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    June 25, 2011

     

    Does She Know 

     

    “Trey why you gotta act like that?”

    “Look Nikki…I’m not gone do this with you no more…I’m done!”

    “But I said I was sorry. I just don’t like how friendly you are.”

    “You don’t like shit! If I say hello to someone who speaks to me it’s a problem…if I’m playin around it’s a problem…if I’m hangin wit my boys it’s a problem…what da fuck!”

    “I can’t help it if I love you the way I do Trey. You always have girls on ya dick, tryna be in ya face in school, when they know we’re together.”

    “They don’t mean shit to me…you never believe me doe…why you wanna stay if you don’t truss me?”

    “I wanna trust you…it’s just hard. I feel like you’ve been pulling away from me lately. You leave me every summer and I know it’s for your music, but when you come back…it’s always a change.”

    “Look baby…I’m sorry things had to go down like this, but I thinks it’s for the best if we just chill.” Nikki starts crying.

    “No! You can’t just end it like this!”

    “Nikki please don’t do dat…please baby…this is hard enough.”

    “GET OUT TREY!” he stares at her face as the tears continue to run down it making her mascara run. “GET OUT!” pointing to the door…He leaves out of the front door as she wished.

     

    One year later

     

    “Yo shawty can I hollar at chu for a minute?” The young lady turns back around and walks over to Tremaine’s locker. She’s holding her books in her hand staring him in the face.

    “How you doin?” Tremaine is scanning over her shapely body.

    “I’m fine.” 

    “Sweetheart what’s ya name?”

    “Shanell.”

    “I never seen you here before you must be new.”

    “I am. I just transferred here for my senior year. Today is my first day.”

    “It’s also your lucky day. Look I’ma do you a favor and carry these books….taking them out of her hands…for you to ya class.

    “That won’t be necessary…looking to get a name…”

    “Tremaine but you can call me Trey.” 

    “Well Trey…taking the books back…thanks for the offer, but I can carry my books myself. I will however take you up on your offer to walk me to my class. I’m not sure where this room is…” showing him her schedule.

    “Oh you got Mrs. Auburn…you goin my way.” walks her down the hall and up the steps to the classroom. 

    “Thanks for showing me where to go. I guess you better hurry up and get to yours before the bell rings.” 

    “Baby I’m gud…my class is right across the hall…” nodds head in that direction smiling. Shanell smiles back. 

    “Well thanks again Trey.” 

    “You’re welcome baby.” Suddenly Paige walks by Trey and Shanell since they were standing by the classroom doorway. 

    Mumbles “He at it again…agitated…Move fool!” 

    “Aye Paige…what I tell you bout dat…watch ya mouth…you can’t be da man all da time.” Shanell didn’t know what to think and just stood there listening to the two of them.

    “Kiss my bootylicious black ass Trey!” Then she apologizes to Shanell.

    “Sorry you had to hear that…he plucks my nerves.” Then she rolls her eyes at him and walks in the room. Shanell then stared back at Trey.

    “I’ll see you later baby.” Then he hurriedly makes his way across the hall.

     

    Once class was over Trey was looking for Shanell but didn’t catch up to her again until he spotted her when he had lunch. He noticed her sitting with Paige. Paige was on the cheerleading squad and also the captain. Trey decided to go over and break up their little conversation they had going on.

     

    “What happened?” Shanell and Paige both looked at Trey wondering what he was talking about, but his focus was on Shanell.

    “What do you mean what happened?” she curiously asked.

    “I thought I was showing you to ya classes. You don’t need me already?” Paige folded her arms and looked at Trey like he was selling bullshit.

    “Oh…I’m sorry. I only meant that one class.”

    “Don’t pay him any mind Shanell. What do you want Trey?”

    “Not yo ass.” Shanell looks at Trey with her mouth wide open from his response. Then Trey laughs it off and walks behind Paige to hug her. “Nah I’m just playing. How you doin today baby?” Shanell still looked puzzled. Paige sees her face and explains as Trey is still hugging her from behind.

    “He’s plays around like this all the time. We have this love hate thing going on. I pays him no mind.” she stressed. Then he lets her go and puts his focus back on Shanell.

    “You need a hug too baby?” 

    “I’m good.”

    “You sho? I’ve been told I give the best hugs…you should lemme show you and then you can tell me whatchu think.” Shanell smiles.

    “I’ll take your word for it.”

    “Yeah ight. I’ll see y’all later.”

    “Trey wait!” he looks back to see what Paige wants.

    “Is it true that your performing again in the school’s talent show?”

    “How you find dat out?”

    “Is it? Just tell me because if you are I want to be there.” Then Shanell looked at Trey.

    “Perform…as in what?”

    “I guess you’ll have to come to the show and find out baby.” Then he walked off. Shanell couldn’t wait to find out so she asked Paige and she told her that Trey sings. She was surprised. She thought to herself, he has good looks and can sing…I better watch him. 

     

    *******

     

    Nikki saw Trey talking to Paige and Shanell. She was sitting in the lunchroom with her girls and decided to go and see what was going on with Trey. She caught him as he was at the vending machine.

     

    “So you’re not going to speak to me today? You got time to talk to everyone else.”

    “You know it’s not even like dat. I haven’t seen you till now…everythang cool?”

    “Everything’s great….sooo you know the new girl already?” Trey puts a handful of skittles in his mouth…chewing

    “Yeah I know her.”

    “So you tryna talk to her now?” Trey sighs.

    “How long we gone do this Nikki?”

    “Do what…I can’t wanna know who’s about to take my place.”

    “Do yaself a favor baby…leggo…I still love you doe…I’ll talk to you later.” he walks away

    “You can’t say that to me Trey and expect me to give up on us…she yells…I’m gonna get you back!”

    to be continued

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on Jun 25, 2011 - 05:12PM

 

Does She Know 

 

“Trey why you gotta act like that?”

“Look Nikki…I’m not gone do this with you no more…I’m done!”

“But I said I was sorry. I just don’t like how friendly you are.”

“You don’t like shit! If I say hello to someone who speaks to me it’s a problem…if I’m playin around it’s a problem…if I’m hangin wit my boys it’s a problem…what da fuck!”

“I can’t help it if I love you the way I do Trey. You always have girls on ya dick, tryna be in ya face in school, when they know we’re together.”

“They don’t mean shit to me…you never believe me doe…why you wanna stay if you don’t truss me?”

“I wanna trust you…it’s just hard. I feel like you’ve been pulling away from me lately. You leave me every summer and I know it’s for your music, but when you come back…it’s always a change.”

“Look baby…I’m sorry things had to go down like this, but I thinks it’s for the best if we just chill.” Nikki starts crying.

“No! You can’t just end it like this!”

“Nikki please don’t do dat…please baby…this is hard enough.”

“GET OUT TREY!” he stares at her face as the tears continue to run down it making her mascara run. “GET OUT!” pointing to the door…He leaves out of the front door as she wished.

 

One year later

 

“Yo shawty can I hollar at chu for a minute?” The young lady turns back around and walks over to Tremaine’s locker. She’s holding her books in her hand staring him in the face.

“How you doin?” Tremaine is scanning over her shapely body.

“I’m fine.” 

“Sweetheart what’s ya name?”

“Shanell.”

“I never seen you here before you must be new.”

“I am. I just transferred here for my senior year. Today is my first day.”

“It’s also your lucky day. Look I’ma do you a favor and carry these books….taking them out of her hands…for you to ya class.

“That won’t be necessary…looking to get a name…”

“Tremaine but you can call me Trey.” 

“Well Trey…taking the books back…thanks for the offer, but I can carry my books myself. I will however take you up on your offer to walk me to my class. I’m not sure where this room is…” showing him her schedule.

“Oh you got Mrs. Auburn…you goin my way.” walks her down the hall and up the steps to the classroom. 

“Thanks for showing me where to go. I guess you better hurry up and get to yours before the bell rings.” 

“Baby I’m gud…my class is right across the hall…” nodds head in that direction smiling. Shanell smiles back. 

“Well thanks again Trey.” 

“You’re welcome baby.” Suddenly Paige walks by Trey and Shanell since they were standing by the classroom doorway. 

Mumbles “He at it again…agitated…Move fool!” 

“Aye Paige…what I tell you bout dat…watch ya mouth…you can’t be da man all da time.” Shanell didn’t know what to think and just stood there listening to the two of them.

“Kiss my bootylicious black ass Trey!” Then she apologizes to Shanell.

“Sorry you had to hear that…he plucks my nerves.” Then she rolls her eyes at him and walks in the room. Shanell then stared back at Trey.

“I’ll see you later baby.” Then he hurriedly makes his way across the hall.

 

Once class was over Trey was looking for Shanell but didn’t catch up to her again until he spotted her when he had lunch. He noticed her sitting with Paige. Paige was on the cheerleading squad and also the captain. Trey decided to go over and break up their little conversation they had going on.

 

“What happened?” Shanell and Paige both looked at Trey wondering what he was talking about, but his focus was on Shanell.

“What do you mean what happened?” she curiously asked.

“I thought I was showing you to ya classes. You don’t need me already?” Paige folded her arms and looked at Trey like he was selling bullshit.

“Oh…I’m sorry. I only meant that one class.”

“Don’t pay him any mind Shanell. What do you want Trey?”

“Not yo ass.” Shanell looks at Trey with her mouth wide open from his response. Then Trey laughs it off and walks behind Paige to hug her. “Nah I’m just playing. How you doin today baby?” Shanell still looked puzzled. Paige sees her face and explains as Trey is still hugging her from behind.

“He’s plays around like this all the time. We have this love hate thing going on. I pays him no mind.” she stressed. Then he lets her go and puts his focus back on Shanell.

“You need a hug too baby?” 

“I’m good.”

“You sho? I’ve been told I give the best hugs…you should lemme show you and then you can tell me whatchu think.” Shanell smiles.

“I’ll take your word for it.”

“Yeah ight. I’ll see y’all later.”

“Trey wait!” he looks back to see what Paige wants.

“Is it true that your performing again in the school’s talent show?”

“How you find dat out?”

“Is it? Just tell me because if you are I want to be there.” Then Shanell looked at Trey.

“Perform…as in what?”

“I guess you’ll have to come to the show and find out baby.” Then he walked off. Shanell couldn’t wait to find out so she asked Paige and she told her that Trey sings. She was surprised. She thought to herself, he has good looks and can sing…I better watch him. 

 

*******

 

Nikki saw Trey talking to Paige and Shanell. She was sitting in the lunchroom with her girls and decided to go and see what was going on with Trey. She caught him as he was at the vending machine.

 

“So you’re not going to speak to me today? You got time to talk to everyone else.”

“You know it’s not even like dat. I haven’t seen you till now…everythang cool?”

“Everything’s great….sooo you know the new girl already?” Trey puts a handful of skittles in his mouth…chewing

“Yeah I know her.”

“So you tryna talk to her now?” Trey sighs.

“How long we gone do this Nikki?”

“Do what…I can’t wanna know who’s about to take my place.”

“Do yaself a favor baby…leggo…I still love you doe…I’ll talk to you later.” he walks away

“You can’t say that to me Trey and expect me to give up on us…she yells…I’m gonna get you back!”

to be continued

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JamRoC_4eVa's picture

Oh hell Nikki need to get a life & move on.. Trey better know he have a good 1 & don't do nothing stupid..

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Wow! Dat hoe crazy!

OhSoLuhvlee's picture

I was really getting into it. Why'd you stop??? And why didn't you let Shanell at least hit her once?? Just one good time and I would have been fine. I hope she runs into her later and beats her ass.

Ty Ranae's picture

I wanna be Treys bestie who cant stand! Nikki lol

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yes hope me and ty are her friends are something or Trey distance cousins so I can beat this hookah slut ass

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“Ya man liked this bitch though!"

I was about to swing on her when Trey pulled me away but I wasn’t done. He’s steady pulling me walking me out of the spa toward the entrance while I’m still fussing.

“That may have been true once upon a time…stay out of our relationship ya desperate ass bitch! Find ya own man!”

“Whatever! Wit ya chopped up chucky face…get a fuckin face lift bitch!”

Trey had me right by the entrance when she said that. Out of nowhere I found the strength to break away and ran to whip her ass for talking bout my face. Trey chased after me. A few guys that was walking in as we were about to leave saw what was about to happen and blocked me and Nikki so we couldn’t fight. All I could get a hold of was her shirt. Her cousin was trying to get a handle on the situation too because she didn’t want to bring anymore attention to the spa. It’s a good thing this was early in the morning so no one was really in there yet. People were mainly in the fitness center downstairs. Trey grabbed me from behind and picked me up and carried me out of the there. I was beyond livid as we walked back to our cabin. I couldn’t believe he pulled me away from her. She deserved to get her ass whipped. Why wouldn’t he at least give me that pleasure. I just angrily walked.

“Shanell I know you’re upset right now but can you at least hear me out before you jump to any conclusions?” I had nothing to say the whole time. I was saving it all for when we were in our room. Trey opened the door to our cabin and I walked in ahead of him. I came in and paced the floor.

“Are you gonna hear me out before you get upset with me?” I look at him.

“Start talking Trey.”

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“You bout to see a whole nother side to me that you ain‘t gone like. Now I‘m tryna be as considerate as I can because of how you feel…but you honestly don‘t give a fuck about how I feel…so if you kiss me again or pull another stunt like this…you will hate me.”
“I will never hate you Trey.” He walked over to the door and banged on it some more but it was pointless. The spa was closed. His only hope was if someone heard him as they were on there way down to the fitness center.

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Morning arrived and I was suddenly awakened by another nightmare. I noticed Trey wasn’t by my side. I sat up quickly breathing trying to calm myself down. I didn’t know if I should be relieved that Trey wasn’t here to see me like this, or suspicious because I don’t know if he ever came in last night. I decided to check and see if he went to the gym. I know how he likes to work out all the time so maybe he had gotten an early start.

*******

Trey heard the door being opened and it made him wake up. He looked and saw it was Sonya. He sat up on the bench fully waking himself up first before he stood up. Nikki had gotten up too.

“Yo man dat’s fucked up what you and ya cousin did.”
“Trey I’m really sorry…please don’t be mad at me…I just wanted to help her out.”
Trey didn’t have nothing else to say to her after that. He walked up out of there quickly. Nikki came running behind him not wanting him to go just as I was walking in. I couldn’t believe what I was seeeing. Why was he with her? Confusion showed all over my face.
“Baby this isn’t what you think!” He started walking towards me but Nikki grabbed his arm.
“Trey wait!”
“Get off me!” He abrasively shook her off. That was it for me. I’m not one for confrontation but Nikki had broke the last straw. Trey was coming over to me but I walked right by him, over to her and got dead in her face.
“What you wanna do Nikki! Cause I’m tired of you disrespecting my relationship!”
“Get out my face Shanell!”
“Stay outta my mans face bitch!

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“Fucks wrong witchu! Do you really hear yaself! We haven’t been wit each other in years…I’m wit who I belong too!”

“It’s not gonna last…I know you…you’re never satisfied with only one woman and I know you still love me. If you didn’t why would you care if I went with that guy tonight?”

“I thought you were drunk and he was trying to take advantage of you. I just didn’t wanna see anything happen to you.”

“Because you still care!”

“Fuck! Ya ass is crazy! Somethin ain‘t right up there!” Trey was beyond frustrated with her. He wanted to shake some sense into her so she would understand that it’s over, but it was like expecting a brick wall to understand English. He figured he’d take a different approach. He asked her to come and sit on the bench by him.

“Nikki I’m not in love with you baby…I care because I have compassion and I’m not heartless regardless of our situation. But stop mistaking it for love. I’m in love with Shanell whether you want to accept it or not. I have no intentions on leaving Shanell…for anyone. I can’t make it any clearer to you, so please stop tryna make somethin happen that’s not there.” Nikki looked closely at that handsome face and his enticing lips and went in for a kiss. Trey didn’t even see that coming. He pulled away from her and jumped up off the bench. He had to laugh because he couldn’t believe after what he just said to her she still wouldn’t listen.

“Why’d you do dat Nikki?” she walks over to him and stands in front of him really trying to get a gage from his eyes.

“Why do you protest me so much? I hear what your saying but I’m not convinced.” She tried to put her arms around Trey’s neck but he grabbed them and held her still. He looked her directly in the eyes and spoke once again.

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LMAOOOO!!!! @stlgirl4lyfe2010 & @TSAngel_Ty I got y'all though...I got the power to do that...stay tuned...next post coming up!

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put me & STL in the story we got Shanells back!

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

hey put me in this story so I can beat her ass make me shanell cousin or something cause she getting on my nerves. With her fatal attraction tendencies

OhSoLuhvlee's picture

That heifer crazy.

Ty Ranae's picture

hoe's like this irritate me

stlgirl4lyfe2010's picture

See I know Trey don't hit women but he need to put some type of fear in this crazy hoe because she can seem to listen. I dislike chicks like this

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“It’s in the back. You can come back here if you’d like.”
“That room say authorized personnel only…I don’t think I should be goin in there.”
“You‘ll be with authorized personnel…it‘s late anyway…no ones around…it‘ll be quick.”
“Nah you do whatchu gotta do and then come back out here…I gotta go.”
“Just come on…why you scared?”
“What I gotta be scared fo‘.”
“I’ll go too so you won‘t be by yourself.” Suddenly Trey noticed Nikki didn’t seem like she was tipsy, something about her changed.
“Come…come take a look.”

He walked through the door and noticed it looked like a mini locker room with a sauna back there and some showers. As he was looking around he thought Sonya was going in her purse to take out what she wanted him to autograph since she had it in her hand, but instead he heard her say “please forgive me Trey…I love you…” then she left him and Nikki in there and locked the door behind her. Trey ran over to the door to see if he could open it.

“What da fuck you doin!” He was heated.
“Trey look please don’t be mad I wanted to spend some time with you and this was the only way to get you alone.”
“You set this shit up just to get me alone!”
“I just wanna…” banging on the door
“When ya cousin comin back Nikki!”
“I don’t know…she didn’t say…morning maybe.” Trey moved away from her because he was ready to do something that he would’ve regretted.
“Nikki if I’m stuck in this room all night…for your sake…you better hope I’m not.”
“Why don’t you want to be here! What do I gotta do to make you love me again!”
“You think doin shit like this gone work!”
“I didn’t know what else to do Trey! If I had asked you to come with me because I wanted to talk to you, would you had come?”
“Fuck No! Nikki we don’t have anything to talk about anymore…How can I make you understand that!”
“You’ll never get me to understand it! You belong to me! Not Shanell!”

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“Alright. I’ma need my drink first.” She buys him a drink and then gives him his queue.

Suddenly Trey noticed Nikki in there. It looked like she was being harassed by some guy and she looked a little out of it. She walked right by him along with the guy tugging on her and trying to get her to go with him. Her hope was to get Trey to intervene so she could put the rest of her plan in action. It worked. He excused himself from the fans and walked over to Nikki and asked her if that guy was bothering her. Nikki said he was. Trey didn’t even have to say anything to him, dude just put his hands up and backed off. Nikki was glad her plan was working.

“Nikki I think you should go to ya room. You seem like you had enough.”
“I can’t…my cousin has my room key…giggles…can you take me to her?”
“Where she at?”
“In the fitnesss center.”
“Damn! She way over there? Dat’s on the other side of the ship.”
“I know…giggles again.”
“Ight man.” Trey walks with Nikki to the fitness center making sure she didn‘t stumble or end up hurting herself. He just wanted to see that she got to her cabin ok since she seemed to be tipsy. To get to the fitness center you had to go down the steps to the lower level of the spa. Trey started walking toward the steps until he turned around and noticed Nikki just standing there. Then he saw someone come out of this door on the spa level.
“OMG! I can’t believe you actually came!” Trey didn‘t know what she meant by that. As soon as he thought to ask Nikki interrupted.
“Sonya I need my room key.”
“Oh this ya cousin?”
“Yes I’m her cousin and I work here and I’ve always wanted to meet you and I was hoping you would come in here so I could see you and…”
“Whoa…whoa…slow down baby…it’s ok. I thought you said ya cousin was in the fitness center?”
“Well fitness center…spa…same difference…but I‘m right here and so pleased to meet you Trey…oh my god you’re so handsome…can you sign something for me?”
“What is it?”

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(F) “Damn! I done fucked up my shirt…brushes it off…I’ma hafta change diss….what up doe we still doin the casino…anyway where Kev at?”
(T) “Up there talking to some chick.”
(D) “I’m bout to do the same. It‘s too many hotties up in here.”
(F) “Ight I guess I’ma go change my shirt and catch y’all niggas later.” Shortly after, all these fans started coming up to Drake and Trey wanting their autographs and tryna holla. Drake ended up sitting down at a table with the ladies. Trey was still standing in the same spot trying to finish his drink in between autographs and small talk with the fans. Some would get what they wanted and leave and others wanted to stay around for more.

Fan #1 “So Trey won’t you come to my room tonight? We can do what ever you want?”
looks her over admiring her assets “You’ll lemme do what I want?”
Fan #1 she stresses “WHAT EVER YOU WANT!”
“Baby you look and make dat sound very temptin…but I’m chillin.”
Fan #1 “Aww…well how about you come and chill with me in my room. I‘ll promise to be a good girl.”
laughs “Thanks for the offer baby, but I’ma hafta pass on dat.”

Nikki noticed Trey was in the club and without Shanell. She felt like her prayers have been answered. Now she just needed a guy to help her pull off the first part of her plan. She noticed a nice looking guy bumping to the music with a drink in his hand. She figured she’d work her charm and hopefully get him to do what she needed. She walks over to him and whispers in his ear. He looks at her as if to say what she’s asking is crazy.

“Yo why you want me to do this?”
“I’ll buy you a drink. How’s that?”
“I’m sayin who the dude so I’ll know.”
“You don’t need to know all of that. When I say “when” you do it.”
“I mean I’m just sayin you too fine to have to play games like this with somebody.”
“Are you going to do this for me or do I need to get someone else? I mean what I’m asking won’t even take you five minutes and your getting a drink out of the deal.”

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“Nah I like it on the inside….right in the middle..” Then he kisses my cheek. “Babe I told Kev, Fab and Drake I’d meet ‘em at the casino…you mind if I go?”
“No baby go ahead. I’m getting tired anyway. Go enjoy yourself…I’ll see you when you come in.” He walks me to the cabin and then he goes off to the casino. I was tired so I fell asleep.

*******

Trey was on his way to the casino when he saw Kevin standing in front of a club called Catacombs talking to some female. Trey walked over and busted up his mac.

“Yo I thought we was all meeting in the casino…where er’body at?”
“Man can’t you see I’m in the middle of something…” points with his head
“Aw…my bad…how you doin sweetheart…sorry I interrupted my man right here.”
chick “That’s alright…love Neighbors Know My Name by the way.” Kevin responds.
“Oh you like that…psss….we can make that happen…the whole ship can know my name…you know what I’m saying…if that‘s what you wanna do of course?” Trey started laughing at Kevin and so did the chick.
“Thank you baby…alright Kev… I’ma go inside and check this place out…ya’ll decide to go over come get me.”

Catacombs was two levels. They had people upstairs but that only held a bar. The dance floor was downstairs but you could look down from the upstairs to see it and people dancing. Once Trey was down there he ran into Drake and Fab just getting their drinks. He was surprised to see them. They slap hands and then Trey orders a drink.

(T) “I thought we were goin to the casino…y’all niggas up in here.”
(D) “You know we gotta check out the hunnies.”
(T) “Yeah I see.” he glances as chicks walk by
(F) “Trey where ya little hunny?”
(T) “She in the room sleep.”
(D) “I’m bout to go wake her up.”
(T) “Shid…ight nigga…go head…she gone cuss yo ass out too.”
(D) “Nah she always happy to see Drizzy.”
(T) “Drizzy gone get fucked up too!” Fab was too busy laughing not paying attention and he spilled a little bit of his drink.

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“Can you believe her?”
“Baby don’t pay attention to dat shit.”
“How can I not when every time I turn around she’s there. Trey what is it with this girl? Why can’t she accept the fact that it’s over?”
“I don’t know…I don‘t know why she doin this.”
“I don‘t know either…she’s turning into a stalker.”
“Baby Nikki is harmless… and anyway I don’t want dat girl.”
“Trey she’s far from harmless and does she know that you don’t want her? Because for whatever reason she doesn‘t seem to get it. How many times do I have find her around you? How come you’re allowing her to do this?”
“Do what? Win a contest…be on this ship…sing karaoke…I can’t stop her from doin none of those things.”
“You like the attention you’re still getting from her don’t you.”
“Shanell now you startin to sound ridiculous.”
“No I’m not! You need to make it clear to her that it’s over and she needs to stay away from you and accept that!”
“Baby I’ve told her already. She just tryna get to you….come here.” He wraps his arms around me from the back hugging me as we slowly walk.
“Well it’s working! Seriously Tremaine. I don’t know how much more of her I can take.” He turns me around to face him.
“Baby do you trust me?”
“Yes!”
“So why are we wasting our time worrying about Nikki. I don’t care about her baby and what she thinks is gonna happen. I don’t love her…I love and am in love with you.”
“Trey she’s making me crazy! I don’t want her around you!”
“Will you stop worrying about Nikki…come on…we suppose to be enjoyin ourselves this week.” I knew Trey was right but I loved him so much and the thought of losing him tugged at me more and more. I was starting to let my insecurities get the best of me.
“Okay…I will try my best to not worry about that pesky mosquito but if she keeps buzzing around you I’m gonna be out for her blood.”
“I ain’t never heard you talkin like dat! You think you bad now?” I laughed
“I am bad…you just better make sure to always stay on my good side so you don‘t have to see it.”

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OH HELL NO!!! Girl u should'nt go back 2 ur room, i would a turn & kiss trey in frount of her,lol.. I'm jus saying,Girl u need to beat her ass REAL TALK..

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crazy banche see she needs her ass beat

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(MC) “How are you doing this evening.”
(N) “I‘m wonderful.”
(MC) “So you ready to sing for us tonight?”
(N) “Yes I am.” He gives her the mic. “This song goes out to my first love who‘s in the room tonight…you know who you are. I will be singing “You‘re Gonna Love Me” by Jennifer Hudson.”
(MC) “Whoa! Ok…I hope you’re ready to be serenaded Mr. First love…Naughty Nikki said this ones for you…take it away Nikki!” she starts out softly…

Lyrics

And I Am Telling You (crowd goes wild and tells her to sing girl)
I’m Not Going.
You’re The Best Man I’ll Ever Know
There’s No Way I Can Ever Go.
No! No! There’s No way! (walks back and forth on stage)
No! No! No! No! Way!
I’m Living Without You.
I’m Not Living Without You.
I Don’t Wanna Be Freeeee
I’m Staying!
I’m Staying!
And You…And You! (points in Trey’s direction)
YOUR GOINA LOVE MEEEE! (cheers and whistles cry out)
OHHH
YOUR GOINA LOVE MEEEE!

I looked at Trey and he looked at me. He didn’t know what I was expecting him to do. I just shook my head. She got a lot of nerve to be up there dedicating a song to my man. She even had a nerve to sound good. Then she’s gonna be pointing in our direction telling him that he’s gonna love her. I can’t take this. I had enough and Trey was about to hear my rage…once we were alone. I guess he sensed my discomfort. I mean the crowd was eating her up.

Singing We‘re Part Of The Same Place! We‘re Part Of The Same Time!
We Both Have The Same Blood! We Both Have The Same Mind!

“You wanna leave…you know we don’t have to stay.”
“Yeah I think that’s a good idea.” Our timing couldn’t have been any worse. She just showed out even more once she noticed.
sings pointing Please Don’t Go! Away From Me! Stay With Me! Stayyy With Meeee!

We walked straight out to the deck on that level, because I needed some air real quick and definitely wanted to talk.

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I don’t know there ain’t no explanation why I’m sharing love at last this way
I won’t try to go uncover the reason I use these words to simply say….
I love you….

Right when I was bringing my song to an end I saw Nikki. I swear it seems like I can‘t get away from this bitch. I’ve officially promoted her to bitch status since she continues to disrespect me and what I have with Trey. I knew after seeing her we wouldn’t be in here long. The crowd was very receptive to my performance and sang most of the song with me. Did I sound good,..hell no, but it was fun and Trey loved it. I didn’t even have to walk back to our table to hug him. He was right on the side of the stage when I was done. I guess that’s what captured her attention to bring her ass in there. He grabbed me up so tightly and kissed me. Then he puts his arm around me and we walk back to our seats.
“Thank you for making me do this babe, because I needed to get out of the mood I was in and this was actually fun.”
“Yeah you looked like you were havin too much fun up there.”
“I was…It felt good to sing and have the crowd react and sing with you…even if I can’t really sing…I see why you like it so much.”
“You know what else I like and love so much?”
“What?”
“You …Ms. Just Because…the fact that you came out wit me when you didn’t want to and you sang when you didn’t want to…but you did it…just because I asked you too.”
“Well you do things like that for the one you love. You know I meant what I sang up there. I love you for who you are and the man that you have become…”
(MC) “Ok ladies and gentlemen…coming to the stage next is Nikki aka Naughty Nikki…I’m not kidding…seriously…that’s what it says…I didn‘t make that up.” Nikki walks up to the stage. That just brought me and Trey‘s conversation to a complete halt. I couldn’t believe she was going to sing. I feel like she has to be apart of everything I do…down to my man…but that was one taste she better find a way to forget. Her season was over.

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I walked over to the table that held the book of songs and picked a different song and then changed it on the paper where you wrote it down by your name. I was nervous as hell to go up there and sing, but once they started calling names and people went up and did their thing my nerves went away. To see people vocally challenged but having fun with it and the crowd just enjoying it, regardless of your sound and singing along with you, made it less intimidating…it was fun. They finally called my name to come up there. I was grinning from ear to ear smiling at Trey as I walked up on stage. The MC asked me where I was from and what I did for a living. A lot of people that were from Atlanta cheered for their home town when I said that. Then he gave me the mic.
“Before I get started, the song I’m about to sing is Anita Baker’s “Just Because”…it’s dedicated to my baby…Trey stands up proudly showing off…. um the words in this song hold a special significance in our life and I just want him to know publicly that I love him… Just Because.” Everyone started saying aw and clapping as the music began.

Lyrics

Oooo My….My
When I think about how much I’m loving you
No limitation…no set of regimented rules
I’m amazed how much this love has touched my life
And the commitment that we share is a welcomed sacrifice
This must be sweet fatal attraction, my life long date with destiny
Love this strong…it just brings out the passion I never knew was here in me
(chorus)
And I love you (tells the crowd to join in)
Just because
I love you (crowd joins)
Just because,,,.just because I doooo
My darling youuuu
emotions more than words can help me say
I love you…(and I love you)… (and I love you)…baby(singing to Trey)
Just because your youuu…
2nd verse
You’re a diamond in my mind a treasure found
A precious gem to me you’re so nice to have around
I’m so glad I took the path that led to this
It’s amazing loving you I’m doing things I never thought I do

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“Look we not gonna be sittin up in this room not unless it’s some body bangin goin on or we sleepin…Come on…you said you wanted to do Karaoke well that’s about to start at 11:00 pm. Leggo!”
“Ok! Ok! Fine. I’ll go.” Karaoke was held on deck 3 in the On Air studio. It was packed in there. Trey asked me was I still going to sing with him and I told him I would so we signed up to sing.

(MC) “Good evening everyone…how u guys doing tonight?” Everybody in the audience responded with different answers.”
(MC) “How you all enjoying being out on the “Liberty of the Seas.” Cheers, whistles and praises rang out.
(MC) “Ok we’re gonna do things a little differently tonight since we have some real singers on board. As a matter of fact give it up to all the celebrities that made this event possible…audience claps….Now I’m sorry to disappoint y’all but for the real entertainers…tonight’s only for the fans.” people started booing.
(MC) “I know, I know, but you guys are gonna get your turn…because that’s why we’re here. To support a very important epidemic that sweeping our country. I applaud everyone who’s here to support this cause.” Claps in the audience. “Ok so we’re gonna give you guys some time to change your song if you had a professional partner. Maybe some new people want to participate now that you know it ain’t no heavy hitters singing to show you up…crowd laughs…Then again who knows…some of you fans just might can sing, but we’re going to find out shortly and get things started.” claps
“Baby I guess I won’t be singing with you after all.”
“It’s cool. I think I just wanna watch anyway.”
“You not gone get up there and sing to me?” He has a nerve to be asking me looking all sweet and pitiful at the same time. “Pleeezze.”
“You can be such a baby at times you know that.” wraps his arms around my waist
“But I‘m ya baby.”
“And if I always have my way that‘ll never change…muah! Ok you win…I’ll still sing.”

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petty banche she make me wanna beat her ass

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@TreyAngel_Dasha Valresa - thank you sweetie...you have to go back to the beginning of the comments pages starting at sec-a to read the rest of the story. I'm glad you liked it so far.

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Ooooo i loved it ! Lols. Yes, it needs to be continued. Make it a book !!!! :D

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so instead of the Psycho Fan its the Psycho Ex-Girlfriend...smh!

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“Well I just wanted to say hello and hope to see you guys again.” She left the table. I was glad she was gone. Suddenly I just wanted to go to my room. I told Trey I’ll be in the cabin. He knew I was upset. He was getting up to come with me but I told him don’t. I’d be fine. I walked away from him. Trey’s mother stops me and pulls me to the side.
“Shanell.”
“Yes Ms. Tucker.”
“No matter what anybody says to you, you always keep your head up ok.”
“Yes ma’am.”
“I know that may be hard to do at times, but don’t let anyone’s negative energy define who you are sweetie.”
“Thank you Ms. Tucker.” hugs
“You’re welcome baby.”

I continued walking back to my cabin. I really appreciated what his mom said to me. I wish I could just pick my head up and keep it moving like I use to. I just can’t anymore. I just wanted some time to be alone. I got to our room and started unpacking our suitcases. I wish so badly sometimes that I’d never met El. He has done nothing but try to destroy me and for the life of me I don’t know why. What did I do to deserve this turmoil that crosses my path. I picked up a tissue to wipe my eyes. I was sad and really in a bad mood. I shake my head thinking, here I thought this was going to be a great week for me and Trey. Now to know Nikki is on this ship too. God please give me strength because I don’t know how much more I can take. I had changed my clothes once I got the suitcases unpacked and was laying on the bed watching TV. Trey comes in and sit’s beside me.

“You ok?”
“I’m fine.”
“You sho.”
“Yes baby I’m fine.”
“I would’ve came down here sooner but I figured you needed some time to yaself so I left you alone.”
“And you were right, so thank you….gimme kiss?” He leans in forward and gives me his soft lips to kiss.
“Come on…get up.”
“For what?”
“We goin out.”
“No Trey I don’t feel like it.”
“That’s why we’re goin…come on.”
“Trey!”

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