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    October 07, 2010

    Wonder Woman

    Part 4

     

    Alyssa opened the door to the hotel room Trey reserved for her visit. The room was dark and quiet and she would have guessed that it was empty if she didn’t spot Trey sitting in a lounge chair facing the window in silence. He knew. He had to know.

    A: Hey…(Softly)

    Alyssa had to break the silence. She wanted to hear his voice even if it was going to be for the last time.

    Trey heard the soft click of the door as Alyssa closed it behind herself but he refused to move. The sound of her heels reminded him of the day they met…the way she captured his attention with her beauty…His jaw clenched and his arms remained folded across his chest as he continued to stare out of the window checking out a panoramic view of downtown. The innocent tone in her voice infuriated him…why did she have to sound so right when she was accused of doing so much wrong? Taking in a deep breath he exhaled slowly in an effort to calm down and release the hurt that was plaguing him.

    A: Trey…Why are you sitting in the dark?

    Alyssa reached for the light switch but Trey put his hand up and nonverbally ordered her to freeze.

    T: Leave them off…(Quiet…cool tone)

    A: Trey…Can we talk?

    T: (Laughs) I don’t even know who I am talking to…

    A: Trey…please, just let me explain….

    T: I’m gon’ let you explain alright…because you made me promise right? You made me promise that I would hear you out…so I am listening…I want you, to walk around here…look me in my eyes and tell me that everything I’m about to say isn’t true…I want to hear it from you.

    Alyssa slowly walked in front of the chair Trey was sitting at to face him. It was time. Now or Never.

    A: Trey….I…

    T: No…none of that…I’m going to ask the questions and I just want you to tell me if it is True or false…that’s it…

    A: Trey…Please let me talk to you, I can explain everything if you give me a…

    T: (Puts his finger to his lips) shhh…just answer true or false. Are you an only child?

    A: Yes

    T: Really?…because I remember when we met you told me that your brother helped you get backstage…

    A: Trey…

    T: Let’s just ask the big one now shall we? Were you tryin’ to seduce me so that you could set me up?

    A: Trey

    T: That didn’t sound like a True or a False…Try again…

    A: Ok…True…but...

    T: That’s all I need to know…

    A: No it isn’t all you need to know...

    T: Alyssa…If that is your real name…you came around me and played me…all for some money. What’s his name anyway…how much was dude payin’ you?( Throws a picture in her direction)

    Alyssa scanned the old photograph she took with her good friend Shawn trying to figure out how/why Brittany brought him into their drama. Her silence only made Trey feel like everything Brittany said was true.

    T: So it’s all true…let me get this all straight…You used my ex-girlfriend to give you information so that you could seduce me…that’s fucked up by itself, but to seduce me so that you could steal my sperm and sell it to somebody so that they could try to set me up for money is just…damn

    A: That’s not true Trey…

    T: Oh, It’s not?…

    A: Well not all of it…

    Trey’s anger was boiling so he hopped up out of his seat…moving in closer to Alyssa causing her to back into the bed…Pinning her to the bed Trey looked into the eyes of the girl he was falling for…the girl he thought could never lie to or hurt him…

    T: You could have gotten everything you wanted the first time right? So why did you keep this shit going…why?!

    A: Trey, Please just listen to me!

    T: No…I’m done listening! Let’s do it…(pulling at her clothes) This is what you want right!!! You got me now right!!!

    A: Trey…You don’t know…

    T: Oh I know…( pulling himself away) I know you need to leave right now…

    Alyssa stood and backed away buttoning her blouse where he tugged it apart…

    T: Oh, and since you need money so bad here ( Throws a stack of bills on her)…don’t spend it all in one place…

    A: I was wrong Trey…but If I wanted your money I would have gone through with it…I couldn’t because I fell in love with you! (Crying)

    T: Just get out…

    A: You promised you would listen to me…Brittany lied to you Trey…It wasn’t even like that!

    T: I’m done…just leave…take yo shit and go

    A: Where am I supposed to go?

    T: You’ll figure it out…

    Alyssa stood in silence studying Trey’s face. They stood eye to eye and she hoped that he would give her a chance…a single tear fell from his cheek that said it all. The hurt and anger written all over his face told her all she needed to hear…even if she had time to explain he wouldn’t understand. Grabbing her handbag she turned on her heel and headed toward the door slowly…stopping briefly hoping that he would stop her from leaving before exiting the room.

    “AAAAHHHH….How Could I be so Stupid?!!” Trey Screamed out. His head told him that he did the right thing but his heart wanted to chase after her. Pacing back and forth across the room and taking deep breaths was all he could do to calm down… Picking up the picture Brittany gave him Trey headed over to the table and sat down with a lighter…Just as he lit the edge of the picture he noticed some writing on the back…putting out the fire he quickly turned it over to read…

    4 MY GIRL BRITT: AIDS WALK DAY 2009

    Quickly grabbing his keys, Trey ran to find Alyssa…

    (Meanwhile)

    Alyssa’s tears ran like a streaming waterfall all the way from Trey’s room…after handing the front desk clerk the room key she used she exited the building looking for a busy street to hail a cab back to the airport. Hearing the pitter/patter of someone running up behind her Alyssa turned to see Trey off in the distance heading in her direction. Slowing down near a park entrance Alyssa came to a stop to let him catch up…

    T: (breathing heavily)…ok…What happened?

    A: I’m sorry Trey…(Still crying)

    T: Just…Tell me… what happened

    A: Well…

    “BITCH!!!!!!!!!” Trey and Alyssa heard Brittany yell from her car as it came barreling at top speed toward Alyssa…

    T: Oh Shit!!( Grabbing Alyssa and moving her out of the way)

    Alyssa fell to the ground hard smacking her head onto the concrete. The loud crash next to her made her heart pound harder than she ever could have imagined…Dizzy and barely able to move she yelled “Help!!!”  but her scream was drowned out by the loud shriek Brittany let out….

    B: TREYYYYYY!!!!!!!! Oh my God!!! Oh MY God!!! TREYYY!!!!!!

    Alyssa turned over to see Trey lying in front of Brittany’s car with blood coming from his mouth… unable to worry about her own head injury she made her way over to Trey to make sure he was breathing. His quick shallow breaths made her worry and Brittany stood in front of her car in complete shock.

    A: CALL 9-1-1!!!!! Somebody Call 9-1-1!!!!!!!

    T: My…..si…side…

    A: Shh….baby don’t talk…don’t talk….keep breathin’…

     

    Told Yall it was gonna be CRAZY!…  Let’s all say a prayer for Trey right now!!!  Where is #SpiritualAngel...we gon' need her on this one. Will he make it? How about a moment of silence for Brittany because If I was Alyssa she would be so done right now!!! The action does not stop here…The story does not end here… be on the lookout for more coming soon….expect  Momma songz and Trey’s brother Forest  to appear in Part 5… I wonder what they will have to say about all of this…

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on Oct 7, 2010 - 09:55AM

Wonder Woman

Part 4

 

Alyssa opened the door to the hotel room Trey reserved for her visit. The room was dark and quiet and she would have guessed that it was empty if she didn’t spot Trey sitting in a lounge chair facing the window in silence. He knew. He had to know.

A: Hey…(Softly)

Alyssa had to break the silence. She wanted to hear his voice even if it was going to be for the last time.

Trey heard the soft click of the door as Alyssa closed it behind herself but he refused to move. The sound of her heels reminded him of the day they met…the way she captured his attention with her beauty…His jaw clenched and his arms remained folded across his chest as he continued to stare out of the window checking out a panoramic view of downtown. The innocent tone in her voice infuriated him…why did she have to sound so right when she was accused of doing so much wrong? Taking in a deep breath he exhaled slowly in an effort to calm down and release the hurt that was plaguing him.

A: Trey…Why are you sitting in the dark?

Alyssa reached for the light switch but Trey put his hand up and nonverbally ordered her to freeze.

T: Leave them off…(Quiet…cool tone)

A: Trey…Can we talk?

T: (Laughs) I don’t even know who I am talking to…

A: Trey…please, just let me explain….

T: I’m gon’ let you explain alright…because you made me promise right? You made me promise that I would hear you out…so I am listening…I want you, to walk around here…look me in my eyes and tell me that everything I’m about to say isn’t true…I want to hear it from you.

Alyssa slowly walked in front of the chair Trey was sitting at to face him. It was time. Now or Never.

A: Trey….I…

T: No…none of that…I’m going to ask the questions and I just want you to tell me if it is True or false…that’s it…

A: Trey…Please let me talk to you, I can explain everything if you give me a…

T: (Puts his finger to his lips) shhh…just answer true or false. Are you an only child?

A: Yes

T: Really?…because I remember when we met you told me that your brother helped you get backstage…

A: Trey…

T: Let’s just ask the big one now shall we? Were you tryin’ to seduce me so that you could set me up?

A: Trey

T: That didn’t sound like a True or a False…Try again…

A: Ok…True…but...

T: That’s all I need to know…

A: No it isn’t all you need to know...

T: Alyssa…If that is your real name…you came around me and played me…all for some money. What’s his name anyway…how much was dude payin’ you?( Throws a picture in her direction)

Alyssa scanned the old photograph she took with her good friend Shawn trying to figure out how/why Brittany brought him into their drama. Her silence only made Trey feel like everything Brittany said was true.

T: So it’s all true…let me get this all straight…You used my ex-girlfriend to give you information so that you could seduce me…that’s fucked up by itself, but to seduce me so that you could steal my sperm and sell it to somebody so that they could try to set me up for money is just…damn

A: That’s not true Trey…

T: Oh, It’s not?…

A: Well not all of it…

Trey’s anger was boiling so he hopped up out of his seat…moving in closer to Alyssa causing her to back into the bed…Pinning her to the bed Trey looked into the eyes of the girl he was falling for…the girl he thought could never lie to or hurt him…

T: You could have gotten everything you wanted the first time right? So why did you keep this shit going…why?!

A: Trey, Please just listen to me!

T: No…I’m done listening! Let’s do it…(pulling at her clothes) This is what you want right!!! You got me now right!!!

A: Trey…You don’t know…

T: Oh I know…( pulling himself away) I know you need to leave right now…

Alyssa stood and backed away buttoning her blouse where he tugged it apart…

T: Oh, and since you need money so bad here ( Throws a stack of bills on her)…don’t spend it all in one place…

A: I was wrong Trey…but If I wanted your money I would have gone through with it…I couldn’t because I fell in love with you! (Crying)

T: Just get out…

A: You promised you would listen to me…Brittany lied to you Trey…It wasn’t even like that!

T: I’m done…just leave…take yo shit and go

A: Where am I supposed to go?

T: You’ll figure it out…

Alyssa stood in silence studying Trey’s face. They stood eye to eye and she hoped that he would give her a chance…a single tear fell from his cheek that said it all. The hurt and anger written all over his face told her all she needed to hear…even if she had time to explain he wouldn’t understand. Grabbing her handbag she turned on her heel and headed toward the door slowly…stopping briefly hoping that he would stop her from leaving before exiting the room.

“AAAAHHHH….How Could I be so Stupid?!!” Trey Screamed out. His head told him that he did the right thing but his heart wanted to chase after her. Pacing back and forth across the room and taking deep breaths was all he could do to calm down… Picking up the picture Brittany gave him Trey headed over to the table and sat down with a lighter…Just as he lit the edge of the picture he noticed some writing on the back…putting out the fire he quickly turned it over to read…

4 MY GIRL BRITT: AIDS WALK DAY 2009

Quickly grabbing his keys, Trey ran to find Alyssa…

(Meanwhile)

Alyssa’s tears ran like a streaming waterfall all the way from Trey’s room…after handing the front desk clerk the room key she used she exited the building looking for a busy street to hail a cab back to the airport. Hearing the pitter/patter of someone running up behind her Alyssa turned to see Trey off in the distance heading in her direction. Slowing down near a park entrance Alyssa came to a stop to let him catch up…

T: (breathing heavily)…ok…What happened?

A: I’m sorry Trey…(Still crying)

T: Just…Tell me… what happened

A: Well…

“BITCH!!!!!!!!!” Trey and Alyssa heard Brittany yell from her car as it came barreling at top speed toward Alyssa…

T: Oh Shit!!( Grabbing Alyssa and moving her out of the way)

Alyssa fell to the ground hard smacking her head onto the concrete. The loud crash next to her made her heart pound harder than she ever could have imagined…Dizzy and barely able to move she yelled “Help!!!”  but her scream was drowned out by the loud shriek Brittany let out….

B: TREYYYYYY!!!!!!!! Oh my God!!! Oh MY God!!! TREYYY!!!!!!

Alyssa turned over to see Trey lying in front of Brittany’s car with blood coming from his mouth… unable to worry about her own head injury she made her way over to Trey to make sure he was breathing. His quick shallow breaths made her worry and Brittany stood in front of her car in complete shock.

A: CALL 9-1-1!!!!! Somebody Call 9-1-1!!!!!!!

T: My…..si…side…

A: Shh….baby don’t talk…don’t talk….keep breathin’…

 

Told Yall it was gonna be CRAZY!…  Let’s all say a prayer for Trey right now!!!  Where is #SpiritualAngel...we gon' need her on this one. Will he make it? How about a moment of silence for Brittany because If I was Alyssa she would be so done right now!!! The action does not stop here…The story does not end here… be on the lookout for more coming soon….expect  Momma songz and Trey’s brother Forest  to appear in Part 5… I wonder what they will have to say about all of this…

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justasIam85CrazyAngel's picture

Why...you cant leave me n suspence like this...lol

MsAngione's picture

Its too good, I'm TreysRib with a prayer post, and I'm interceding now..lol

Daniel_Shawn's picture

omg this is better than soap opera u got mad skillz girl

SpiritualAngel's picture

Oh He is going make I have all the faith in the world God id not bring him this far. Lord you know what he needs you are the only one that have the power to heal his body and soul. Girl Im just know reading this it seem like you be in my head, Do your thing hat off to you. You know mama fin to acted up!!!

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

I will definitely retweet!

BossLadySims's picture

Now following....... ;-)

Linz84's picture

@LadyAJ03 oh ok cool!! :-).

@LadyAJ03's picture

Just as another warning...If you haven't seen my tweet I will b posting pt 5 as soon as I can tomorrow...I have some meetings in the morning so I can't do my usual post in the morning but I will try late afternoon or evening...@Linz84...No, I really loved your comment...I didn't take it wrong.. And I think I will start tweetin' the chapters to Trey this weekend...don't forget to RT me cuz he ain't followin' me yet...get me on the TT people!!! :)

@Cursha's picture

Darn it, i thouht I wud be the first to read it like I was on part 3, lol. But you did really good. I love the suspense. You just make sure Trey dnt die. Also we shud tweet Trey and tell him to ready it. But all of us have to do it. So wen yall start tweetin about I will. Keep it up. I hope u got more in store cuz you not gone be able to end dis. We gne needs parts all da way up to like 50....lol. But great job tho. I can't wait for part 5!!!!!!

Linz84's picture

@LadyAJ03 hey I'm sorry if you took what I said wrong. I know Trey is no where near perfect.

lala072 AspecialAngel's picture

OMG!!!!!!!!! I cant wait for the next part.... this jawn is crazy...

MsJJBabyee's picture

that damn brittany girl gets on my last nerve i got so mad , i was like calm down its just a storyy ! lol girlll i cant wait till the next part !

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

LadyAJ03 - have you tweeted Trey to read the Wonder Woman blogs? If you haven't, you should. Maybe we should all start, that way he'll at least see a few tweets about it to get his attention.

AngelicTrey's picture

Girl I can't wait to see wat will happen in Chapter 5. Keep them comin. Bong!!!!! Leggo!!!!!!

@LadyAJ03's picture

@Linz84...I really appreciate your comment... and I am glad you had a negative feeling in such a negative scene...Trey can't be MR.Perfect all the time...I really wanted to show how I think he would react in this situation...remember he is hurt...To the people that want me to publish it...We'll see once it is all finished, I really like how it's unfolding and I really hope Trey does get a chance to read this...Thanks for all of the love...It really means alot to me!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Trey betta not die man! *smh* I would be devastated! :-(

ForbiddenAngel's picture

Girl I need the book already! what chu waiting for? best fiction I read in a min.

lyricalflow09's picture

lol okay okay I see ya girl... and the drama begins....

Linz84's picture

To be honest I don't like the way Trey didn't let Alyssa speak her side of the story!!

KA-LEE-YA...KALEYIA's picture

GIRRRRLLLLL!!!!! i love it.... OMFG i read dis lik i watch MUARY!!!!! cnt wait intil the next part!!!!!

Bre'AunaShanti's picture

okay!!! im lovin it keep it comin mama :)

Kikamiko's picture

Giiiiiiiiiirl! I feel like I'm watch a good ass soap opera right now. But seriously you really need to publish this even if it's just for Trey. His birthday is coming up, this would be the PERFECT gift for him. Do me a favor and check out lulu.com, you can independently publish this yourself without spending a trillion dollars.lol I would buy a copy.;)

Come on Pt.5!!!!!

@LadyAJ03's picture

Wow...I'm so glad u guys like this... Lovin all of the comments and participation...part 5 will be interesting...

Linz84's picture

lol @ Brittany she need some help!!!

Linz84's picture

OH WOW!!! THIS IS GETTING GOOD!!!!! sigh I need to read part 5 now!!! lol

SexySagLuvSongz's picture

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Girrrrrlllllll......this is getting too good! Seriously though......you really should look into writing books. This is up there with E. Lynn, Mary B., Carl Weber....all of 'em!!!

britbrat86's picture

WTF.... THAT BITCH RAN HIM OVER... omg girl u got me going thru it i forgot i was reading a story... keep it comin i gota know what happens next...ugh i need a moment

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

LMAO...this is too good to ever stop. I need the completed novel like NOW! How is that bitch gone run over my Trey? Alyssa needs to stomp a hole in her ass (another one).

thelsteve@hotmail.com's picture

This is getting so good! I am waiting anxiously for Part 5.

AriellBigg's picture

WOW.! OMG. yu need to make a book and publish it! :)

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