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    October 29, 2010

     Sorry it took so long ladies... I hope your not too mad lol, but here it goes..... 

     

     

                                              FIRST DATE SEX: (Conclusion)

     

                                                                Remember:  

     

    I loved the way shawty looked squirming around, I knew she was finna explode any minute. I took my fingers out hurried up and put the condom and went inside. I wasn’t as gentile as I was before. I was tearing this shit up. “Shit, Simone” I said out loud “It feel so good mama”. I didn’t even noticed shawty was hitting me, cause I was going ham in her pussy. She finally got me off of her and hopped out the bed and grabbed a sheet to wrap herself up in.

     

    Ticia: WHO THE FUCK IS SIMONE? (She screamed at me)

     

                I hopped out of the bed and put on some shorts. The mood was definitely killed. “Simone…. Is…. my woman” I admitted to her.


    Ticia: Your Who? She said getting louder

                We started arguing back and fourth. ”Listen, Listen, LISTEN!!!!” I yelled, but the argument got real heated; so loud, I didn’t notice my baby was in the doorway. When I looked at her, I stopped talking completely. Ticia did too.  The look she had a couple of days before when she was in the hotel room was nothing compared to the one she had now. She looked more insane, than anything. She looked at me, than looked at Ticia.

     

     

    Simone: TICIA??????? (She said and in the same breath, she charged her)

     

    As Simone leaped over at Ticia, my heart started pounding. I was frozen. I didn’t want shawty to get her ass whooped because the reality of this was that this was my entire fault. I remember back what I said in part one. (About my dick getting me in some shit I wasn’t finna get out of). So I looked down at him again and whispered “Thanks” sarcastically. Just as Simone’s hands wrapped around Ticia’s neck, I ran across the bed to try to separate them. Ticia gripped Simone’s hair, dropping the sheet trying desperately to defend herself swinging back wildly. They were tearing shit up in the room. “Yo, Chill, Chill the fuck out” I was yelling, but shit was real. They were going ham on each other the whole time. I don’t know how long it took me to realize this, and forgive me if I’m wrong, but all that was crossing my mind was how sexy Ticia naked body was. I could not believe that I could manage to get hard at a time like this. But damn, ya boy was rock hard. This is fuckin crazy! I shook it off and finally managed to get Simone off of Ticia pinning her to the wall with my body. Ticia ran to the bathroom. She slammed the door and I heard it lock with the quickness. “Calm down baby” I said to her out of breath, but she was not trying to hear that shit at all. She was using all of her power to try get to the bathroom.

     

    Simone: Imma kill you bitch!!! (She screamed as she struggled to get free)

    Ticia: Simone, let me just talk to you…

    Simone: Talk, you gotta be fucking kidding me!!!

     

                Through all the shit that was going on right in front of me and all the thoughts running through my mind, I JUST realized that these two knew each other on first name basis. What the FUCK? I didn’t even know if this was the right time to be asking this, but I asked Simone, “How do you know her?” She didn’t answer me, she just started to cry. All her anger quickly changed into sadness. All the strength she had, turned into weakness as she pushed me off of her, heading towards the door. The feeling that I felt the other night when Simone was leaving the hotel quickly set in. The past couple of lonely nights that I spent, before tonight, reappeared in my mind. I was not finna have her walk out on me again. She walked out the room in attempts to leaving and I ran out the room to follow her to the door. “Baby wait, I’m sorry. Don’t leave me like this girl I need you here with me”


    Simone: (Stopping dead in her tracks but not yet turning around): She called me Trey…..

     

     

    Flashes Back To The Call:

     

     (Ringtone)”Let me see you take off them clothes for the last time, lets keep this thing on the low for the last time….”

    Simone: May I ask whose calling?

    Ticia: Hey girl

    Simone: Um who is this?

    Ticia: It’s me; damn you don’t know ya little cousin voice?

    Simone: Oh, you. Well if you called me other than when you wanted something, you would be a voice that I would be trying to remember.

    Ticia: Damn you don’t even have to be like that. I called you cause I had something I wanted to tell you

    Simone: Which Is…?

    Ticia: I won the date with Trey (Silence) Hello???

    Simone: I am not feeling that shit at all.

    Ticia: Um, you two are not “official” remember? Anyway calm down, we probably won’t be aloud to be alone, so you don’t have nothing to worry about (chuckes)

    Simone: Don’t Fuck with me Ticia. If something goes down, than I will be more than glad to put my hands on you!

    Ticia: Ha, You won’t put your hands on me, but I WILL make sure I get my hands on TREY

    (CLICK)

     

    Talking to Trey:

    Simone: I wanted to call you so bad, but I didn’t want you to think I didn’t trust you. I just decided to come up and meet you so I could prevent anything that may have gone down. When I realized I wouldn’t make it in time I called you from a blocked number, but you didn’t answer……

     

                I than remembered waking up looking at my phone in the hotel room, and noticing that I one of the missed calls I had DID say ‘Restricted’

     

    Simone: (continuing) I knew everything. I knew she won the date (she said as she was crying) I knew. (She turned around to face me) as I’m stepping of the plane, I get a call. She dialed my number when you were FUCKING her and I heard EVERYTHING. “Im a virgin” (mimicking Ticia) “Open your eyes, I want you to look at me”, “Say my name baby, hurry up say my name” (mimicking me) “Thank You” (mimicking Ticia again). I could just die Trey… How can you do this to me?

     

                I was taking it all in. This was too much for ya boy. I was thinking Damn baby, you could have just called a nigga than everything could have been avoided I wouldn’t dare say that out loud though. No matter if Ol’ girl had this planned or not, it was no one’s fault but mine. “Simone, baby I love you” is all I could let out. But she wasn’t having that shit y’all. She didn’t want me anymore. It was written all over her face. I turned around to see Ticia in the doorway. I don’t condone in domestic violence, but I wanted to choke the shit outta baby girl. She just stood staring so I asked her as calm as possible. “Damn Shawty, why?”

     

    Ticia: (Tears dropping) I wanted you before she did. I loved you since “Gotta Make It” She knew I was your number one fan. I made a promise to myself that if you were not my first than I wouldn’t have sex at all. I have all your albums, came to every show I could make it to. I did EVERYTHING, than she had the nerve to brag and tell the family how she met you at the restaurant, and fucked you in the back of the car. How classy (chuckles) I would rather her be with Marcus beating her ass everyday, than to see her happy with you. Hmph, she is trying to act like I’m the scandalous one. You reap what you sew. I was going to have you one way or the other. But now that I made my point, she got it (She says and storms past and stares at Simone) She rolled her teary eyes and walked out the door.

               

                 I was feeling kind of hurt for her. I had no idea she loved me in that way. She used that fact that your boy was a sex addict to get me to fall into what was a plot in her mind since I met her. I was smarter than that, but I let pussy come before my baby not my baby I thought. I still felt like it should be over so that me and Simone could continue life, but that was not the case. “Commmerr baby” I said, spreading my arms open for her to lean in and hug me. She did and it felt good to feel her touch again. I was happy she was home with me. She broke away from the hug and kissed me so passionately, I knew it was love. After the kiss shawty came from left field with this shit.

     

    Simone: Take care Trey. Goodbye, for real this time. (Walking out closing the door)

               

                  I was standing in the doorway for a minute just praying that baby was coming back. When I realized she wasn’t I went up to my room to lay in my bed. I finally came to the realization that I loved Simone, but I wasn’t what was best for her at the time. I grabbed the remote to my stereo, and put “Cant Be Friends” on repeat. “Look what this girl done did to me, she done cut me off from a good good love. She told me that those days were gone……..” I sang with out loud with myself as something happened that didn’t happen in years. I let single tear drop roll down my cheek and soak into the pillow.

     

                                                                END

     

                I hope you liked it LADIES, let me know what you think……..

     

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HIs-LastTime's picture
on Oct 29, 2010 - 10:56AM

 Sorry it took so long ladies... I hope your not too mad lol, but here it goes..... 

 

 

                                          FIRST DATE SEX: (Conclusion)

 

                                                            Remember:  

 

I loved the way shawty looked squirming around, I knew she was finna explode any minute. I took my fingers out hurried up and put the condom and went inside. I wasn’t as gentile as I was before. I was tearing this shit up. “Shit, Simone” I said out loud “It feel so good mama”. I didn’t even noticed shawty was hitting me, cause I was going ham in her pussy. She finally got me off of her and hopped out the bed and grabbed a sheet to wrap herself up in.

 

Ticia: WHO THE FUCK IS SIMONE? (She screamed at me)

 

            I hopped out of the bed and put on some shorts. The mood was definitely killed. “Simone…. Is…. my woman” I admitted to her.


Ticia: Your Who? She said getting louder

            We started arguing back and fourth. ”Listen, Listen, LISTEN!!!!” I yelled, but the argument got real heated; so loud, I didn’t notice my baby was in the doorway. When I looked at her, I stopped talking completely. Ticia did too.  The look she had a couple of days before when she was in the hotel room was nothing compared to the one she had now. She looked more insane, than anything. She looked at me, than looked at Ticia.

 

 

Simone: TICIA??????? (She said and in the same breath, she charged her)

 

As Simone leaped over at Ticia, my heart started pounding. I was frozen. I didn’t want shawty to get her ass whooped because the reality of this was that this was my entire fault. I remember back what I said in part one. (About my dick getting me in some shit I wasn’t finna get out of). So I looked down at him again and whispered “Thanks” sarcastically. Just as Simone’s hands wrapped around Ticia’s neck, I ran across the bed to try to separate them. Ticia gripped Simone’s hair, dropping the sheet trying desperately to defend herself swinging back wildly. They were tearing shit up in the room. “Yo, Chill, Chill the fuck out” I was yelling, but shit was real. They were going ham on each other the whole time. I don’t know how long it took me to realize this, and forgive me if I’m wrong, but all that was crossing my mind was how sexy Ticia naked body was. I could not believe that I could manage to get hard at a time like this. But damn, ya boy was rock hard. This is fuckin crazy! I shook it off and finally managed to get Simone off of Ticia pinning her to the wall with my body. Ticia ran to the bathroom. She slammed the door and I heard it lock with the quickness. “Calm down baby” I said to her out of breath, but she was not trying to hear that shit at all. She was using all of her power to try get to the bathroom.

 

Simone: Imma kill you bitch!!! (She screamed as she struggled to get free)

Ticia: Simone, let me just talk to you…

Simone: Talk, you gotta be fucking kidding me!!!

 

            Through all the shit that was going on right in front of me and all the thoughts running through my mind, I JUST realized that these two knew each other on first name basis. What the FUCK? I didn’t even know if this was the right time to be asking this, but I asked Simone, “How do you know her?” She didn’t answer me, she just started to cry. All her anger quickly changed into sadness. All the strength she had, turned into weakness as she pushed me off of her, heading towards the door. The feeling that I felt the other night when Simone was leaving the hotel quickly set in. The past couple of lonely nights that I spent, before tonight, reappeared in my mind. I was not finna have her walk out on me again. She walked out the room in attempts to leaving and I ran out the room to follow her to the door. “Baby wait, I’m sorry. Don’t leave me like this girl I need you here with me”


Simone: (Stopping dead in her tracks but not yet turning around): She called me Trey…..

 

 

Flashes Back To The Call:

 

 (Ringtone)”Let me see you take off them clothes for the last time, lets keep this thing on the low for the last time….”

Simone: May I ask whose calling?

Ticia: Hey girl

Simone: Um who is this?

Ticia: It’s me; damn you don’t know ya little cousin voice?

Simone: Oh, you. Well if you called me other than when you wanted something, you would be a voice that I would be trying to remember.

Ticia: Damn you don’t even have to be like that. I called you cause I had something I wanted to tell you

Simone: Which Is…?

Ticia: I won the date with Trey (Silence) Hello???

Simone: I am not feeling that shit at all.

Ticia: Um, you two are not “official” remember? Anyway calm down, we probably won’t be aloud to be alone, so you don’t have nothing to worry about (chuckes)

Simone: Don’t Fuck with me Ticia. If something goes down, than I will be more than glad to put my hands on you!

Ticia: Ha, You won’t put your hands on me, but I WILL make sure I get my hands on TREY

(CLICK)

 

Talking to Trey:

Simone: I wanted to call you so bad, but I didn’t want you to think I didn’t trust you. I just decided to come up and meet you so I could prevent anything that may have gone down. When I realized I wouldn’t make it in time I called you from a blocked number, but you didn’t answer……

 

            I than remembered waking up looking at my phone in the hotel room, and noticing that I one of the missed calls I had DID say ‘Restricted’

 

Simone: (continuing) I knew everything. I knew she won the date (she said as she was crying) I knew. (She turned around to face me) as I’m stepping of the plane, I get a call. She dialed my number when you were FUCKING her and I heard EVERYTHING. “Im a virgin” (mimicking Ticia) “Open your eyes, I want you to look at me”, “Say my name baby, hurry up say my name” (mimicking me) “Thank You” (mimicking Ticia again). I could just die Trey… How can you do this to me?

 

            I was taking it all in. This was too much for ya boy. I was thinking Damn baby, you could have just called a nigga than everything could have been avoided I wouldn’t dare say that out loud though. No matter if Ol’ girl had this planned or not, it was no one’s fault but mine. “Simone, baby I love you” is all I could let out. But she wasn’t having that shit y’all. She didn’t want me anymore. It was written all over her face. I turned around to see Ticia in the doorway. I don’t condone in domestic violence, but I wanted to choke the shit outta baby girl. She just stood staring so I asked her as calm as possible. “Damn Shawty, why?”

 

Ticia: (Tears dropping) I wanted you before she did. I loved you since “Gotta Make It” She knew I was your number one fan. I made a promise to myself that if you were not my first than I wouldn’t have sex at all. I have all your albums, came to every show I could make it to. I did EVERYTHING, than she had the nerve to brag and tell the family how she met you at the restaurant, and fucked you in the back of the car. How classy (chuckles) I would rather her be with Marcus beating her ass everyday, than to see her happy with you. Hmph, she is trying to act like I’m the scandalous one. You reap what you sew. I was going to have you one way or the other. But now that I made my point, she got it (She says and storms past and stares at Simone) She rolled her teary eyes and walked out the door.

           

             I was feeling kind of hurt for her. I had no idea she loved me in that way. She used that fact that your boy was a sex addict to get me to fall into what was a plot in her mind since I met her. I was smarter than that, but I let pussy come before my baby not my baby I thought. I still felt like it should be over so that me and Simone could continue life, but that was not the case. “Commmerr baby” I said, spreading my arms open for her to lean in and hug me. She did and it felt good to feel her touch again. I was happy she was home with me. She broke away from the hug and kissed me so passionately, I knew it was love. After the kiss shawty came from left field with this shit.

 

Simone: Take care Trey. Goodbye, for real this time. (Walking out closing the door)

           

              I was standing in the doorway for a minute just praying that baby was coming back. When I realized she wasn’t I went up to my room to lay in my bed. I finally came to the realization that I loved Simone, but I wasn’t what was best for her at the time. I grabbed the remote to my stereo, and put “Cant Be Friends” on repeat. “Look what this girl done did to me, she done cut me off from a good good love. She told me that those days were gone……..” I sang with out loud with myself as something happened that didn’t happen in years. I let single tear drop roll down my cheek and soak into the pillow.

 

                                                            END

 

            I hope you liked it LADIES, let me know what you think……..

 

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CutTiGurl609's picture

Thank u. I loved it!!!

WhitneyDesiree''s picture

I LUVED IT!!!!!!!

HIs-LastTime's picture

Here are the 1st 3 parts, Thank Everybody that enjoyed the story!!!!

@LadyAJ03's picture

I like it...You have a nice writing voice...and I like the fact that the ending is very real... sometimes shit happens... Good Job!

CutTiGurl609's picture

@mrs.neverson2011

ok so I only read the first one and i don't wanna read this until i've read the ones in between but i can't find them so can u post the link for them on here so that i can read them

ladyt1980's picture

i no he's mr. steal ur gurl but there r sum women that just wont stand 4 bullshit not even trey songz. wonderful mama, hope u r putting these in the book.

HIs-LastTime's picture

Thank You so much ladies.....
I am sorry if i hurt anybody with the ending!!!!LOL

for those that didnt quite understand it, It was really all a part of
Ticia's plan to get Simone back. She has been madly in love with Trey
since forever and was jealous that he ended up with her cousin....

Simone couldnt take Trey's BS anymore so she had to leave,

&& Trey had to learn his lesson for letting his "pee pee" do his thinking for him.

I didnt mean to make you ladies sad SORRY>.....LOL but Im glad you liked it

Daniel_Shawn's picture

dang tht was the opposite of wat i expected i think is the first story where he doesnt end up wit the girl i love it makes him seem more vulnerable and normal great job i love it and i look forward 2 ur next story

Anmariee_1ofTrey'sFinest's picture

Not what i expected but GREAT never the less....Keep doing what cha doin lady

KA-LEE-YA...KALEYIA's picture

*cries* dis made me cry at the end.......awwwwww OH LAWWWDDDDDDD!!!!!!!

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

@Mrs.Neverson2011 - this was beautiful. It was sooooo sad...that's just like us to feel bad for Trey instead of Simone...we got some CRAZY love for Trey! LMAO

I was secretly hoping she would've forgave him...I'm a sucker for happy endings even though he definitely didn't deserve it. So I put them together & you broke them up...CTFU!!! Great job...I loved it!!!

lisaleigh30's picture

I figured Simone and Tricia were relatives but I thought that Simone set up Trey to see if he would take the bait. Got me on that one. You have did a great job on your storylines check out my book. Eyes of an Angel. Start with Chapter 8 and all the other chapters are linked to it, tell me what you think.

HIs-LastTime's picture

Thanks Ladies. I just wanted it to be different. Even Trey can get hurt. A woman will only take so much, no matter if your famous or not.

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Awwwwwwwwww man! I'm hurting right now.
So sad. Sheeeesh! But great job love!
U did great!

HIs-LastTime's picture

Ticia and Simone were cousins.

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

This was good and I did not expect them to be related how

CharBaby's picture

THIS WAS SO GOOD!!!!! AWWWW IM SAD IT HAD TO END LIKE THAT...DAMN TRIGGA!

RITTALUV's picture

omg this was sooooooooo GOOD!!! i loved it! i really thought simone was gonna stay with him after everything happened...shit i would've!! good job angel!!

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