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  • *Snapshot* Chapter 16
    February 09, 2011

    Noel stared at the large ring on her left hand, then at Trey who was sleeping beside her.

     

    She was estatic that Trey wanted to mary her, but afraid of the responsibility that came with it. She had already hurt Trey once, and she didn’t want to go down that road again. Noel knew that she was far from perfect, no where near the woman she thought Trey would want.

     

    She loved him, but thought she was unworthy of his love. She hated that feeling. ?

    “Why you still up babe?”

     

    Noel heard Trey’s groggy voice behind her.

     

    “Just…thinking.”

     

    “About?” Trey raised an eyebrow.

     

    “Things…about us.”

     

    “What’s the matter?”

     

    “I just…I feel like I don’t belong. I’m happy you gave me a second chance…but I feel like a stigma comes with me now. Like I’m the one that sold your business to a magazine. That’s all I’ll ever be known as.”

     

    “You’re gonna be known as my wife in a few weeks. Come on Noel, we’ve gotten past it.”

     

    “Have we Trey? Can you look me in the face and honestly say you trust me?”

     

    There was a slight pause.

     

    “Noel…yes trusting you again has taken time. But do you think I’d put that ring on your finger for nothing? I love you and I want yo in my life. I’m tired of talking about this. Come to bed.”

     

    “I’m worried Trey!”

     

    “Why Noel?! I thought we we’re good? Why does it always come back to this? Why can’t you just drop the shit?! I did!”

     

    “I don’t know! I just…”

     

    “You know what Noel? If you feel like you don’t belong with me? Fine. Leave.”

     

    “What?”

     

    “You heard me. Get the fuck out if being with me is bothering you. If being forgiven for your mistakes is such a fucking problem.”

     

    “Trey I didn’t mean it like that!”

     

    “Well what do you mean Noel? I’m tired of you making me feel stupid for taking you back! If you don’t think you should be here then leave!”

     

    “I do want to be here.”

     

    “Then act like it and be the fuck happy. No more about what happened back then okay?”

     

    ‘Got it.” Noel couldn’t help but smile, Trey’s temper was a turn on. “I love it when you’re aggressive Trey.”

     

    “Oh yea?”

     

    “Yes.”

     

    “Come to bed please.”

     

    Noel climbed into bed, letting Trey’s arm wrap around her.

     

    “Noel…I love you.”

     

    “I love you too.”

     

    “Show me…”

     

    “How would you like me to do that?”

     

    “Relax. And stop thinking that you don’t belong with me.”

     

    “Okay. By the way Trey….I found the perfect dress today.”

     

    “Good…can’t wait to see you in it.”

     

    “Me either…” Noel whispered before drifing off to sleep.

     

     

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Joie_Neverson's picture
on Feb 9, 2011 - 11:25PM

Noel stared at the large ring on her left hand, then at Trey who was sleeping beside her.

 

She was estatic that Trey wanted to mary her, but afraid of the responsibility that came with it. She had already hurt Trey once, and she didn’t want to go down that road again. Noel knew that she was far from perfect, no where near the woman she thought Trey would want.

 

She loved him, but thought she was unworthy of his love. She hated that feeling. ?

“Why you still up babe?”

 

Noel heard Trey’s groggy voice behind her.

 

“Just…thinking.”

 

“About?” Trey raised an eyebrow.

 

“Things…about us.”

 

“What’s the matter?”

 

“I just…I feel like I don’t belong. I’m happy you gave me a second chance…but I feel like a stigma comes with me now. Like I’m the one that sold your business to a magazine. That’s all I’ll ever be known as.”

 

“You’re gonna be known as my wife in a few weeks. Come on Noel, we’ve gotten past it.”

 

“Have we Trey? Can you look me in the face and honestly say you trust me?”

 

There was a slight pause.

 

“Noel…yes trusting you again has taken time. But do you think I’d put that ring on your finger for nothing? I love you and I want yo in my life. I’m tired of talking about this. Come to bed.”

 

“I’m worried Trey!”

 

“Why Noel?! I thought we we’re good? Why does it always come back to this? Why can’t you just drop the shit?! I did!”

 

“I don’t know! I just…”

 

“You know what Noel? If you feel like you don’t belong with me? Fine. Leave.”

 

“What?”

 

“You heard me. Get the fuck out if being with me is bothering you. If being forgiven for your mistakes is such a fucking problem.”

 

“Trey I didn’t mean it like that!”

 

“Well what do you mean Noel? I’m tired of you making me feel stupid for taking you back! If you don’t think you should be here then leave!”

 

“I do want to be here.”

 

“Then act like it and be the fuck happy. No more about what happened back then okay?”

 

‘Got it.” Noel couldn’t help but smile, Trey’s temper was a turn on. “I love it when you’re aggressive Trey.”

 

“Oh yea?”

 

“Yes.”

 

“Come to bed please.”

 

Noel climbed into bed, letting Trey’s arm wrap around her.

 

“Noel…I love you.”

 

“I love you too.”

 

“Show me…”

 

“How would you like me to do that?”

 

“Relax. And stop thinking that you don’t belong with me.”

 

“Okay. By the way Trey….I found the perfect dress today.”

 

“Good…can’t wait to see you in it.”

 

“Me either…” Noel whispered before drifing off to sleep.

 

 

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Da Shy Scorpio's picture

i'm still not feeling how trey took her back but oh well. that's just me. i'm luvin this story though. i can't wait 2 c if they actually get married. and ummm what??? a few weeks??? really???

mizcedezbaby's picture

Yes!! Thank you Trey. Put her in place. I was getting tired of hearing the same ol bs every darn time. Gosh!!

AmyDarshae's picture

OMG The last one?! Well I'm readyyyy for the next tho :) !!

SexySagLuvSongz's picture

LOL!!! His temper is too funny and a turn on!! Love it....why it gotta end so fast tho??

Daniel_Shawn's picture

i love when Trey get like tht

Joie_Neverson's picture

LOL yall to funny...But the next chapter will be the LAST...but I got another fic coming for ya :) a preview of it will be at the end of the next chap.

AmyDarshae's picture

LOL, @ Tee & Bri! Right that's why I laughed cause I could hear Trey saying it.. & when he tell her to GTFO! Lmao

Shambrika_1030@yahoo.com's picture

i LOVE when trey goes off lol

Kasia_LovesTrey's picture

Noel betts not let this ruin their relationship afta Trey too her back.

JordanMarie's picture

Lol @TEE

TEETIMME's picture

@Amy & Bri u know I was laughing when I read that part bc u know it sounds just like Trigga, bahaha! "show me" made me week in the knees, hehe! Come on Britt, stop doing this to us and bring on the good stuff, hehe!

LadyBriSongz's picture

That temper.......Yum! It's actually comical when he gets mad at Noel sometimes. The stuff he says to her is what's get me. “Then act like it and be the fuck happy." LOL That line gets me too @Amy_Darshae. I can imagine him saying it. Love this story!

AmyDarshae's picture

Loved it! & was I the only one who got weak as hell when he said “Then act like it and be the fuck happy." lmao I died... I guess cause I'm just goofy lol...But great story

Shay - Epiphany Angel's picture

Awwwwwwwww! I finally caught up reading... Took me awhile to backtrack but I love this! GREAT JOB!

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