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    October 09, 2010

    Wonder Woman Pt 6

    The waiting room was so quiet you could hear a pin drop…Alyssa stared out the window…Trey’s mom kept her hands together in constant prayer….Forrest paced back and forth across the room waiting for word on Trey.

    The doctor walked in with a clip board in one hand and a serious look on his face that grabbed everyone’s attention.

    DR: Good news…with time and some TLC I expect Tremaine to make a full recovery.

    Alyssa sat back and watched as Trey’s mom and Forrest thanked the doctor and huddled around him asking what looked like a million questions. They loved Trey for real…without question…so she didn’t feel that she should be jumping for joy with them…especially when she still felt responsible for the whole thing….

    MS: Can we see him?

    DR: yes…just try not to tire him out he really needs to rest…

    Alyssa smiled as she watched them head over to Trey’s room…She followed behind slowly and peered into Trey’s room through the window happy to see that he was really ok…Everything looked perfect and content in that moment and they deserved family time so Alyssa turned to leave and this time it would be for good…She would always have her memories but they would never be the same…his life would never be the same with her in it…it was time to walk away with her head held high…time to protect the pieces of her heart she had left.

    (Days Later)

    Trey was so happy to leave the hospital…He still had to take it easy at home but home was definitely where he wanted to be. Trying to get rid of his mom and Forrest was impossible in the hospital but he was sure he would get a few minutes here and there at the crib. Overall, Trey had to admit that his team really had his back…the accident was taken care of as quietly as possible in the media which was great because Trey didn’t even want to think about all of the questions he would have to answer…

    MS: (Peeks head into room where Trey is resting) Are you settled? Do you need anything?

    T: I’m alright…

    MS: I’m gonna be right here in the other room…you just call me…

    Trey smiled to make his mom feel comfortable leaving so that she could get some rest. There was only one thing that still made him feel uneasy…Alyssa. She just vanished from the hospital and wouldn’t return any of his calls. Reaching for his phone, Trey decided to try one more time…they had unfinished business…

    A: Hello

    T: Why do I have to block my number to get you to answer my calls?

    A: Oh…Trey…How are you?

    T: Why did you leave the hospital?

    A: I just wanted to let you get better, let your family be there for you…I was in the way…

    T: No…I was in the way that’s why I got hit by a car (laughs)

    A: Trey…That’s not funny

    T: I think it is now…

    A: I’m glad you are getting better…we were all really worried

    T: So…Are you going to keep running from me?

    A: I’m not running from you Trey…

    T: Then why aren’t you right here next to me?

    A: I’ve done enough to you…I lied…I got you hit by a car…I know your mom hates me

    T: Why would she hate you?

    A: I told Forrest everything…I know he told her…I’m surprised you don’t still hate me…

    T: I can’t hate you…and no one around me hates you…

    A: I just feel like you are better off without me and my drama…

    T: I love you

    Alyssa paused...IT was her first time hearing those words and it seemed like they came out of no where...

    A: I love you too Trey but…

    T: But Nothing…I love you…that doesn’t go away…I want you here with me…

     

    Alyssa didn’t know what to do with what she was feeling. After all of the drama, even after nearly losing his life, he still wanted her with him. Somewhere deep inside she still felt like she didn’t deserve him or his love…There was someone better for him…Someone who wouldn’t put him through what she did or hurt him the way she did…

    A: I Love you but I can’t do this Trey…You deserve better…

    T : Who is better for me than the girl I wake up calling for? Who is better for me than the girl I go to sleep waiting for?

    A: Trey…

    T: I was lying in that hospital bed thinking about you…I’ll admit…I wasn’t really sure about us for a minute but when you wasn’t there…I missed you…my heart missed you…I needed you then and I still do now.

    A: Too much has happened...we can't just pretend that it didn't Trey

    T: Are you trying to make me beg? (Laughs)

    A: Stop Trey…I’m being serious…what happened between us is serious…

    T: Can you ever stop thinking about me? Do you really think you can stop loving me?

    A: No…

    T: Then why are you keeping your heart from me? We can still take this one step at a time…I’m not asking for you to marry me… I just know that right now… I want you

    A: I want you too…

    T: Then I suggest you get back out here and start tendin’ to yo man… (Smiling)

    Alyssa didn’t waste any time. After hanging up with Trey she started making arrangements. She could feel Trey’s love in every word he spoke and even though she was afraid she couldn't just let go. There was nothing and no one standing in their way. It was time to hit the airport strip and get back to VA…her baby needed her.

    Trey was finally able to rest knowing that his wonder woman was coming to his rescue. For the longest time he was trying to figure out what it was that kept him so captivated by her every move…Now he knew…It was her heart.

     

    You know…I was going to go back to Brittany but who really cares what happens to her? She’s out of the picture for good!! Trey’s mom didn’t need any more drama and Forrest needed to get back to Baby Mama (LOL…J/K) … I wanted to end this making 1 important point…Love is messy…but it is what it is and once you find it you need to keep it!.... I love all of yall…Thank you for your support on this story…Time to move on to the freaky ish!!! Check out TreyGasm Pt 1…“Massage”…Every TreyGasm part will be inspired by a Trey Song so if you have a special request that can give me inspiration be sure to comment it or DM me!!! I only have 1 rule when it comes to the TreyGasm short stories…DO NOT READ THEM IF YOU AINT GROWN…I gave yall a drama filled love story…This one is for ppl who want that other side…THAT BEAST…LOL!!!

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on Oct 9, 2010 - 10:06AM

Wonder Woman Pt 6

The waiting room was so quiet you could hear a pin drop…Alyssa stared out the window…Trey’s mom kept her hands together in constant prayer….Forrest paced back and forth across the room waiting for word on Trey.

The doctor walked in with a clip board in one hand and a serious look on his face that grabbed everyone’s attention.

DR: Good news…with time and some TLC I expect Tremaine to make a full recovery.

Alyssa sat back and watched as Trey’s mom and Forrest thanked the doctor and huddled around him asking what looked like a million questions. They loved Trey for real…without question…so she didn’t feel that she should be jumping for joy with them…especially when she still felt responsible for the whole thing….

MS: Can we see him?

DR: yes…just try not to tire him out he really needs to rest…

Alyssa smiled as she watched them head over to Trey’s room…She followed behind slowly and peered into Trey’s room through the window happy to see that he was really ok…Everything looked perfect and content in that moment and they deserved family time so Alyssa turned to leave and this time it would be for good…She would always have her memories but they would never be the same…his life would never be the same with her in it…it was time to walk away with her head held high…time to protect the pieces of her heart she had left.

(Days Later)

Trey was so happy to leave the hospital…He still had to take it easy at home but home was definitely where he wanted to be. Trying to get rid of his mom and Forrest was impossible in the hospital but he was sure he would get a few minutes here and there at the crib. Overall, Trey had to admit that his team really had his back…the accident was taken care of as quietly as possible in the media which was great because Trey didn’t even want to think about all of the questions he would have to answer…

MS: (Peeks head into room where Trey is resting) Are you settled? Do you need anything?

T: I’m alright…

MS: I’m gonna be right here in the other room…you just call me…

Trey smiled to make his mom feel comfortable leaving so that she could get some rest. There was only one thing that still made him feel uneasy…Alyssa. She just vanished from the hospital and wouldn’t return any of his calls. Reaching for his phone, Trey decided to try one more time…they had unfinished business…

A: Hello

T: Why do I have to block my number to get you to answer my calls?

A: Oh…Trey…How are you?

T: Why did you leave the hospital?

A: I just wanted to let you get better, let your family be there for you…I was in the way…

T: No…I was in the way that’s why I got hit by a car (laughs)

A: Trey…That’s not funny

T: I think it is now…

A: I’m glad you are getting better…we were all really worried

T: So…Are you going to keep running from me?

A: I’m not running from you Trey…

T: Then why aren’t you right here next to me?

A: I’ve done enough to you…I lied…I got you hit by a car…I know your mom hates me

T: Why would she hate you?

A: I told Forrest everything…I know he told her…I’m surprised you don’t still hate me…

T: I can’t hate you…and no one around me hates you…

A: I just feel like you are better off without me and my drama…

T: I love you

Alyssa paused...IT was her first time hearing those words and it seemed like they came out of no where...

A: I love you too Trey but…

T: But Nothing…I love you…that doesn’t go away…I want you here with me…

 

Alyssa didn’t know what to do with what she was feeling. After all of the drama, even after nearly losing his life, he still wanted her with him. Somewhere deep inside she still felt like she didn’t deserve him or his love…There was someone better for him…Someone who wouldn’t put him through what she did or hurt him the way she did…

A: I Love you but I can’t do this Trey…You deserve better…

T : Who is better for me than the girl I wake up calling for? Who is better for me than the girl I go to sleep waiting for?

A: Trey…

T: I was lying in that hospital bed thinking about you…I’ll admit…I wasn’t really sure about us for a minute but when you wasn’t there…I missed you…my heart missed you…I needed you then and I still do now.

A: Too much has happened...we can't just pretend that it didn't Trey

T: Are you trying to make me beg? (Laughs)

A: Stop Trey…I’m being serious…what happened between us is serious…

T: Can you ever stop thinking about me? Do you really think you can stop loving me?

A: No…

T: Then why are you keeping your heart from me? We can still take this one step at a time…I’m not asking for you to marry me… I just know that right now… I want you

A: I want you too…

T: Then I suggest you get back out here and start tendin’ to yo man… (Smiling)

Alyssa didn’t waste any time. After hanging up with Trey she started making arrangements. She could feel Trey’s love in every word he spoke and even though she was afraid she couldn't just let go. There was nothing and no one standing in their way. It was time to hit the airport strip and get back to VA…her baby needed her.

Trey was finally able to rest knowing that his wonder woman was coming to his rescue. For the longest time he was trying to figure out what it was that kept him so captivated by her every move…Now he knew…It was her heart.

 

You know…I was going to go back to Brittany but who really cares what happens to her? She’s out of the picture for good!! Trey’s mom didn’t need any more drama and Forrest needed to get back to Baby Mama (LOL…J/K) … I wanted to end this making 1 important point…Love is messy…but it is what it is and once you find it you need to keep it!.... I love all of yall…Thank you for your support on this story…Time to move on to the freaky ish!!! Check out TreyGasm Pt 1…“Massage”…Every TreyGasm part will be inspired by a Trey Song so if you have a special request that can give me inspiration be sure to comment it or DM me!!! I only have 1 rule when it comes to the TreyGasm short stories…DO NOT READ THEM IF YOU AINT GROWN…I gave yall a drama filled love story…This one is for ppl who want that other side…THAT BEAST…LOL!!!

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MsAngione's picture

Great!

TREYSANGELBEAUTY's picture

YES GURL N IM READY TO READ TREYGASM I LOVE ME SOME FREAKY ISH

JesusIsMySavior's picture

I really enjoyed this story. :)

TeeTee_LuvsTrey's picture

This is really good!

beauti_yanna's picture

Yes AJ you did the damn thang on these stories...i think that you should do like a pt 7 just to see where trey and alyssa are now in there relationship

SexySagLuvSongz's picture

Clap, Clap, Bravo!!!!!! Very good.....you wrapped up everything beautifully as always.

Bre'AunaShanti's picture

that was great!!!! good ish girl :)

@LadyAJ03's picture

Thanks again for all of the love...don't forget to read my Treygasms and I just noticed another story called April's secret on here...go check it out it's nice...@Linz84...You said "Nice Story Alyssa"...I hope you don't think that's my name..I made it up for the story...My people just call me AJ...Once again, I am so excited about this...I'm even thinking of creating a site to fill with my fan stories and some will even feature other people like nelly, reggie bush, lance gross..etc.

ladyt1980's picture

u r a master @ this gurl. u really did capture trey in these stories. i cud really picture him saying all those things. i even had a tear. congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! make a short story 4 one love.

lala072 AspecialAngel's picture

I LOVE THE ENDING!!!!!!!!!! GOOD JOB GIRL!!!!!

Linz84's picture

awwww TREY FORGIVE HER!!! Well she didn't want to go with Brittany plan Such a nice ending!!!

NICE STORY ALYSSA!!! NOW I'M GOING TO READ TREYGASM!

MsJJBabyee's picture

i was smiling so harddd ! && then it was like i wanted to cry sometimess loll ... great job on this oneeeee i loveeeddd itttt !!!!

@LadyAJ03's picture

Thank you once again for supporting this 6 part series lol!!! I plan to Tweet this part to Trey hoping that it will make him curious enough to read the other parts when he comes out of hiding...be sure to RT me and Tweet it too so that he will see it because he isn't following me yet...I'm really glad you guys like it!

AriellBigg's picture

OMG. This is the best story i've ever read in my life. lol. im sittin here about to cry... && i dont just cry over anything! lol this was sooo GOOD!

AngelicTrey's picture

Girl that was a interesting storie. Trey got his girl. His mom is cool now an his brother is back to doing what hje did before his brother was in the hospital. As for Brittany she needed alot a help hope she got it. Keep it coming wit the stories. Bong!!!! Leggo!!!!

KA-LEE-YA...KALEYIA's picture

*claps* i loved every part u wrote.... simply amazin... trey wuld be proud

Tricia AKA @GimmeUnusual's picture

@LadyAJ03...brilliant!!! I actually think part 6 might be my favorite now. Perfect ending! I loved every piece of it. I'm in total agreement of Auburn63 - I hope Trey sees all of these. Let us Angels know the moment you publish a book. We definitely got your back!!!

SpiritualAngel's picture

I pray that Trey will come out here and read this.

SpiritualAngel's picture

TAKE MY HAT OFF TO YOU I LOVE IT!!!! You are so right you can't help who you fall in love with. Pray to God and ask him to guide you in it. When it's right God will let you know that this is the one I chose for you. Love is messy and it is what it is, you have to take a chance on love. Girl my heart is so filled know. THANK YOU!!! Love you back. Can't wait till TreyGasm glad I am grown...LOL!!!

A_Perfect_Angel's picture

This was the perfect ending to a great beginning.. Loved every moment of it.. Can't wait to read Treygasm

Kikamiko's picture

This was truly a joy to read. You had me entertained from beginning to end. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!! Now on to Treygasm I go...YUUUP! lol:)

ForbiddenAngel's picture

Perfect ending!! Now it's time to get our freak on.

1MysticStar's picture

NICE darling! Great ending and I love the way that you moralized it! Can't wait for the next story!

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Awwwwww! Dat was a good ending! Loved it! :-)

trinaa33 WiseAngel's picture

That was the perfect ending to the perfect story!

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