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    April 19, 2011

    Im BACK!!

     It took a while cuz I usually wait till an idea hits me.. And one did.

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    "Tremain Neverson is down the 40, the 30.. And its a touchdown! Washington Redskins"

     

    "That was an amazing play!"

     

    "Good defense John, real good. It was a smart move to have their rookie courterback run the ball. It could have been interception if he passed to running back Chris Evans"

     

    "And with 10 seconds on the clock the Redskins win!"

     

    Trey watched his rookie year over and over again. He was on top. One of the highest paid rookies football players out there. Car, hotel, and gum endorsements that played every 10 minutes on the tv. The hottest model Marcell Sharee, and soon an Superbowl ring. His couch even told him he wished he played him earlier on in the season and maybe they would have went. But he said next season was his.

     

    But all that changed when he tore his ACL his 3rd season. The doctor told him he'd never be able to play again. Thats when reality hit. Marcell left him, he lost some of his endorsements and lost the one thing he trully loved. To play football.

    He couldnt bare to watch the game where he was taken down by the New Yorks Giants linebacker, Michael Boyle, and was rushed off to the hospital.
    He wished he could go back to high school and relive those days. Where he didnt have the pressure of fame on his shoulders. And where he was madly in love with Rebecca Crenshaw -his first love. But it ended when they went to different school half way across the country from each other. They havent talked in years.
    As for Rebecca...
    She looked in the mirror and sighed.
    "I need a vacation.."

     

    After college she went on and became the owner of her clothing company which is worth 546 billion and will be worth twice as much in the year 2021. But it was hard. It wasnt immediate sucess. She livd about a year homeless trying to get someone to endorse in her company. She just happened to meet Alexander McQueen during fashin week. She showed him some of her designs and gave him some samples. He loved them and helped her the first year. After that it was history and her line called Pleasure.

     

    After she got home from the office she fell flat on her bed and huffed out a big breath of air.

     

    She looked over at her alarm clock. 9:48.

     

    "Perfect for a night out"

     

    She hoped in the shower and put on her cute, minnie, off the shoulder, cut across dress with a lace sleeve that came to her elbow, and red stilettos

     

    It was a nice warm night in New York. She got in the back of her black BMW and smiled at her driver, Ray, threw the mirror.

     

    "Where to little lady?"

     

    "Im feelin Italian tonight"

     

    He smiled "I know right where to go"

     

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    20 minutes later he pulled up to Mangiar Bene.

     

    "I wont be long" she told him

     

    He looked skeptical

     

    "Okay fine" She handed him a 100 "Go nuts"

     

    "I always do"

     

    She laughed before closing the door and walking in the resturant.

     

    "Ah, Miss Crenshaw. Its always a pleasure. Just one tonight"

     

    "Hello Al. Yes, just one"

     

    "Right this way"

     

    He led her to a table. It was almost empty tonight. Then again it was the day before 4th of July.

     

    Al put down a menu infront of her.

     

    "Ill be out with your long island icetea"

     

    She smiled at him "You know me soo well"

     

    He smiled back before walking off

     

    After a few minutes she hears him greet someone else

     

    "Good evening Mr Neverson"

     

    "How you doin Al"

     

    Rebecca quickly turned around to see Tremaine standing there. He looked around and he caught her eye. A wide smile spread across his face. She smiled back wider.

     

    "Ill get myself a seat Al, dont sweat it"

     

    He just smiled and Trey walked towards Rebecca. She stood up to greet him. He took her in. The years have done wonders. And she looked more beautiful then he remembered.

     

    Her hair, light brown over black, long, about a good foot past her shoulders. The small beauty mark on top of her left cheek, so light, you could only see it up close and one under her right eye. Which were a light brown under thick long eyelashes. She had milk chocolate skin. The prettiest yellowbone he ever saw with an hour glass body. Perfect bright smile and the nicest person he ever knew.

     

    "Oh my god Trey!"

     

    He pulled her into a tight bear hug

     

    "What are you doin here?.. Shouldnt you be in Florida right now?"

     

    "I needed a break.. What bout you?"

     

    "Ugh..working like I always am.."

     

    "Ya..you got that clothing buisness.."

     

    "You're the real super star.. Hows the leg?"

     

    "Good.. Im gettin there.. What bout you and your husband.."

     

    "She help up her glass "Newly divorced.."

     

    He raised his eyebrows

     

    "He cheated.. With my bestfriend.."

     

    "Wow.."

     

    "What about you?.. And Marcell?"

     

    "That gold digga been gone. Soon as I was injured she dipped"

     

    "Sorry bout that.."

     

    They stood there for a second. She lookd Trey up and down. He still looked as good as he did when they were dating.

     

    "Stay with me.."

     

    He looked at her, then smiled.

     

    "Dinner.. Obvisouly we're both alone.. And we need to catch up"

     

    "Id love to"

     

    She smiled. He heart even fluttered a little. But who was she kidding. How busy she was? She didnt have time for a relationship now. No matter how much she would love to catch up with Trey and pick up where they left off..

     

     

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LilMzMiyah's picture
on Apr 19, 2011 - 11:59PM

Im BACK!!

 It took a while cuz I usually wait till an idea hits me.. And one did.

*  *  *

 

"Tremain Neverson is down the 40, the 30.. And its a touchdown! Washington Redskins"

 

"That was an amazing play!"

 

"Good defense John, real good. It was a smart move to have their rookie courterback run the ball. It could have been interception if he passed to running back Chris Evans"

 

"And with 10 seconds on the clock the Redskins win!"

 

Trey watched his rookie year over and over again. He was on top. One of the highest paid rookies football players out there. Car, hotel, and gum endorsements that played every 10 minutes on the tv. The hottest model Marcell Sharee, and soon an Superbowl ring. His couch even told him he wished he played him earlier on in the season and maybe they would have went. But he said next season was his.

 

But all that changed when he tore his ACL his 3rd season. The doctor told him he'd never be able to play again. Thats when reality hit. Marcell left him, he lost some of his endorsements and lost the one thing he trully loved. To play football.

He couldnt bare to watch the game where he was taken down by the New Yorks Giants linebacker, Michael Boyle, and was rushed off to the hospital.
He wished he could go back to high school and relive those days. Where he didnt have the pressure of fame on his shoulders. And where he was madly in love with Rebecca Crenshaw -his first love. But it ended when they went to different school half way across the country from each other. They havent talked in years.
As for Rebecca...
She looked in the mirror and sighed.
"I need a vacation.."

 

After college she went on and became the owner of her clothing company which is worth 546 billion and will be worth twice as much in the year 2021. But it was hard. It wasnt immediate sucess. She livd about a year homeless trying to get someone to endorse in her company. She just happened to meet Alexander McQueen during fashin week. She showed him some of her designs and gave him some samples. He loved them and helped her the first year. After that it was history and her line called Pleasure.

 

After she got home from the office she fell flat on her bed and huffed out a big breath of air.

 

She looked over at her alarm clock. 9:48.

 

"Perfect for a night out"

 

She hoped in the shower and put on her cute, minnie, off the shoulder, cut across dress with a lace sleeve that came to her elbow, and red stilettos

 

It was a nice warm night in New York. She got in the back of her black BMW and smiled at her driver, Ray, threw the mirror.

 

"Where to little lady?"

 

"Im feelin Italian tonight"

 

He smiled "I know right where to go"

 

* * *

 

20 minutes later he pulled up to Mangiar Bene.

 

"I wont be long" she told him

 

He looked skeptical

 

"Okay fine" She handed him a 100 "Go nuts"

 

"I always do"

 

She laughed before closing the door and walking in the resturant.

 

"Ah, Miss Crenshaw. Its always a pleasure. Just one tonight"

 

"Hello Al. Yes, just one"

 

"Right this way"

 

He led her to a table. It was almost empty tonight. Then again it was the day before 4th of July.

 

Al put down a menu infront of her.

 

"Ill be out with your long island icetea"

 

She smiled at him "You know me soo well"

 

He smiled back before walking off

 

After a few minutes she hears him greet someone else

 

"Good evening Mr Neverson"

 

"How you doin Al"

 

Rebecca quickly turned around to see Tremaine standing there. He looked around and he caught her eye. A wide smile spread across his face. She smiled back wider.

 

"Ill get myself a seat Al, dont sweat it"

 

He just smiled and Trey walked towards Rebecca. She stood up to greet him. He took her in. The years have done wonders. And she looked more beautiful then he remembered.

 

Her hair, light brown over black, long, about a good foot past her shoulders. The small beauty mark on top of her left cheek, so light, you could only see it up close and one under her right eye. Which were a light brown under thick long eyelashes. She had milk chocolate skin. The prettiest yellowbone he ever saw with an hour glass body. Perfect bright smile and the nicest person he ever knew.

 

"Oh my god Trey!"

 

He pulled her into a tight bear hug

 

"What are you doin here?.. Shouldnt you be in Florida right now?"

 

"I needed a break.. What bout you?"

 

"Ugh..working like I always am.."

 

"Ya..you got that clothing buisness.."

 

"You're the real super star.. Hows the leg?"

 

"Good.. Im gettin there.. What bout you and your husband.."

 

"She help up her glass "Newly divorced.."

 

He raised his eyebrows

 

"He cheated.. With my bestfriend.."

 

"Wow.."

 

"What about you?.. And Marcell?"

 

"That gold digga been gone. Soon as I was injured she dipped"

 

"Sorry bout that.."

 

They stood there for a second. She lookd Trey up and down. He still looked as good as he did when they were dating.

 

"Stay with me.."

 

He looked at her, then smiled.

 

"Dinner.. Obvisouly we're both alone.. And we need to catch up"

 

"Id love to"

 

She smiled. He heart even fluttered a little. But who was she kidding. How busy she was? She didnt have time for a relationship now. No matter how much she would love to catch up with Trey and pick up where they left off..

 

 

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SpiritualAngel's picture

waiting not the next part. what's taking so long lol

Kasia_LovesTrey's picture

..... ?

Kasia_LovesTrey's picture

Yess yur back! Time to kill another one (Trey voice) lol ! Great start. Cnt wait to read more :)

TEETIMME's picture

Why does this sound too much like MY life story! Girl, lets get on to part 2....keep it comin!

jaritah40's picture

awwww

JamRoC_4eVa's picture

This is good,aww damn u know first luv is the best..lol

Treys_Angel_19♥'s picture

Oh she gone find some time for Mr.Neverson

AshlynBalmyAngel's picture

This is good. Hope part 2 comes out soon!!!!!!!

she better make time 4 him then and stop playin! lol. i like it so far though. i can't wait 2 c what happens

LadyBriSongz's picture

Great start! CONTINUE SOON! :)

Shambrika_1030@yahoo.com's picture

awwww im likin dis!!!!

Ty Ranae's picture

Im so happy u got an idea...i Like it so far

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

This is gonna be good I can tell

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