…you sure had fun tonight…

The smell of the liquor on Trey’s breath caught her off guard but didn’t stop Alyssa from joining her lips to his…she loved the way he kissed her so slow…and the way he held her…it was always special…like he would never see her again…Putting her face to Trey’s neck she took in his scent…noticing that it was mixed with an unfamiliar one…

Alyssa: Is that perfume on you??

Trey: could be…do you know how many people hugged all on me tonight…

Alyssa: Someone hugged up really close…you got lipstick all on your collar…

Trey: I’m sorry baby (looking away)…

Alyssa: Don’t worry about it…You’re not gonna leave that on anyway…(bringing his face back to hers with a smile) Why don’t you go take a hot shower and meet me back here…I can at least give you one of the special things I planned…

Trey obeyed and headed for the bathroom feeling guiltier than Jennifer Hudson with a Krispy Kreme doughnut…As the water rolled over his skin his mind traveled over the last year and a half he spent with Alyssa…he could have had his pick of any girl and he chose her…a car accident couldn’t stop him from needing her…but he still had unfinished business with Helen…there was still something there…something powerful…

Alyssa smiled to herself while she prepared herself to give Trey a night to remember…the perfume and lipstick on his collar confirmed her need to step it up with him…He never gave her a reason to worry and she trusted him with her life…but now it was time to take things to the next level so she whipped out the blindfold and the hand cuffs…time to play cops and robbers…

(The Next Morning)

Alyssa frowned when she noticed that Trey wasn’t beside her when she woke up…He never left without waking her with a kiss to say goodbye…The handwritten note he left for her on the nightstand explained his disappearance…She couldn’t help but smile at the thoughtfulness of his words…He was always so smooth…turning on her phone she called CiCi to thank her again…

C: Hello

A: Hey girl! I just wanted to thank you again…there were some setbacks but last night was great!

C: You welcome…anything for the girl that keeps Trey happy…trust me, life is better when he is happy…

A: I just wish he wasn’t so busy in meetings today…I really wanted to spend the day with him…

C: What meetings? (Confused Tone)

A: He left me a note saying that he would be busy in meetings all day…we’re supposed to meet for dinner…

C: Oh…Maybe he set some stuff up I don’t know about…

A: Well I have to let you go..I have another call…thanks again girl!

Alyssa clicked over to Tasha, who spoke in an unusual tone that immediately made her worry…

T: Why haven’t you been picking up your phone!? Girl, I been blowin’ you up!!

A: I had my phone off…Is everything ok?

T: Girl I could ask you the same thing…Did you know Trey was with Helen last night?

A: (Laughs) Girl, Stop readin’ mediatakeout…Trey was with me last night, trust me… I have the pep in my step to prove it…

T: Well he was doublin’ up because he was with Helen at John Singleton’s party and they left together all hugged up…I got pictures to prove that!!

A: There were a lot of people at that party…Trey is allowed to have friends

T: Friends don’t kiss other friends on the mouth and put their hands in private places…You know Marcus? He was out there to do Brandy’s hair and they went together… he saw the whole thing…

The lump in Alyssa’s throat kept her silent…the flips in her stomach made her queasy…It was all coming back to her…the perfume…the lipstick on his collar…

T: And Girl that ain’t the worst of it…I told Marcus to keep an eye out on Trey and he spotted him this morning walking into the Hotel where she is staying...

Alyssa choked back her tears…hurt was turning to anger fast…she let out a soft laugh to keep from crying…

T: I had to tell you girl…

A: Don’t even worry about it…I’m cool…Are they still there? Can Marcus locate them again?

T: I don’t know…I’ll call him right now and let you know when I get something…Just promise me one thing…

A: What?

T: That you won’t do nothin’ stupid…We have an image to protect…You were a good woman before Trey so you’ll be fine girl..no matter what…

A: Tash…Don’t worry about a thing…I got this…

 I guess Trey ain’t as slick as he think he is…Don’t he know people be watchin’ him! LOL…Check me out next time for the confrontation…Do you think Alyssa is gon’ go ham on both of them or keep her cool like she promised??? You don’t wanna miss Part 3!!! If you are just joining me…go back and read Pt.1 and if you don’t know who Alyssa is…links to all of my other stories are at the bottom of the Pt. 1 post!!! Thanks for all of the Support!!!! http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-1-fan-story/

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@LadyAJ03's picture

Glad I had yall laughin!! Request the book!!! DM on twitter or e-mail me at LadyAJ_03@yahoo.com

MsAngione's picture

Good..i love this part "feeling guiltier than Jennifer Hudson with a Krispy Kreme doughnut" charisma..lol

ForbiddenAngel's picture

Nice!

@LadyAJ03's picture

@DaBaddestAngel....Glad you noticed my humor...

DaBaddestAngel's picture

I love reading your stories..I was laughing at that part about Trey feeling guilter than Jennifer Hudson with a Krispy Kreme doughnut...HILARIOUS!!!! Keep da stories comin girl!!!

Kikamiko's picture

Your stories are starting to be way better than my soaps! Love it! Come on Part 3!!!

Linz84's picture

I'm ready for part 3. lol

HIs-LastTime's picture

This is good... I want to see whats next....

KA-LEE-YA...KALEYIA's picture

smdh TREY... cnt wait to part 3

Raven RambunctiousAngel's picture

Can't Wait for Part 3!!! =)

MsJJBabyee's picture

Trey , Trey , Trey , Smh ... wanna have your cake && eat it 2 !! i always get mad when trey does something to alyssa lol like its so real && im alyssa or something .. i have to tell myself calm down its not a real story ... great job on this cant wait for the next onee!

CharBaby's picture

omg girl u cant be leavin me hangin like that!!!!!!!!

@LadyAJ03's picture

@TreysAngelBeauty....Thank you...Now go Catch UP!!! LOL @Shannon.and @Island_Queen...part 3 is coming tonight!! @Daniel_Shawn...Thank you!!! I have to leave ppl hangin'... thank you for reading:)

JamRoC_4eVa's picture

GIRL U DRIVING ME CRAZY CANT WAIT 4 PT 3..HURRY & POST IT GIRL...

Daniel_Shawn's picture

@LADYAJ03 Y U BE DOINNN THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UGH LOL STAY LEAVIN PPL HANGING LOL PLZ BELIEVE I WILL BE WAITING 4 PT. 3 ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT LOL

ladyt1980's picture

as alwayz babe another eye catcher now hurry and do pt.3

TREYSANGELBEAUTY's picture

YO THIS ISSH IS FIRE N IM JUST READIN THIS IM DIDNT EVEN READT PART 1

@LadyAJ03's picture

@SexySagLuvSongz...That's What I do...That's why I write these in Parts to keep you on the edge of your seat!! @Fabgyrl25...You are Right...Part 3 IS VERY IMPORTANT...@Doll...I hope Trey is Following along too...@Tricia and @Shay...As ALways I love your support...@Stlgirl4lyfe2010...Thank you for readin!!!....You guys just don't know How Much Fun this is for me!!!

SexySagLuvSongz's picture

UUUUUUGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!! You do this to me everytime!! Just when I really get into it it's over.....you leave me hangin'!!! Guess that just shows how great of a writer you are LOL!!! Keep up the great work.....waiting anxiously for pt. 3!!

ccarty175@yahoo.com's picture

Helen better watch her back Alyssa gonna cause wreck ! Trey better watch himself! He better not mess up a good thing! (lol) Dont wanna miss Part3 ! :)

Doll_2's picture

GREAT JOB! I AM READY FOR PART 3. THIS STORY IS SO GOOD. TREY, I HOPE YOU ARE FOLLOWING ALONG.

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

@LadyAJ03 - I am definitely intrigued...as always. Can't wait to see what happens. I guess Trey will be singing Infidelity Part 2!!! Loved it!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Yeeeeeeessssssssss! Loved it. Loved da twist you threw in da beginning! U should have heard me saying out loud "Ohhhhhh Trey is in trrrooouuubbbbllleeeee!" Lmao! Great job!!! :-)

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

Can't wait for part 3

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