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    October 29, 2010

    Part Six The Conclusion

    Alyssa crossed her arms and stared at her feet…she couldn’t believe he was standing in front of her…there was no turning back…she had to face him…

    A: I wanted to…I tried…but…

    T: were you just gon’ have my baby and keep it from me?

    A: No! (Looks up at him) Why would you say something like that….

    T: Well you look pretty pregnant and if I hadn’t come here I still wouldn’t know…Why? Why did you feel like you couldn’t just tell me??

    A: You made your choice… the last time I saw you…you were with Helen…

    T: No…The last time you saw me I was standing on the side of the road begging you not to leave….

    A: Look…Trey I Can’t do this right now…

    T: Well When can you do it Alyssa?!...That baby is coming and most dudes have at least nine months to get ready…how much more time do I have??? Huh???

    A: Trey…

    T: I’m serious… How much more time do I have?

    A: about three and half more months…

    T: Damn!! Hold up…so you knew before you came to see me??

    A: That doesn’t matter…Look, I planned on telling you when the time was right…I’ve had a lot on my mind…and no matter how upset you are…this isn’t about you…

    T: I’m not upset with you…I just wish you didn’t feel like you needed to do this all by yourself…

    A: I’m not by myself… I have a lot of people that have been there for me…

    T: But you didn’t have me…that’s my seed you are carrying…

    A: I don’t want you to do anything you are not ready for…

    T: What is that supposed to mean?

    A: I just don’t want you to feel like you need to take care of me or be around if you really don’t want to…

    T: Alyssa I love you…and I’m going to be here for you… I wish I could have been there in the beginning…but I won’t miss anything else…I can promise you that

    A: Really? And what about your career…you’ve never taken this much time away…

    T: I’ve never been in this situation…

    A: I don’t expect you to give up everything for this baby

    T: But I will because that’s what I’m supposed to do… (Walks closer cupping her face in his hands)…I know I messed up… I know I hurt you…but don’t you ever think that I will give up and walk out on you…or this baby

    A: Trey…This is not about us…

    T: It’s all about us…we did this together… don’t you know you make my heart beat baby…

    A: Well I wasn’t enough for you…(Pushing him away)…I can’t take back this baby…and I wouldn’t if I could…but don’t think for one second that I plan to take you back…

    T: But…

    A: I don’t need someone who doesn’t know…or isn’t sure anymore… I’m through taking it slow...I’m through with all the games… I’m gonna be a mother now…This little one is gonna learn from me… from us (Takes Treys hands and places them on her stomach)

    Trey felt the baby moving around and he closed his eyes tight…thanking God…He still wanted her back… but in this moment all he could think about was the new life kicking at his hands…

    T: Man…That’s crazy…

    A: Amazing right?

    T: Yeah… I don’t even know what to say…

    A: Do you want to go with me to my ultrasound appointment tomorrow?? Then you can see it and we can find out if it’s a boy or a girl… couldn’t tell last time…

    T: You already know I’m there… I’m gon’ be there every step of the way… I can’t wait to tell my mom and…

    A: man… It’s gonna be a circus around us…

    T: Don’t worry I’ll make sure everything will be ok… my team will handle it…

    That statement made Alyssa think about Trey and how much she still believed in his words…she was still willing to depend on him…Tasha walked in and spotted Alyssa and Trey in the kitchen…she smiled at the obvious connection that still bonded them as they laughed and joked about the baby…

    Tasha: Well looky looky here… I guess I’ll come back later

    A: No Tash… you can stay…Trey was just leaving…

    Trey: Yeah…but only for now… I will be back…I promise to be the first thing you see when you open your eyes…

    Alyssa smiled and tried to walk past Trey to avoid his embrace but his arms still managed to wrap around her and pulled her close…

    Trey: (whispers in her ear) I love you and only you…

    His lips pressed against her neck softly before he backed away slowly heading for the door…

     

    (That Night)

    Trey was finally able to settle down in his hotel room…After speaking to his team and his family on the phone for hours he had one last task to complete…He had to go live and make an announcement to his fans…Wearing a plain black t-shirt and fitted cap he settled in before sending out a tweet announcing that he was going live… His fans arrived on the Ustream in no time… and the stream was filled with loving hellos and phrases…

    T: Hey yall…What UP!!!! Can yall Here me?? Is everything cool??

    The stream was filled with “Yes we can hear you” “Love your hat” and “I love you Trey” Letting him know that everything was working just fine…

    T: So yall know about the album…how yall like the new single “If Only” what yall think about that??

    The Stream was flooded with responses so Trey took his time reading them picking out the ones that stuck out to him…

                    @NeNe_28: That song is so sweet!!!!!!

                    @Cuteandsassy823: Was that song about Alyssa?

                    @MBA2011_TTU: DOPPPEEEE!!!

                     @Char_Neverson: Love Love Loveed IT!!

     

    T: I see yall like it… Somebody just said it’s dope… somebody else just said Is the song about Alyssa? Dang…Yall goin’ in ain’t yall? (Laughs softly)

                    @Treyssidditykay: Are you and Alyssa back together?

                    @Thabaddestdiva: What happened to Alyssa???

     

    T: Ok…I see yall wanna know if the song was about Alyssa… Let me just say this…the album is called Trey Songz Vs. Tremaine Neverson because that’s really the struggle I go through… If only is a real personal song…

    Trey scanned the Ustream and watched closely…. The reaction from his fans was kind of surprising…

                    @Shay_bae83….If you want Alyssa back you need to take a break

                    @Fabgyrl25…Trey you need to take time off and get your girl back…

                    @Thabaddestdiva: why are you acting like we don’t know about Alyssa?

                    @Treyssidditykay: We want you to be happy Trey….

                    @Daniel_Shawn: You always put us first…go let Tremaine have some time!

                    @RavieBaybeYuup: Take a break!!!

    T: I’m glad I see a lot of you saying that I need some time away… I actually will be taking a break…I have some situations that I need to deal with personally so I’m gonna be away until everything is cool… to thabaddestdiva… I do know that yall know about Alyssa…and yes she is a part of that personal situation I need to deal with… I know yall know some of what is going on and I’m sure you will understand more soon but I just wanted to take some time to tell yall I’m not gon’ be around for a while…I expect yall to keep holdin’ it down for me tho (Smiles)

                    @Peachy_Songz: You know we gon’ hold it down for you

                    @gimmeunusual: We love you Trey!!

                    @Treyssidditykay: aww…we gon miss you but Alyssa is more important

    @Get_It_Bigg: Awww man.…well... you have to make sure you are happy…

    @JamRoC_4eVa : You need to Beg for her forgiveness!!

                    @SexySagluvSongz: Yeah… if you like Alyssa then you need to put a ring on it!!! LOL

                    @Kate_2010: Commit…Commit…Commit!!!!

     

    T: (Laughs) I’m tryin to tell yall this is gon’ be my last Ustream for a while and all yall can do is tell me what to do??? Yall ain’t gon’ miss me??

    That statement got Trey the reaction he originally expected… the stream was filled with “I miss You” and “I love you” and Trey was ready to say goodbye…

    T: Well I don’t really wanna say goodbye so I’m gon just say I’ll see yall later…I’m not gon’ forget about yall…so I don’t expect yall to forget about me…make sure yall got that album…make sure everybody you know go get the album…I love yall… I couldn’t be Trey Songz without yall… (Blows a big kiss)…peace….

    (Next Day)

    Trey studied the shape that came up on the monitor during Alyssa’s ultrasound…Looking back at Alyssa he noticed a tear fall from her eye… smiling… he went back to focusing on their miracle…

    Ultrasound Tech: This little one hates to sit still

    A: (laughs) I bet the baby gets that from daddy…

    Ultrasound Tech: Do you want to know the Sex of the baby?

    A: Yes

    T: No…I mean…I don’t wanna know unless it’s a girl…

    A: Trey…are you saying you want a baby girl??

    T: Only if she is gonna be just like you…

    Alyssa looked away…Trey always knew how to charm her…

    Ultrasound Tech: So… am I keeping it a secret until baby’s birthday??

    T: Naw…Go ‘head and tell us… we wanna know

    Ultrasound Tech: Looks like it’s a boy… you see right here…

    T: Wow…

    A: Wow is right… looks like he’s gonna be more like you than I thought (smiles)

    Ultrasound Tech: (laughs along with Trey at Alyssa’s comment) overall…it looks like the baby is healthy…definitely growing normally…

    A: ((wiping her belly off)… Thank you…

    Trey and Alyssa left the office with tons of 3-D pictures to show off…comparing them to see who the baby looked like more on the way to the car…

    T: Can I confess something to you?

    A: What is it??

    T: I’m so scared right now…I don’t even know how to be a good father…

    A: Trey…when I found out I was pregnant I knew you would be a great father…you are patient… full of love… and very wise… our son is gonna learn a lot from you…

    T: Only the good things I hope…

    A: Trey…don’t worry… You will be everything this little boy needs and so much more…

    Alyssa gave Trey’s hand a squeeze to reassure him… no matter what she planned to keep him in her life…Trey felt so much love in her touch…she was the only woman other than his mother that could make him feel safe… it was time to do the same for her…

    T: I wanna take you somewhere…but you can’t know where we goin…

    A: What are you up to…

    T: Nothin…I just wanna show you somethin’…. Let me put this on (pulling out a blindfold)

    Trey drove in circles for a while to throw Alyssa off before heading for their destination… leading her out of the car he placed his hand around her waist and walked her to a place he knew would be special… a place he knew would let her know how much she meant to him…

    Alyssa couldn’t hold in her smile once her blindfold was revealed… Trey took her to the Angler Fish habitat at the aquarium…

    A: What are we doing here?

    T: I know I messed things up with you… but I still wanna be like these fish…

    A: Trey…it’s not that simple…

    T: You know… I did a little research about these fish… did you know that the Male is pretty much just wandering around…searching…until he picks on the scent of his mate… once he finds her he can’t ever let go…

    A: Trey…

    T: Shh… don’t talk… just listen… this isn’t really easy for me to say… (walking closer to her looking into her eyes) I remembered… through everything I remembered you…  your scent…all this time I was searching for you… I lost my way…but only for a minute… (places her hand on his heart) I had to end that so I could give you this…and now you have all of it…

    A: (tears falling)…I’m just…

    T: (Wiping her face)…scared… I know…and so am I but I know we can make it…I want to commit my life to you… to my son… I wanna give you everything you deserve…everything you need… but most of all… I want you to know that you have me…I want you to know it… without question…

    A: But what about all of the other girls…and your career… and…

    T: Alyssa Carter…(Down on his knee) It took me some time but now…I’m ready… I’m ready to hold you down for life…I believe in us… Just say you believe in me…(reveals ring) Are you ready??

    The look of the ring…the love in Trey’s eyes and the feeling in her heart convinced Alyssa that she was ready… He had her from the moment they laid eyes on each other for the first time but she couldn’t resist making him sweat a little…

    A: I don’t know Trey… you really hurt me…

    T: I promise baby… I will never…

    A: I’m just playin (Smiles)… I can’t wait to spend the rest of my life with you…

    T: (Places the ring on her finger before standing)…I can…because I want it to last forever!

    Their kissed sealed the deal and they could care less about all of the cameras flashing and people staring…it was official…Leading her out of the aquarium Trey looked to the heavens thanking God for Alyssa and made a promise to himself that this would be the first and the LAST TIME he would truly give his whole heart to a woman…

     

    I would like to thank all of you for reading everything I have posted so far… my goal was to make you laugh…make you cry…make you think… and even make you jump out of your seat a little bit J… What I want you to take from this drama is that True Love is when two imperfect people see each other perfectly… Trey and Alyssa have been through it but in the end… love really does conquer all when it is based on the right things… I hope you enjoyed this as much as I enjoyed writing it… the book will be coming soon so look out for more information!!! MUAH!!!  I tried shoutin’ out some of yall by including you in the story… if I missed you I will definitely try to get you into something in the future!!!

    Part 1: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-1-fan-story/

    Part 2: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-two/

    Part 3: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-three/

    Part 4: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-four

    Part 5: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-five

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on Oct 29, 2010 - 10:20PM

Part Six The Conclusion

Alyssa crossed her arms and stared at her feet…she couldn’t believe he was standing in front of her…there was no turning back…she had to face him…

A: I wanted to…I tried…but…

T: were you just gon’ have my baby and keep it from me?

A: No! (Looks up at him) Why would you say something like that….

T: Well you look pretty pregnant and if I hadn’t come here I still wouldn’t know…Why? Why did you feel like you couldn’t just tell me??

A: You made your choice… the last time I saw you…you were with Helen…

T: No…The last time you saw me I was standing on the side of the road begging you not to leave….

A: Look…Trey I Can’t do this right now…

T: Well When can you do it Alyssa?!...That baby is coming and most dudes have at least nine months to get ready…how much more time do I have??? Huh???

A: Trey…

T: I’m serious… How much more time do I have?

A: about three and half more months…

T: Damn!! Hold up…so you knew before you came to see me??

A: That doesn’t matter…Look, I planned on telling you when the time was right…I’ve had a lot on my mind…and no matter how upset you are…this isn’t about you…

T: I’m not upset with you…I just wish you didn’t feel like you needed to do this all by yourself…

A: I’m not by myself… I have a lot of people that have been there for me…

T: But you didn’t have me…that’s my seed you are carrying…

A: I don’t want you to do anything you are not ready for…

T: What is that supposed to mean?

A: I just don’t want you to feel like you need to take care of me or be around if you really don’t want to…

T: Alyssa I love you…and I’m going to be here for you… I wish I could have been there in the beginning…but I won’t miss anything else…I can promise you that

A: Really? And what about your career…you’ve never taken this much time away…

T: I’ve never been in this situation…

A: I don’t expect you to give up everything for this baby

T: But I will because that’s what I’m supposed to do… (Walks closer cupping her face in his hands)…I know I messed up… I know I hurt you…but don’t you ever think that I will give up and walk out on you…or this baby

A: Trey…This is not about us…

T: It’s all about us…we did this together… don’t you know you make my heart beat baby…

A: Well I wasn’t enough for you…(Pushing him away)…I can’t take back this baby…and I wouldn’t if I could…but don’t think for one second that I plan to take you back…

T: But…

A: I don’t need someone who doesn’t know…or isn’t sure anymore… I’m through taking it slow...I’m through with all the games… I’m gonna be a mother now…This little one is gonna learn from me… from us (Takes Treys hands and places them on her stomach)

Trey felt the baby moving around and he closed his eyes tight…thanking God…He still wanted her back… but in this moment all he could think about was the new life kicking at his hands…

T: Man…That’s crazy…

A: Amazing right?

T: Yeah… I don’t even know what to say…

A: Do you want to go with me to my ultrasound appointment tomorrow?? Then you can see it and we can find out if it’s a boy or a girl… couldn’t tell last time…

T: You already know I’m there… I’m gon’ be there every step of the way… I can’t wait to tell my mom and…

A: man… It’s gonna be a circus around us…

T: Don’t worry I’ll make sure everything will be ok… my team will handle it…

That statement made Alyssa think about Trey and how much she still believed in his words…she was still willing to depend on him…Tasha walked in and spotted Alyssa and Trey in the kitchen…she smiled at the obvious connection that still bonded them as they laughed and joked about the baby…

Tasha: Well looky looky here… I guess I’ll come back later

A: No Tash… you can stay…Trey was just leaving…

Trey: Yeah…but only for now… I will be back…I promise to be the first thing you see when you open your eyes…

Alyssa smiled and tried to walk past Trey to avoid his embrace but his arms still managed to wrap around her and pulled her close…

Trey: (whispers in her ear) I love you and only you…

His lips pressed against her neck softly before he backed away slowly heading for the door…

 

(That Night)

Trey was finally able to settle down in his hotel room…After speaking to his team and his family on the phone for hours he had one last task to complete…He had to go live and make an announcement to his fans…Wearing a plain black t-shirt and fitted cap he settled in before sending out a tweet announcing that he was going live… His fans arrived on the Ustream in no time… and the stream was filled with loving hellos and phrases…

T: Hey yall…What UP!!!! Can yall Here me?? Is everything cool??

The stream was filled with “Yes we can hear you” “Love your hat” and “I love you Trey” Letting him know that everything was working just fine…

T: So yall know about the album…how yall like the new single “If Only” what yall think about that??

The Stream was flooded with responses so Trey took his time reading them picking out the ones that stuck out to him…

                @NeNe_28: That song is so sweet!!!!!!

                @Cuteandsassy823: Was that song about Alyssa?

                @MBA2011_TTU: DOPPPEEEE!!!

                 @Char_Neverson: Love Love Loveed IT!!

 

T: I see yall like it… Somebody just said it’s dope… somebody else just said Is the song about Alyssa? Dang…Yall goin’ in ain’t yall? (Laughs softly)

                @Treyssidditykay: Are you and Alyssa back together?

                @Thabaddestdiva: What happened to Alyssa???

 

T: Ok…I see yall wanna know if the song was about Alyssa… Let me just say this…the album is called Trey Songz Vs. Tremaine Neverson because that’s really the struggle I go through… If only is a real personal song…

Trey scanned the Ustream and watched closely…. The reaction from his fans was kind of surprising…

                @Shay_bae83….If you want Alyssa back you need to take a break

                @Fabgyrl25…Trey you need to take time off and get your girl back…

                @Thabaddestdiva: why are you acting like we don’t know about Alyssa?

                @Treyssidditykay: We want you to be happy Trey….

                @Daniel_Shawn: You always put us first…go let Tremaine have some time!

                @RavieBaybeYuup: Take a break!!!

T: I’m glad I see a lot of you saying that I need some time away… I actually will be taking a break…I have some situations that I need to deal with personally so I’m gonna be away until everything is cool… to thabaddestdiva… I do know that yall know about Alyssa…and yes she is a part of that personal situation I need to deal with… I know yall know some of what is going on and I’m sure you will understand more soon but I just wanted to take some time to tell yall I’m not gon’ be around for a while…I expect yall to keep holdin’ it down for me tho (Smiles)

                @Peachy_Songz: You know we gon’ hold it down for you

                @gimmeunusual: We love you Trey!!

                @Treyssidditykay: aww…we gon miss you but Alyssa is more important

@Get_It_Bigg: Awww man.…well... you have to make sure you are happy…

@JamRoC_4eVa : You need to Beg for her forgiveness!!

                @SexySagluvSongz: Yeah… if you like Alyssa then you need to put a ring on it!!! LOL

                @Kate_2010: Commit…Commit…Commit!!!!

 

T: (Laughs) I’m tryin to tell yall this is gon’ be my last Ustream for a while and all yall can do is tell me what to do??? Yall ain’t gon’ miss me??

That statement got Trey the reaction he originally expected… the stream was filled with “I miss You” and “I love you” and Trey was ready to say goodbye…

T: Well I don’t really wanna say goodbye so I’m gon just say I’ll see yall later…I’m not gon’ forget about yall…so I don’t expect yall to forget about me…make sure yall got that album…make sure everybody you know go get the album…I love yall… I couldn’t be Trey Songz without yall… (Blows a big kiss)…peace….

(Next Day)

Trey studied the shape that came up on the monitor during Alyssa’s ultrasound…Looking back at Alyssa he noticed a tear fall from her eye… smiling… he went back to focusing on their miracle…

Ultrasound Tech: This little one hates to sit still

A: (laughs) I bet the baby gets that from daddy…

Ultrasound Tech: Do you want to know the Sex of the baby?

A: Yes

T: No…I mean…I don’t wanna know unless it’s a girl…

A: Trey…are you saying you want a baby girl??

T: Only if she is gonna be just like you…

Alyssa looked away…Trey always knew how to charm her…

Ultrasound Tech: So… am I keeping it a secret until baby’s birthday??

T: Naw…Go ‘head and tell us… we wanna know

Ultrasound Tech: Looks like it’s a boy… you see right here…

T: Wow…

A: Wow is right… looks like he’s gonna be more like you than I thought (smiles)

Ultrasound Tech: (laughs along with Trey at Alyssa’s comment) overall…it looks like the baby is healthy…definitely growing normally…

A: ((wiping her belly off)… Thank you…

Trey and Alyssa left the office with tons of 3-D pictures to show off…comparing them to see who the baby looked like more on the way to the car…

T: Can I confess something to you?

A: What is it??

T: I’m so scared right now…I don’t even know how to be a good father…

A: Trey…when I found out I was pregnant I knew you would be a great father…you are patient… full of love… and very wise… our son is gonna learn a lot from you…

T: Only the good things I hope…

A: Trey…don’t worry… You will be everything this little boy needs and so much more…

Alyssa gave Trey’s hand a squeeze to reassure him… no matter what she planned to keep him in her life…Trey felt so much love in her touch…she was the only woman other than his mother that could make him feel safe… it was time to do the same for her…

T: I wanna take you somewhere…but you can’t know where we goin…

A: What are you up to…

T: Nothin…I just wanna show you somethin’…. Let me put this on (pulling out a blindfold)

Trey drove in circles for a while to throw Alyssa off before heading for their destination… leading her out of the car he placed his hand around her waist and walked her to a place he knew would be special… a place he knew would let her know how much she meant to him…

Alyssa couldn’t hold in her smile once her blindfold was revealed… Trey took her to the Angler Fish habitat at the aquarium…

A: What are we doing here?

T: I know I messed things up with you… but I still wanna be like these fish…

A: Trey…it’s not that simple…

T: You know… I did a little research about these fish… did you know that the Male is pretty much just wandering around…searching…until he picks on the scent of his mate… once he finds her he can’t ever let go…

A: Trey…

T: Shh… don’t talk… just listen… this isn’t really easy for me to say… (walking closer to her looking into her eyes) I remembered… through everything I remembered you…  your scent…all this time I was searching for you… I lost my way…but only for a minute… (places her hand on his heart) I had to end that so I could give you this…and now you have all of it…

A: (tears falling)…I’m just…

T: (Wiping her face)…scared… I know…and so am I but I know we can make it…I want to commit my life to you… to my son… I wanna give you everything you deserve…everything you need… but most of all… I want you to know that you have me…I want you to know it… without question…

A: But what about all of the other girls…and your career… and…

T: Alyssa Carter…(Down on his knee) It took me some time but now…I’m ready… I’m ready to hold you down for life…I believe in us… Just say you believe in me…(reveals ring) Are you ready??

The look of the ring…the love in Trey’s eyes and the feeling in her heart convinced Alyssa that she was ready… He had her from the moment they laid eyes on each other for the first time but she couldn’t resist making him sweat a little…

A: I don’t know Trey… you really hurt me…

T: I promise baby… I will never…

A: I’m just playin (Smiles)… I can’t wait to spend the rest of my life with you…

T: (Places the ring on her finger before standing)…I can…because I want it to last forever!

Their kissed sealed the deal and they could care less about all of the cameras flashing and people staring…it was official…Leading her out of the aquarium Trey looked to the heavens thanking God for Alyssa and made a promise to himself that this would be the first and the LAST TIME he would truly give his whole heart to a woman…

 

I would like to thank all of you for reading everything I have posted so far… my goal was to make you laugh…make you cry…make you think… and even make you jump out of your seat a little bit J… What I want you to take from this drama is that True Love is when two imperfect people see each other perfectly… Trey and Alyssa have been through it but in the end… love really does conquer all when it is based on the right things… I hope you enjoyed this as much as I enjoyed writing it… the book will be coming soon so look out for more information!!! MUAH!!!  I tried shoutin’ out some of yall by including you in the story… if I missed you I will definitely try to get you into something in the future!!!

Part 1: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-1-fan-story/

Part 2: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-two/

Part 3: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-three/

Part 4: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-four

Part 5: http://www.treysongz.com/talk/the-last-time-part-five

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@Linz84...I promise to keep you all informed...@Mizcedezbaby...Thank you!

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That was so beautiful!! *tear. Amazingly done job!!

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Hey LadyAJ03!!!

Your such a great writer!!! Each chapter is getting better and better! Thats so nice Trey propose to Alyssa! Tell us Angels when you publish your book!

Good luck!! :-)

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@Kikamiko...Thank you...I am so honored by your comment!

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Girl I put the book I was reading to the side ever since you started posting, I have been truly entertained and can not wait for the book. You are truly talented! Oh yeah...keep 'em coming boo!! lol ;)

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@stlgirl4lyfe2010...ain't no way I'm gon' tell you what the next one is gonna b about...you have to wait and see :)...@Fabgyrl25 thank you so much for your support...I hope Trey reads them too..that is my biggest wish right now!!!

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Yea!! A great happy ending! Iam so happy for them! Glad trey got it together for alyssa! Double yea! I saw my name in the story! :) You have done a great job with these stories ! Your imagination is off the hook! I look forward to when you get your work published I want a signed copy (lol)! Keep writing you have a wonderful gift that people would luv to have. I hope trey gets a chance to read your stories real soon! I would luv to know his thoughts! :) good luck ! Keep em coming ! :)

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

this was nice and I like that u used my twitter name in the story. What's the next wanna gonna be about if u write one

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@ECJ...I always try to have a reason behind everything...glad you noticed that!!

ECJ's picture

Bravo, Bravo!!
Your stories have substance which is a must for me, plus I'm a sap for love stories..lol
Can't wait for the book!!

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@Anmariee_1ofTrey'sFinest....Thank you so much for that...@Raven...I'm glad you lost your words because of my words :)... @Trinaa33... I will definately let all of you know...thank you for the support!

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That was really good ,for real you have a real gift and if you ever write a book and it's published let me know because I will definately buy it!

Raven RambunctiousAngel's picture

I'm At A Lost For Words!! This Was So Good!!!!! AMAZING
Cant Wait For Your Next Story (Putting You To Work Again) lol

Anmariee_1ofTrey'sFinest's picture

Thnx 4 the S/O...Thnx 2 u i don't have 2 buy novels...i just read what u produce...I LUV UR WORK...TRULLY!!!

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