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    October 28, 2010

    Part Five

    (4 months Later)

    Trey walked into the radio station and smiled…this was his last big interview before he could take a break…work was the only thing keeping him sane with Alyssa still refusing to see him but he couldn’t help but feel excited to be in her city and free to stay for a while…today was the day he was gonna win her back…no matter what he was gonna see her…

    Steve Harvey: Ladies and Gentleman we have my main dude…one of the best R&B artist out here today in here wit us…We got Trey Songz errbody…

    T: (laughs) Thanks Uncle Steve

    Steve Harvey: Yall see he call me Uncle Steve…that’s cuz he kno me… I don’t even really mess wit a lotta these young artists out here but this boy here…I tell yall he be SANGIN…tell the people about the new album…

    T: It’s called Trey Songz vs. Tremaine Neverson… I really want my fans to get a little glimpse of the constant battle I have…a lot of times Trey Songz gets all the glory and Tremaine has to take a backseat….I’m hoping my fans can see that…

    Steve Harvey: How do you think this Album will compare to your first four albums?

    T: Well…I think this one is my best work…I try to get better with every album…grow with every album…I have to say this album is dope…definitely my favorite

    Steve Harvey: So..We gon’ play a song off the ablum right now…tell us a lil about it…

    T: Well…It’s called “If Only”… and it is really meant to say what you can’t always say out loud…In this song I’m basically sayin’ that if I had the chance or the opportunity…this is what I would say…and how she would feel if she could hear me…or see me…

    Steve Harvey: Now...I den heard the song and I have to say…It has a real ol school vibe to it…cuz you see…people don’t whine on a song no mo…people don’t sing to show how they feel no mo…I’m tellin’ you this boy is SANGIN on this song… you can really feel every word and like you was really in the studio just cryin’…where did you get your inspiration?

    T: Well…I go through different things in my personal life…when I recorded this song I really was singing from the heart… and I am actually really lucky I made the deadline to get it on the album…

    Steve Harvey: well I tell you what brotha you doin’ ya thang…why don’t you gon’ head and lead us into the song…

    T: Everybody…stop what you are doing…take a break and listen to my new jant... “If Only”…Ay Uncle Steve…can I sing a little before u play it?

    Steve Harvey: You gon head…

    T: (Eyes Closed, Singing from the heart)… “ If Only… she could hear me….then she would know… know what I’m feeling…OOHHHHHH…OOOOOHHHH …If Only”

    (Meanwhile)

    Alyssa sat with her hands on her growing belly staring at her phone… telling Trey this kind of news was going to be the hardest thing she ever had to do… It was something that had to happen in person and since she took a leave of absence, staying out of the public eye helped her keep things to herself…  it was always her morning ritual to listen to the “Strawberry Letter” on the Steve Harvey morning show…somehow listening to stories coming from people in situations worse than hers… so she clicked on her radio and put her feet up on the couch…the sound of Trey’s voice made her heart pound…the sincerity in his tone as he belted out acapella forced her to listen and as the song began to play tears began to fall…

    (Lyrics)

    I tried to live without you but you won’t leave my mind…

    Cuz what I had with you is so hard…so hard to find…

    Memories of you leavin haunt me…

    All I need is once chance…once opportunity

    I promise… to be all you need….

    I pray you still believe …

    Without you I’m incomplete…

    Girl I belong with you and you only…

    This house is no longer a home I’m so lonely…

    Girl I’m ready….My love is for yoOOUUUU….

    OOOHHHHHHHH oohhhhhh

    If Only….

    Alyssa could hear those words over and over even after the song ended and her heart just wanted to run to him…but she still felt uncertain…her phone buzzed bringing out of her thoughts…

    A: Hey Tasha

    T: Girrrrl…I know you just heard Trey serenading you…

    A: It’s just a song Tash… aren’t you supposed to be workin’ anyway…

    T: Alyssa, We both know that you know I know what I’m doin’…but that baby must be going to your head if you don’t think that song was all about you…now…IF ONLY you would just call him I can tell everyone about lil Trigga…keeping this secret is so hard!!!

    A: (laughs) girl…stop…I’m not ready yet

    T: You better get ready…the baby will be here before we know it…what you gon’ do have it first and tell him later…

    A: I don’t know…I’m doing just fine without him knowing…he’ll complicate things… I don’t even know if he wants to be a father right now…

    T: That really doesn’t matter because he is going to be one anyway…what are you so afraid of? It’s not like he would only want you for the baby…you hear him cryin all on the radio… he loves you

    A: Sometimes love isn’t enough…Helen might be a better fit for him…and his life…

    T: If he wanted her he would have her by now…instead he still waitin’ on you…that has to count for somethin’

    A: It does…I just…I don’t know…I guess I’m scared…

    T: well sooner or later the truth is gonna come out…

    (Back to Trey)

    Steve Harvey: Alright errbody…yall  just heard some real sangin…yall make sure yall go get the new album TreySongz Vs. Tremaine Neverson and support good music like this…it’s not erryday you hear music like this

    Trey: Thanks Uncle Steve… and Shouts out to all of my fans out there…My TreysAngels who have really been holdin’ it down for me through everything…

    Steve Harvey: Before I let you leave you know you gotta tell em who got the best morning show in the country…

    Trey: You already know…It’s the Steve Harvey Mornin’ Show…

    Steve Harvey: After we get back…We gon’ hit yall with the strawberry letter…

    Trey came over to Steve to thank him again and say goodbye…but Uncle Steve had a little more in mind…

    Steve Harvey: I really enjoyed you on my show

    Trey: I enjoyed being here

    Steve Harvey: Now that we off the air…I can really keep it real witcha…

    Trey: (Smiles) What up…

    Steve Harvey: This is the best album you ever have done and I think it’s because you are really goin’ through…You ain’t gotta tell me…see cuz Uncle Steve already know…You get her back yet?

    Trey: Not Yet…I’m hopin today is the day…goin to see her…

    Steve Harvey: now…I den been threw dis before so I’m gon give it to ya straight…If you want her back you gon have to commit to her…

    Trey: (Pauses) Huh?

    Steve Harvey: When you got a good woman like that…and you know that’s who you need to be wit you gon’ have to commit to her…let her know that all that stuff is in the past…it’s time to grow up…

    Trey: Alright Steve…I’ll keep that in mind…

    Steve Harvey: I’m tellin’ you cuz I kno…I ain’t just talkin…I really been there…

    Trey: Thanks man… look I gotta go…

    Heading out of the radio station Trey blocked his number and called Alyssa’s office hoping to hear her voice on the other end but came out disappointed…

    Tasha: Alyssa Carter’s office this is Tasha speaking how may I help you?

    Trey: Tash…it’s Trey…can you put me through to Alyssa I know she’s there…

    Tasha: (sensing the desperation in Trey’s voice) I’m sorry Trey but she’s not here…she’s on a leave of absence she won’t be back for at least a few more months…

    That was the closes hint Tasha could offer without breaking her sister rules…even though she hated how Trey did Alyssa, the love in his voice and knowing what she knew made her root for them to get back together…

    Trey: She would never do that… What is really going on?

    Tasha: Exactly what I said Trey…She needs to be away for a while…So she took a leave…she’ll be back once she is cleared to return…

    Trey: Wait a minute… what do you mean when she is cleared to return...what happened to her?

    Tasha: Nothing serious…she just needs to be home Trey… look I can’t tell you anything else…

    Trey hung up on Tasha and told his driver to head straight over to Alyssa’s condo…. Once he made it he rushed inside only to get stopped by the doorman…

    Doorman: Hey…What up Trey… Long time man…Long Time…

    Trey: Hey…can you let me up?

    Doorman: No can do…sorry… but you ain’t on the list no more…and I can’t just go breakin rules and stuff…

    Trey: I really need to see Alyssa she hasn’t been at work…It’s important…just let me up

    Doorman: Oh she ain’t goin back there until she drop that load…you gotta admit she lookin’ good tho…even wit her lil belly all out

    The news hit Trey like a ton of bricks…Alyssa was carrying his child…He was going to be a father…

    Trey: Ay man…I really need to get up there…

    Doorman: you know we cool Trey but she don’t wanna see you…I can’t even do it…

    Trey: (Quiet serious tone) Look…You either gon’ let me up there and not say nothin’ or I’m just gon’ have to make a call and get somebody to make you let me up and you won’t be able to say nothin’…take your pick

    Doorman:…You ain’t gotta get all angry… (letting Trey pass) you know I was gon’ let you up… I owe you… (yelling out to him) I got a lot of pussy playin yo music!

    Trey wasted no time heading for Alyssa’s door…saying a quick prayer first he knocked hoping she would answer…

    A: (From Inside) IT’S OPEN TASH!!

    Trey slowly turned the doorknob and let himself in…the sound of water running led him to the kitchen where Trey spotted Alyssa washing dishes… she turned around with a smile and jumped holding her chest while her eyes filled with surprise as they locked onto him…

    Trey studied her body unable to say anything…she was more breathtaking than he remembered… with her hair pulled back he could see every curve in her face…her widened eyes were still bold, brown, and beautiful… and she was silent…as if she was taking in his reaction… and he was shocked… seeing her belly poking out of her tank top…it was real…

    T: Why didn’t you tell me?

     

    Yall like them song lyrics?? They are original…came from a poem I wrote… with a few changes to fit the situation…wanted to hit yall with something new… J I know Yall gon’ wanna kill me for leavin it like this but yall know what’s up… we gotta get ready for another confrontation…and conclusion… Trey and Alyssa are both going to have to face some fears and get ready for this big change… In the comment section…offer Trey some advice…what will Alyssa need to forgive him??? Answer that and you might get featured in Part 6…include ur Twitter handle…you can also tweet me suggestions!!!

    Once again…I know I say it all the time but I really do love to write these stories…it’s something that really makes me happy… to see you all excited about what I like to do is simply amazing…it kind of gives me a little taste of the happiness Trey must feel when we be goin’ ham over him…I really do love all of you and I will be putting these stories together as a book…once it is ready I will start a discussion on here with my e-mail address so that I can start a list to send it out…it is my hope that you will share these stories with everyone you know and get ready for more!!! Trust me I ain’t through…and there are some new projects I am working on that is sure to keep your attention!!! Keep up with me and don’t forget to comment and check back…I’ll try to respond to them all!!

    Part 1: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-1-fan-story/

    Part 2: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-two/

    Part 3: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-three/

    Part 4: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-four

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on Oct 28, 2010 - 10:17PM

Part Five

(4 months Later)

Trey walked into the radio station and smiled…this was his last big interview before he could take a break…work was the only thing keeping him sane with Alyssa still refusing to see him but he couldn’t help but feel excited to be in her city and free to stay for a while…today was the day he was gonna win her back…no matter what he was gonna see her…

Steve Harvey: Ladies and Gentleman we have my main dude…one of the best R&B artist out here today in here wit us…We got Trey Songz errbody…

T: (laughs) Thanks Uncle Steve

Steve Harvey: Yall see he call me Uncle Steve…that’s cuz he kno me… I don’t even really mess wit a lotta these young artists out here but this boy here…I tell yall he be SANGIN…tell the people about the new album…

T: It’s called Trey Songz vs. Tremaine Neverson… I really want my fans to get a little glimpse of the constant battle I have…a lot of times Trey Songz gets all the glory and Tremaine has to take a backseat….I’m hoping my fans can see that…

Steve Harvey: How do you think this Album will compare to your first four albums?

T: Well…I think this one is my best work…I try to get better with every album…grow with every album…I have to say this album is dope…definitely my favorite

Steve Harvey: So..We gon’ play a song off the ablum right now…tell us a lil about it…

T: Well…It’s called “If Only”… and it is really meant to say what you can’t always say out loud…In this song I’m basically sayin’ that if I had the chance or the opportunity…this is what I would say…and how she would feel if she could hear me…or see me…

Steve Harvey: Now...I den heard the song and I have to say…It has a real ol school vibe to it…cuz you see…people don’t whine on a song no mo…people don’t sing to show how they feel no mo…I’m tellin’ you this boy is SANGIN on this song… you can really feel every word and like you was really in the studio just cryin’…where did you get your inspiration?

T: Well…I go through different things in my personal life…when I recorded this song I really was singing from the heart… and I am actually really lucky I made the deadline to get it on the album…

Steve Harvey: well I tell you what brotha you doin’ ya thang…why don’t you gon’ head and lead us into the song…

T: Everybody…stop what you are doing…take a break and listen to my new jant... “If Only”…Ay Uncle Steve…can I sing a little before u play it?

Steve Harvey: You gon head…

T: (Eyes Closed, Singing from the heart)… “ If Only… she could hear me….then she would know… know what I’m feeling…OOHHHHHH…OOOOOHHHH …If Only”

(Meanwhile)

Alyssa sat with her hands on her growing belly staring at her phone… telling Trey this kind of news was going to be the hardest thing she ever had to do… It was something that had to happen in person and since she took a leave of absence, staying out of the public eye helped her keep things to herself…  it was always her morning ritual to listen to the “Strawberry Letter” on the Steve Harvey morning show…somehow listening to stories coming from people in situations worse than hers… so she clicked on her radio and put her feet up on the couch…the sound of Trey’s voice made her heart pound…the sincerity in his tone as he belted out acapella forced her to listen and as the song began to play tears began to fall…

(Lyrics)

I tried to live without you but you won’t leave my mind…

Cuz what I had with you is so hard…so hard to find…

Memories of you leavin haunt me…

All I need is once chance…once opportunity

I promise… to be all you need….

I pray you still believe …

Without you I’m incomplete…

Girl I belong with you and you only…

This house is no longer a home I’m so lonely…

Girl I’m ready….My love is for yoOOUUUU….

OOOHHHHHHHH oohhhhhh

If Only….

Alyssa could hear those words over and over even after the song ended and her heart just wanted to run to him…but she still felt uncertain…her phone buzzed bringing out of her thoughts…

A: Hey Tasha

T: Girrrrl…I know you just heard Trey serenading you…

A: It’s just a song Tash… aren’t you supposed to be workin’ anyway…

T: Alyssa, We both know that you know I know what I’m doin’…but that baby must be going to your head if you don’t think that song was all about you…now…IF ONLY you would just call him I can tell everyone about lil Trigga…keeping this secret is so hard!!!

A: (laughs) girl…stop…I’m not ready yet

T: You better get ready…the baby will be here before we know it…what you gon’ do have it first and tell him later…

A: I don’t know…I’m doing just fine without him knowing…he’ll complicate things… I don’t even know if he wants to be a father right now…

T: That really doesn’t matter because he is going to be one anyway…what are you so afraid of? It’s not like he would only want you for the baby…you hear him cryin all on the radio… he loves you

A: Sometimes love isn’t enough…Helen might be a better fit for him…and his life…

T: If he wanted her he would have her by now…instead he still waitin’ on you…that has to count for somethin’

A: It does…I just…I don’t know…I guess I’m scared…

T: well sooner or later the truth is gonna come out…

(Back to Trey)

Steve Harvey: Alright errbody…yall  just heard some real sangin…yall make sure yall go get the new album TreySongz Vs. Tremaine Neverson and support good music like this…it’s not erryday you hear music like this

Trey: Thanks Uncle Steve… and Shouts out to all of my fans out there…My TreysAngels who have really been holdin’ it down for me through everything…

Steve Harvey: Before I let you leave you know you gotta tell em who got the best morning show in the country…

Trey: You already know…It’s the Steve Harvey Mornin’ Show…

Steve Harvey: After we get back…We gon’ hit yall with the strawberry letter…

Trey came over to Steve to thank him again and say goodbye…but Uncle Steve had a little more in mind…

Steve Harvey: I really enjoyed you on my show

Trey: I enjoyed being here

Steve Harvey: Now that we off the air…I can really keep it real witcha…

Trey: (Smiles) What up…

Steve Harvey: This is the best album you ever have done and I think it’s because you are really goin’ through…You ain’t gotta tell me…see cuz Uncle Steve already know…You get her back yet?

Trey: Not Yet…I’m hopin today is the day…goin to see her…

Steve Harvey: now…I den been threw dis before so I’m gon give it to ya straight…If you want her back you gon have to commit to her…

Trey: (Pauses) Huh?

Steve Harvey: When you got a good woman like that…and you know that’s who you need to be wit you gon’ have to commit to her…let her know that all that stuff is in the past…it’s time to grow up…

Trey: Alright Steve…I’ll keep that in mind…

Steve Harvey: I’m tellin’ you cuz I kno…I ain’t just talkin…I really been there…

Trey: Thanks man… look I gotta go…

Heading out of the radio station Trey blocked his number and called Alyssa’s office hoping to hear her voice on the other end but came out disappointed…

Tasha: Alyssa Carter’s office this is Tasha speaking how may I help you?

Trey: Tash…it’s Trey…can you put me through to Alyssa I know she’s there…

Tasha: (sensing the desperation in Trey’s voice) I’m sorry Trey but she’s not here…she’s on a leave of absence she won’t be back for at least a few more months…

That was the closes hint Tasha could offer without breaking her sister rules…even though she hated how Trey did Alyssa, the love in his voice and knowing what she knew made her root for them to get back together…

Trey: She would never do that… What is really going on?

Tasha: Exactly what I said Trey…She needs to be away for a while…So she took a leave…she’ll be back once she is cleared to return…

Trey: Wait a minute… what do you mean when she is cleared to return...what happened to her?

Tasha: Nothing serious…she just needs to be home Trey… look I can’t tell you anything else…

Trey hung up on Tasha and told his driver to head straight over to Alyssa’s condo…. Once he made it he rushed inside only to get stopped by the doorman…

Doorman: Hey…What up Trey… Long time man…Long Time…

Trey: Hey…can you let me up?

Doorman: No can do…sorry… but you ain’t on the list no more…and I can’t just go breakin rules and stuff…

Trey: I really need to see Alyssa she hasn’t been at work…It’s important…just let me up

Doorman: Oh she ain’t goin back there until she drop that load…you gotta admit she lookin’ good tho…even wit her lil belly all out

The news hit Trey like a ton of bricks…Alyssa was carrying his child…He was going to be a father…

Trey: Ay man…I really need to get up there…

Doorman: you know we cool Trey but she don’t wanna see you…I can’t even do it…

Trey: (Quiet serious tone) Look…You either gon’ let me up there and not say nothin’ or I’m just gon’ have to make a call and get somebody to make you let me up and you won’t be able to say nothin’…take your pick

Doorman:…You ain’t gotta get all angry… (letting Trey pass) you know I was gon’ let you up… I owe you… (yelling out to him) I got a lot of pussy playin yo music!

Trey wasted no time heading for Alyssa’s door…saying a quick prayer first he knocked hoping she would answer…

A: (From Inside) IT’S OPEN TASH!!

Trey slowly turned the doorknob and let himself in…the sound of water running led him to the kitchen where Trey spotted Alyssa washing dishes… she turned around with a smile and jumped holding her chest while her eyes filled with surprise as they locked onto him…

Trey studied her body unable to say anything…she was more breathtaking than he remembered… with her hair pulled back he could see every curve in her face…her widened eyes were still bold, brown, and beautiful… and she was silent…as if she was taking in his reaction… and he was shocked… seeing her belly poking out of her tank top…it was real…

T: Why didn’t you tell me?

 

Yall like them song lyrics?? They are original…came from a poem I wrote… with a few changes to fit the situation…wanted to hit yall with something new… J I know Yall gon’ wanna kill me for leavin it like this but yall know what’s up… we gotta get ready for another confrontation…and conclusion… Trey and Alyssa are both going to have to face some fears and get ready for this big change… In the comment section…offer Trey some advice…what will Alyssa need to forgive him??? Answer that and you might get featured in Part 6…include ur Twitter handle…you can also tweet me suggestions!!!

Once again…I know I say it all the time but I really do love to write these stories…it’s something that really makes me happy… to see you all excited about what I like to do is simply amazing…it kind of gives me a little taste of the happiness Trey must feel when we be goin’ ham over him…I really do love all of you and I will be putting these stories together as a book…once it is ready I will start a discussion on here with my e-mail address so that I can start a list to send it out…it is my hope that you will share these stories with everyone you know and get ready for more!!! Trust me I ain’t through…and there are some new projects I am working on that is sure to keep your attention!!! Keep up with me and don’t forget to comment and check back…I’ll try to respond to them all!!

Part 1: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-1-fan-story/

Part 2: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-two/

Part 3: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-three/

Part 4: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-four

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@LadyAJ03's picture

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MsAngione's picture

Oh I will be in CHI next week for Monica concert, what part of IL you stay, I would love to meet a fellow TAngel. DM me on Twitter.

MsAngione's picture

That was great lady. I enjoy these,. I even think that you could sell this as a possible BET Trey movie. Girl, handle yo business. @MsAngiONE is my Twitter.

ForbiddenAngel's picture

Wow!! I must admit that this story was my favorite it was almost like real to me. I could visualize everything especially the radio station part, that's exactly how Steve be.

@LadyAJ03's picture

@MsJJBaybee...Thanks for reading...Don't forget to check out the conclusion!

MsJJBabyee's picture

OMGGG!!!! i didnt expect her to be preggoo ! ahhhh lol ... im falling in love with this story more and moree ! keep doing your thang hunn!! && them song lyricsss were on pointtt ! love it , love it , loveee itt !

KA-LEE-YA...KALEYIA's picture

i was hype to..... i was already for her to break it down to him.... :( but the story was great regardless..... LOVE IT

TREYSANGELBEAUTY's picture

OK LADY U GOT ME ALL HYPED N LEFT ME WITH THAT DAM U IM LOVIN IT THOUGH GET IT GURL IM BHIND U 100%

ccarty175@yahoo.com's picture

Oh but other than that! Loved part 5! The steve harvey thing was cool! I was so excited when trey went to go see alyssa! Iam on suspense mode on what happens next?! Gotta know how this story goes in part 6.

ccarty175@yahoo.com's picture

In order for alyssa to forgive trey! Trey needs to get his priorities together. Make up your mind if its alyssa he gotta leave the exs and the groupies alone. Save all those urges for her only. He gotta know when enough is enough. Can't keep sexing every girl you see. Gotta settle down sometime! Now that trey is gonna be a dad he gotta remember what it was like to grow up without him in the picture and realize he has a comittment to his child & her. Its just as important as his career. He's gonna have to know how to separate those lives. Entertainer. And family man. Trey needs to show alyssa consistently allday every day that he's the one for her by just being there for her every need. And even when they are apart he got her back and alyssa can count on him and not worry that he will fail her or the baby. Hopefully trey will make the right choice iam rooting 4 them to work out! They seem good together! :)

@LadyAJ03's picture

@Charbaby... Thanks...I'm glad you liked the song...@Love_Songz I twill try to be sure to never let you guys down!!!

BossLadySims's picture

How you just gone stop right there? Your stories never let me down. I agree with @Tricia I ain't ready for a conclusion. Ooh, I gotta hear that song come to life. We gotta tweet that to Trey :)

CharBaby's picture

AWWWWWWW I LOVED THE SONG!!!!!! I COULD JUST PICTURE THE LOOK ON TREYS FACE WHEN HE SAW HER LIL BELLY! I CANT WAIT FOR PART 6!!!!

@LadyAJ03's picture

@ECJ...Thank you... I wanted to use something different...a song we don't know and since we know all of Trey's songz I had to write one...@Tricia...all great things must come to an end... new ish comin soon!!! You already kno...

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@Shannon....What is your twitter handle again? DM me @LadyAJ03

ladyt1980's picture

as alwayz u leave me wanting more. i really appreciate u sharing ur talent w/ us #angel. god has truly blessed u w/ a gift. so my mind is churning, get @ me so i can talk 2 u seriously. i have sum ideas and u mite the person who can hlp.

ECJ's picture

Awesome!!!
The song perfect (sounds like something he would sing)

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

Conclusion??? I'm not ready for the conclusion. Really??? You're gonna end it? I don't want it to end *tear*.

@LadyAJ03's picture

@Daniel_Shawn....LMAO...I like that He needs to put his heart before his dick...Real Talk!!! :) @Shay...Thank you so much for reading...I have to admit...writing Steve's voice was alot of fun...

Daniel_Shawn's picture

ok first of all u killed the steve harvey part sounded jus like him lol so i think trey needs to seriously sit down and get his priorities in order and if tht means taking a break 4 the sake of his child then so be it rising a baby in a stable household should be the most important thing and he needs to prove to alyssa tht he can be completely faithful and put his heart b4 his dick for her to ever trust him again

but on another note i love the lrics of the song and i cant wait for the conclusion!!!!!!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

First of all loooovvvvveeeed da way you made Steve sound! It sounds just like how he sounds on the radio! And I think Trey should just put his career on hold for a lil and prove to her that he's gonna be in her and the child's life. Maaannnn dis is getting good! Sheeeeesh! Lmao! Oh by the way LOVE the song lyrics!!!

@LadyAJ03's picture

@A_Perfect_Angel...Tomorrow Sweetie!!! :)...@tricia... I tried...I love me some Steve Harvey... Thank you for all the love...!!!

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

Yes we need part 6 in like three minutes. This was so, so, so, so, so gooooood!!! You had Steve Harvey right on the money. I could literally HEAR him saying all those things...but when you said "Young Artist", I heard him saying "Young Cat" instead. This was definitely him though. Love those Strawberry Letters.

And that song was the bomb! I sat up here & song the melody & everything. I agree with @SexySagLuvSongz...if he like it he betta put a ring on it. LOVE IT!!!

A_Perfect_Angel's picture

NO you didn't just stop like that hahaha, i'm on the edge of my seat & you end it. Can I get part 6 tonight lol

@LadyAJ03's picture

@stlgirl4lyfe2010 You know you love it...@Trinaa33...lol...don't fall now...

trinaa33 WiseAngel's picture

Girl you know you ain't right for leaving us hanging like that I was really getting into it damn near fell into my computer screen, well keep it going make it good sorry I have no advice right now , but if I come up with something I will hit you up!

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

you and your climaxes just when it start getting good u stop lol

@LadyAJ03's picture

@Kate_2010...LOL...I don't know why but I was picturing a Mike Epps character while I wrote that part...Thanks for the Advice...I will be sure to let Trey (The Character) know...lol

iFKNLOVETREY's picture

First of all, we need to fire that big mouth ass doorman! He a damn mess! Lol! I agree with @SexySagLuvSongz, he need to TRY to put a ring on it but I don't think Alyssa should accept it when he first offers it. She should make him really prove to her that she has him 100%. @Peachy_Songz

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