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  • *Snapshot* Chapter 15
    January 30, 2011

    Noel’s hips came to a halt.

     

    “Excuse me?” She asked Trey in a shaken tone.

     

    “I said…Marry Me.” Trey answered with a smirk.

     

    Noel stared into Trey’s eyes searching for some sign that he was joking.

     

    “Trey…you serious?”

     

    “Yes. Serious as Cancer baby.”

     

    Noel blinked, then tried to move from Trey’s tight grip. Trey held her tighter.

     

    “You gon answer me or what?” Trey spoke above a whisper.

     

    “I don’t know…Trey. I mean...marriage?”

     

    “Yes. You think I would ask if I wasn’t sure? C’mon you know me better than that Noel.”

     

    “I just..wasn’t expecting you to ask. Exspecially after what I did…”

     

    “Fuck that Noel. Shit is in the past, it’s been almost 5 months and we’re doing good.”

     

    “I know Trey but…” Noel slid out of Trey’s arms. “ Marriage is a big step..”

     

    Trey’s eyes grew large his nose flaring when he spoke. “So what the fuck are you saying Noel? You saying no to me?!”

     

    “Trey…don’t raise your voice…”

     

    “Just answer the fucking question Noel? Yes or no?”

     

    Silence.

     

    Trey’s eyes traveled to the floor. He rubbed his temples then got out of bed searching for his boxers.

     

    Noel stood and watched Trey get dressed.

     

    “Trey…I’m not saying no…I love you but I don’t…”

     

    “Don’t make no excuses Noel. You scared? Is that what it is? I’m tryna make shit work. I love you I want you in my life. But if you gon just push me away...fine I’m out then.”

     

    Trey started to grab his coat. Noel grabbed his arm in attempt to stop him.

     

    “Trey… no. Hold up…”

     

    “Nah...you made ya choice.”

     

    “I didn’t say no Trey…”

     

    Trey ignored Noel and started for the door.

     

    “Trey…stop it! Please don’t leave…DON’T WALK OUT ON ME!”

     

    Trey stopped, facing Noel who was in tears.

     

    “Fuck you want me to do Noel? Huh?”

     

    “I want…I need you to stay Trey.”

     

    “For what? So you can keep playing mind games with me?”

     

    Noel played with her fingers.

     

    “Noel…fuck why do you keep doing this shit!” Trey screamed before kicking over Noel’s nightstand.

     

     

    “Huh? Why Noel? Why you doing this shit to me?!”

     

    “Trey…”

     

    “I’m trying to be a good man to you. Nah...you don’t appricate that shit do you?”

     

    “Trey I do! I love you…”

     

    “Then why we having this discussion? Why won’t you just say yes? Why I gotta beg you to be my wife?” Trey’s dark eyes pleaded with Noel.

     

    “Because…I feel like I don’t deserve you. I still can’t believe you even gave me a second chance. I feel like I’m in a dream…You’re such a beautiful man..and I just…I just feel like you’re to good for me.”

     

    “Don’t feel like that. I’m here and I want to be with you. Don’t push me away Noel. Cuz I wanna be here.”

     

    “I love you Trey.”

     

    “I love you to…” Trey reached inside of this jacket pocket pulling out a back velvet box.

    “Now you gon put on this ring or not?”

     

    Trey got down on one knee and opened the box revealing a 10 carat dimond ring.

     

    Noel gasped as tears began to fall from her eyes.

     

    “Yes. The answer is yes.”

     

    Trey’s smile grew wide as he slid the ring on Noel’s finger.

     

    “ Good. That’s what I wanna hear baby.”

     

     

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Joie_Neverson's picture
on Jan 30, 2011 - 11:18PM

Noel’s hips came to a halt.

 

“Excuse me?” She asked Trey in a shaken tone.

 

“I said…Marry Me.” Trey answered with a smirk.

 

Noel stared into Trey’s eyes searching for some sign that he was joking.

 

“Trey…you serious?”

 

“Yes. Serious as Cancer baby.”

 

Noel blinked, then tried to move from Trey’s tight grip. Trey held her tighter.

 

“You gon answer me or what?” Trey spoke above a whisper.

 

“I don’t know…Trey. I mean...marriage?”

 

“Yes. You think I would ask if I wasn’t sure? C’mon you know me better than that Noel.”

 

“I just..wasn’t expecting you to ask. Exspecially after what I did…”

 

“Fuck that Noel. Shit is in the past, it’s been almost 5 months and we’re doing good.”

 

“I know Trey but…” Noel slid out of Trey’s arms. “ Marriage is a big step..”

 

Trey’s eyes grew large his nose flaring when he spoke. “So what the fuck are you saying Noel? You saying no to me?!”

 

“Trey…don’t raise your voice…”

 

“Just answer the fucking question Noel? Yes or no?”

 

Silence.

 

Trey’s eyes traveled to the floor. He rubbed his temples then got out of bed searching for his boxers.

 

Noel stood and watched Trey get dressed.

 

“Trey…I’m not saying no…I love you but I don’t…”

 

“Don’t make no excuses Noel. You scared? Is that what it is? I’m tryna make shit work. I love you I want you in my life. But if you gon just push me away...fine I’m out then.”

 

Trey started to grab his coat. Noel grabbed his arm in attempt to stop him.

 

“Trey… no. Hold up…”

 

“Nah...you made ya choice.”

 

“I didn’t say no Trey…”

 

Trey ignored Noel and started for the door.

 

“Trey…stop it! Please don’t leave…DON’T WALK OUT ON ME!”

 

Trey stopped, facing Noel who was in tears.

 

“Fuck you want me to do Noel? Huh?”

 

“I want…I need you to stay Trey.”

 

“For what? So you can keep playing mind games with me?”

 

Noel played with her fingers.

 

“Noel…fuck why do you keep doing this shit!” Trey screamed before kicking over Noel’s nightstand.

 

 

“Huh? Why Noel? Why you doing this shit to me?!”

 

“Trey…”

 

“I’m trying to be a good man to you. Nah...you don’t appricate that shit do you?”

 

“Trey I do! I love you…”

 

“Then why we having this discussion? Why won’t you just say yes? Why I gotta beg you to be my wife?” Trey’s dark eyes pleaded with Noel.

 

“Because…I feel like I don’t deserve you. I still can’t believe you even gave me a second chance. I feel like I’m in a dream…You’re such a beautiful man..and I just…I just feel like you’re to good for me.”

 

“Don’t feel like that. I’m here and I want to be with you. Don’t push me away Noel. Cuz I wanna be here.”

 

“I love you Trey.”

 

“I love you to…” Trey reached inside of this jacket pocket pulling out a back velvet box.

“Now you gon put on this ring or not?”

 

Trey got down on one knee and opened the box revealing a 10 carat dimond ring.

 

Noel gasped as tears began to fall from her eyes.

 

“Yes. The answer is yes.”

 

Trey’s smile grew wide as he slid the ring on Noel’s finger.

 

“ Good. That’s what I wanna hear baby.”

 

 

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mizcedezbaby's picture

Noel betta stop all that foolishness., especially after he gave her a second chance. All men ain't gon do that. She should consider herself blessed, and move on and get freaking married. I mean, heck, you wouldnt have to ask but once.

ECJ's picture

Trey don gon cucu for coco puffs!!! Noel is right she does not deserve him!!

Kasia_LovesTrey's picture

Noel crazy. He would only have to ask me once lol. Trey is a great man

Da Shy Scorpio's picture

lol i'm mad she had 2 c that ring b4 she said yes. smh. mess. i can't wait 2 c what happens next though. this chick is crazy 4 not sayin no when he 1st asked

taylovestremaine.'s picture

Girl this was good... I don't think she really wanted to say yes.it was the ring lol 10 carat shit... comeooooonnn with the next part lol.

Daniel_Shawn's picture

Awwwwww **tears**

Anmariee_1ofTrey'sFinest's picture

Well DAMN CAN I GET 1 OF THOSE .....IM JUS SAYIN......10carat I would hav said WHEN & WHERE I'M THERE

Joie_Neverson's picture

Thanks @TEE... BTW CONGRATS on your follow gurl!!!! *throws glitter and spins*

TEETIMME's picture

Wow, why did I see Trey smiling! Instant smile on my face! :D
Awww I kinda feel for ole girl now, didnt wanna say yes bc she felt she wasnt good enough for him, but he still loves her! Trey really loves her *blank stare* wow!
Alright Britt, come on wit it now, ch 16!

Anmariee_1ofTrey'sFinest's picture

Trey if she don't want ya I DO DAMMIT!!! You don't have to beg me or ask me twice MY ANSWER YYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS #jussayin

LadyBriSongz's picture

I knew she would say yes sooner or later. Wow Trey and that dang temper, he better pay for that nightstand he kicked. LOL Great chapter hun!

Shambrika_1030@yahoo.com's picture

trey ass be going hard lol but he sooo sweet i love it :)

BrokenHaloAngel's picture

I was going to say yes if she didn't... 10 carats? That's a whole lotta love... lol

AmyDarshae's picture

OMG! Yessss that trick better had accepted! 10 carats too...wow. I hope everything works out cause I want him to end up happy! Greatttttt (tony the tiger voice) story once again :) Can't wait for 16! Whoop whooppppp lol

Raven RambunctiousAngel's picture

lOl.... i Love It!!! But did Trey Really Just Flip out?! He Scared Me A lil! Awww I Hope This isn't The End!!

JamRoC_4eVa's picture

OMG! 10 carat now thats a ring...i juss hope it wrk out 4 them... great story line..

LilMzMiyah's picture

O_o
omg!! I hope she doesnt get like cold feet or something and runs out on him!! that would be horrible

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