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  • Strip Tease 1
    January 16, 2011

    I was completely inspired to write my own stories thanks to@Joie_Neverson and her stories-Snapshot. <3                          

                                                                    Tell me what you think

                                                                               * * *

                                               Karma Looked at herself in the mirror and sighed

                                       

                                                       "Here we go again" she said to herself

                   

    Karma was the main attraction. The strip clubs most paid stripper. Men   came from all over to see her, she was beautiful beyond nature. With light skin-cherokee indian, German, italian, french and Spanish on her moms side. Black, jamacian, lebanese,and puerto rican on her her dads.                                                       

                    

    She was exoctic, which made for a deadly combination. With a upper and lower lip piercing, multi-colored curly hair a lilttle past her shoulders and legs for miles. She made all the other strippers jealous. But her life wasnt all too glamorous. She got pregnant at 17 and took it upon herself to move out of her parents house. But her babys daddy was a dead-beat and skipped town when he found out she was having his kid. She still graduated, and now 23, shes going threw her 3rd year of college to get her degree in psychology. Stripping is the quickest way to get the money she needed, along with working part-time at a reception office during the day.                              

                     

    She stood up, and checked out her outfit one more time. Red lace bra with diamond straps, red lace boy short thong and red open-toed stilettos with diamond straps that went around her ankles.

                             

    She heard her song start to play and she walked out of  the dressing room and on to her  stage.

                                     

                                                  It was a full house tonight..all to see her.

               

                      She started her routine and the money immediately started flowing. Not even                               5 minutes later there was a big commotion near the front doors.

                          

                                    "A celebrity must have just walked in" she said in her head

             

                     

    And she was right. Trey Neverson and his close friend Drizzy had just walked in. All the other girls quickly ran to them trying to give them personal lap dances. Karma rolled her eyes and continued with her dance.

                                                                  

                                                                                 * * *

                    

     At the end of the night she was around back about to go to her car when out of nowhere a man grabed her from behind, wraped his arm around her neck and held a gun to her head.

     

    "Hey beautiful, how bout u give me dem stacks u got in that louie V of yours" he said in                                                            her ear.

     

    She knew she could take a punk like him, but before she could go for a nut shot, they                                                        heard a shout.

                                                                

                                                                           "Aye!"

                  

    They turned around. Trey Neverson was standing in the back door way. He quickly started to run over to them. The man let Karma go and she fell to the ground as he ran off. Trey ran up to her, looked in the direction the man went, then down at Karma.

                                 

                                              "You aiight?" he asked as he held out his hand.

                                          

                                                      She grabed it and he lifted her up.

                 

                                 "I guess hes never heard of look, dont touch." she said sarcasically.

                             

                                            She sighed "But thats what I get for living in Chicago."

                                                        

                                                                           He smiled

                                           

                                                            He held out his hand. "Ay, Im.."

                             

                                               "The famous rapper, Trey Neverson..."she finished.

                                        

                                                          "So you've heard of me.." he said

                        

                                           "Yes, its hard not to when your songs are always on the radio"

                                                    

                                                                         "U a fan huh?"

                            

                                                  She smiled polietly. " Not always, but eventually"

                                                   

                                                                       "Im good aint I"

                          

                                                Now she had a forced smile. She hated cocky men.

                         

                                            "I didnt see you earlier. Whats your name?" he asked

              

                             "Karma, Karma-Maria Robinson."  Now she grabed his hand and shook it.

                                            

                                                             "Wow, thats a unique name."

                             

                                                     "Ya, well im a pretty unique person" she told him

      

      He smiled a radiant smile that almost made her forget they were still shaking hands.                                             She polietly let his hand go.

                                

                                                  "So what are you doing out here?" she asked

                                               

                                                             "Tryin not to make a scene"

                          

                                             She rolled her eyes "Well its too late for that" she told him

                                                       

                                                                     He smiled wider

                          

                                           She looked down at her watch. "Im sorry, but I have to go"

                                     

                                                     She started to walk away towards her car.

                                           

                                                            "You owe me!" he called to her

                                      

                                                      She stopped, turned and looked at him.

                                                 

                                                               "I owe you?" she asked

                                                   

                                                                "Ya, for saving yo life"

                          

                                           She laughed one loud "Ha!" and walked back over to him.

           

                  "Oh ya, and what do I owe you?? A personal lap dance??" she asked sarcastically

                                                 

                                                           "How bout dinner." he said

                     

                             She was caught off guard, but quickly caught herself, and rolled her eyes

                         

                                          "Im sorry, but I have to get home to my husband and son."

                     

    She started walking again. He watched her go and smiled again. He was intrigued. He's never met a woman, let alone a stripper, turn him down before. She was unique alright, and at that moment he knew he had to get to know her.

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LilMzMiyah's picture
on Jan 16, 2011 - 10:00PM

I was completely inspired to write my own stories thanks to@Joie_Neverson and her stories-Snapshot. <3                          

                                                                Tell me what you think

                                                                           * * *

                                           Karma Looked at herself in the mirror and sighed

                                   

                                                   "Here we go again" she said to herself

               

Karma was the main attraction. The strip clubs most paid stripper. Men   came from all over to see her, she was beautiful beyond nature. With light skin-cherokee indian, German, italian, french and Spanish on her moms side. Black, jamacian, lebanese,and puerto rican on her her dads.                                                       

                

She was exoctic, which made for a deadly combination. With a upper and lower lip piercing, multi-colored curly hair a lilttle past her shoulders and legs for miles. She made all the other strippers jealous. But her life wasnt all too glamorous. She got pregnant at 17 and took it upon herself to move out of her parents house. But her babys daddy was a dead-beat and skipped town when he found out she was having his kid. She still graduated, and now 23, shes going threw her 3rd year of college to get her degree in psychology. Stripping is the quickest way to get the money she needed, along with working part-time at a reception office during the day.                              

                 

She stood up, and checked out her outfit one more time. Red lace bra with diamond straps, red lace boy short thong and red open-toed stilettos with diamond straps that went around her ankles.

                         

She heard her song start to play and she walked out of  the dressing room and on to her  stage.

                                 

                                              It was a full house tonight..all to see her.

           

                  She started her routine and the money immediately started flowing. Not even                               5 minutes later there was a big commotion near the front doors.

                      

                                "A celebrity must have just walked in" she said in her head

         

                 

And she was right. Trey Neverson and his close friend Drizzy had just walked in. All the other girls quickly ran to them trying to give them personal lap dances. Karma rolled her eyes and continued with her dance.

                                                              

                                                                             * * *

                

 At the end of the night she was around back about to go to her car when out of nowhere a man grabed her from behind, wraped his arm around her neck and held a gun to her head.

 

"Hey beautiful, how bout u give me dem stacks u got in that louie V of yours" he said in                                                            her ear.

 

She knew she could take a punk like him, but before she could go for a nut shot, they                                                        heard a shout.

                                                            

                                                                       "Aye!"

              

They turned around. Trey Neverson was standing in the back door way. He quickly started to run over to them. The man let Karma go and she fell to the ground as he ran off. Trey ran up to her, looked in the direction the man went, then down at Karma.

                             

                                          "You aiight?" he asked as he held out his hand.

                                      

                                                  She grabed it and he lifted her up.

             

                             "I guess hes never heard of look, dont touch." she said sarcasically.

                         

                                        She sighed "But thats what I get for living in Chicago."

                                                    

                                                                       He smiled

                                       

                                                        He held out his hand. "Ay, Im.."

                         

                                           "The famous rapper, Trey Neverson..."she finished.

                                    

                                                      "So you've heard of me.." he said

                    

                                       "Yes, its hard not to when your songs are always on the radio"

                                                

                                                                     "U a fan huh?"

                        

                                              She smiled polietly. " Not always, but eventually"

                                               

                                                                   "Im good aint I"

                      

                                            Now she had a forced smile. She hated cocky men.

                     

                                        "I didnt see you earlier. Whats your name?" he asked

          

                         "Karma, Karma-Maria Robinson."  Now she grabed his hand and shook it.

                                        

                                                         "Wow, thats a unique name."

                         

                                                 "Ya, well im a pretty unique person" she told him

  

  He smiled a radiant smile that almost made her forget they were still shaking hands.                                             She polietly let his hand go.

                            

                                              "So what are you doing out here?" she asked

                                           

                                                         "Tryin not to make a scene"

                      

                                         She rolled her eyes "Well its too late for that" she told him

                                                   

                                                                 He smiled wider

                      

                                       She looked down at her watch. "Im sorry, but I have to go"

                                 

                                                 She started to walk away towards her car.

                                       

                                                        "You owe me!" he called to her

                                  

                                                  She stopped, turned and looked at him.

                                             

                                                           "I owe you?" she asked

                                               

                                                            "Ya, for saving yo life"

                      

                                       She laughed one loud "Ha!" and walked back over to him.

       

              "Oh ya, and what do I owe you?? A personal lap dance??" she asked sarcastically

                                             

                                                       "How bout dinner." he said

                 

                         She was caught off guard, but quickly caught herself, and rolled her eyes

                     

                                      "Im sorry, but I have to get home to my husband and son."

                 

She started walking again. He watched her go and smiled again. He was intrigued. He's never met a woman, let alone a stripper, turn him down before. She was unique alright, and at that moment he knew he had to get to know her.

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NaturalAlluring's picture

I like it too!!

Kasia_LovesTrey's picture

I like this. Gunna go read the rest. :)

lisaleigh30's picture

It's cool

Anmariee_1ofTrey&#039;sFinest's picture

You got me INTRIGUED o_0 o_0 o_0

HIs-LastTime's picture

i like this, i will read up on the rest tomorrow, *tired* but in the meantime, take a look at my forum if you havent already, check out the Trey stories on there

http://mstabbysworld.forumotion.com

Thanks, and keep up the good work

Joie_Neverson's picture

Oh wow I'm just seeing this...Glad to know I inspired you *blushes*

mizcedezbaby's picture

This is good girl. I likes!!!

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

this is good

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Great start!

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