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    November 23, 2010

    Trey rolled over to the cold, empty side of the bed. The side where Vanessa used to lay.

     

    Trey had been missing her a lot lately. Seeing her face in every ad or TV spot didn’t help either.

     

    Trey had a huge part in her success, and yes he was still receiving royalties from his work with her, but to him her love was worth much more.

    Flashbacks of the things he used to do to her in his bed gave him chills.

     

    Her long caramel legs wrapped around his waist when he made love to her.

     

    The way she whispered his name.

     

    Trey would give anything to have her back, but he knew that wouldn’t happen. She had moved on.

     

    He was the only one still in the past.

     

    He got the urge to call her. His fingers went ahead of his common sense.

     

    “Hello?”

     

    “Vanessa.”

     

    “Trey.”

     

    It was the way she always said his name. He could still hear the love in her voice.

     

    “Yea. It’s me…look Vanessa…I miss you.”

     

    “Trey…don’t…”

     

    “Babe let me finish please. I love you. I miss you so much.”

     

    He could hear her light breathing over the phone. “I miss you too Trey.”

     

    “I need to see you. Now.”

     

    “Trey…you know I can’t.”

     

    “Please. Vanessa I need you. Here. Please.”

     

    Vanessa let out a deep sigh.

     

    “I’m on my way Trey.”

     

    ?

    15 minutes later…..

     

    Trey heard a light tap at his door. He knew it was her.

     

    Trey opened the door to see Vanessa standing there, her long hair pulled into a messy bun.

    She wore a pair of ripped jeans, white tank, brown lather jacket, gold accessories.

     

    Only Vanessa could look so stunning in such a simple outfit.

     

    “I’m so glad you came.”

     

    “Yea?”

     

    “Of course. I can’t stop thinking about you.”

     

    “Trey. You know I shouldn’t be here. Why do you insist on making things so hard for me? For us?”

     

    “Because I love you Vanessa.”

     

    “I don’t…I don’t love you anymore Trey.”

     

    Trey felt his heart break that very moment. But he refused to believe it.

     

    “What the hell do you want from me Trey?”

     

    “Closure. I never got that.”

     

    “In what form?”

     

    “I want to make love to you. For the last time.”

     

    Vanessa rolled her eyes and started for the door. Trey grabbed her arm and pulled her into a deep kiss. Their tongues wrestled, clothes were being ripped off and thrown in different directions.

     

    Vanessa spread her beautiful long legs, as Trey kissed her neck.

     

    “Fuck…” Trey hissed upon entering her soft spot.

     

    Trey straightened up so he could look into her face. His hips moved violently against hers. Vanessa bit her lips, moaned so loud he knew the neighbors could hear her.

     

    But he didn’t give a damn.

     

    “Oh…God Trey…stop…”

     

    “Look me in my face and tell me you want me to stop…”

     

    “Trey…stop…ughh that feels too good.”

     

    Trey could feel her walls contracting. He gripped her petite breast, tilted his head back, pounded into her harder.

     

    It felt so good Vanessa had tears streaming down her pretty face.

     

    “Don’t stop Trey!! Don’t stop baby…”

     

    Trey was to lost in her to respond.

     

    Vanessa released her self on him, Trey let himself go, his body fell limp onto hers.

     

    They laid there for a while. Trey’s head rested on her tight stomach.

     

    “I have to go Trey.”

     

    “I know.”

     

    Vanessa cleaned herself up and got dressed. She walked out the door, not saying one word.

     

    Trey felt empty.

     

    Standing in his living room completely naked, Trey never felt so empty in his life.

     

     

    Link to chap. 1

     

    http://www.treysongz.com/talk/snapshot-chapter-1/

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Joie_Neverson's picture
on Nov 23, 2010 - 04:29PM

Trey rolled over to the cold, empty side of the bed. The side where Vanessa used to lay.

 

Trey had been missing her a lot lately. Seeing her face in every ad or TV spot didn’t help either.

 

Trey had a huge part in her success, and yes he was still receiving royalties from his work with her, but to him her love was worth much more.

Flashbacks of the things he used to do to her in his bed gave him chills.

 

Her long caramel legs wrapped around his waist when he made love to her.

 

The way she whispered his name.

 

Trey would give anything to have her back, but he knew that wouldn’t happen. She had moved on.

 

He was the only one still in the past.

 

He got the urge to call her. His fingers went ahead of his common sense.

 

“Hello?”

 

“Vanessa.”

 

“Trey.”

 

It was the way she always said his name. He could still hear the love in her voice.

 

“Yea. It’s me…look Vanessa…I miss you.”

 

“Trey…don’t…”

 

“Babe let me finish please. I love you. I miss you so much.”

 

He could hear her light breathing over the phone. “I miss you too Trey.”

 

“I need to see you. Now.”

 

“Trey…you know I can’t.”

 

“Please. Vanessa I need you. Here. Please.”

 

Vanessa let out a deep sigh.

 

“I’m on my way Trey.”

 

?

15 minutes later…..

 

Trey heard a light tap at his door. He knew it was her.

 

Trey opened the door to see Vanessa standing there, her long hair pulled into a messy bun.

She wore a pair of ripped jeans, white tank, brown lather jacket, gold accessories.

 

Only Vanessa could look so stunning in such a simple outfit.

 

“I’m so glad you came.”

 

“Yea?”

 

“Of course. I can’t stop thinking about you.”

 

“Trey. You know I shouldn’t be here. Why do you insist on making things so hard for me? For us?”

 

“Because I love you Vanessa.”

 

“I don’t…I don’t love you anymore Trey.”

 

Trey felt his heart break that very moment. But he refused to believe it.

 

“What the hell do you want from me Trey?”

 

“Closure. I never got that.”

 

“In what form?”

 

“I want to make love to you. For the last time.”

 

Vanessa rolled her eyes and started for the door. Trey grabbed her arm and pulled her into a deep kiss. Their tongues wrestled, clothes were being ripped off and thrown in different directions.

 

Vanessa spread her beautiful long legs, as Trey kissed her neck.

 

“Fuck…” Trey hissed upon entering her soft spot.

 

Trey straightened up so he could look into her face. His hips moved violently against hers. Vanessa bit her lips, moaned so loud he knew the neighbors could hear her.

 

But he didn’t give a damn.

 

“Oh…God Trey…stop…”

 

“Look me in my face and tell me you want me to stop…”

 

“Trey…stop…ughh that feels too good.”

 

Trey could feel her walls contracting. He gripped her petite breast, tilted his head back, pounded into her harder.

 

It felt so good Vanessa had tears streaming down her pretty face.

 

“Don’t stop Trey!! Don’t stop baby…”

 

Trey was to lost in her to respond.

 

Vanessa released her self on him, Trey let himself go, his body fell limp onto hers.

 

They laid there for a while. Trey’s head rested on her tight stomach.

 

“I have to go Trey.”

 

“I know.”

 

Vanessa cleaned herself up and got dressed. She walked out the door, not saying one word.

 

Trey felt empty.

 

Standing in his living room completely naked, Trey never felt so empty in his life.

 

 

Link to chap. 1

 

http://www.treysongz.com/talk/snapshot-chapter-1/

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TREYZONELOVE_2's picture

I LOVE IT!

AmyDarshae's picture

Wow! part 2 is my fav so far lol! Great Job, & soooo detailed lol

Joie_Neverson's picture

LOL dead @LilMzMiyah Cosmo stories be good! LOL Thanks for reading!

Kikamiko's picture

Ooowee!! Love part 2 on to the next one.:)

ECJ's picture

Awww baby! Don'd worry bout that knuckle head!
Now onto Chp 3!

LilMzMiyah's picture

I felt like i was readin something outta Cosmo..lol. I like it!!

Shambrika_1030@yahoo.com's picture

oh no baby she cant be doing my trey baby like dat lol im still here 4 u trey lol

Treys_Angel_19♥'s picture

DANG IF IT WAS ME I WOULD HAVE STAYED=) GREAT STORY

awwww. poor trey. i wonder what's gunna happen next

Joie_Neverson's picture

Gonna add soon!

JamRoC_4eVa's picture

ok not bad, good job..waiting 4 nxt entry..

Raven RambunctiousAngel's picture

Awwww.... How She Just Gone Leave Him Standing Their With No Clothes On & Not Say Nothing.... I Wonder Why She Had To Leave!! (She Got A Man) lOl... but This Is Dope Joie!!!

Daniel_Shawn's picture

wow....i'm intrigued now lol :)

Joie_Neverson's picture

Thanks 4 commenting! :)

SexySagLuvSongz's picture

WOW!! I hope he finds what he needs....poor baby.

Joie_Neverson's picture

Thanks yall! And thanx for the follow :)

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

poor baby maybe he will find someone to mend his broken heart

mizcedezbaby's picture

dang Trey, poor thing. Btw, i just followed you on twitter

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