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Replied To: Story - Does She Know ()
On: Jul 18, 2011


“You don’t know…” Then he dragged me into the kitchen. “You gone lie to me again!”
“Nigga you ain‘t shit without that gun in ya hand!”
“You hear dat Shanell…ya little golden boy still talkin his shit. Nigga you gotta lotta heart. I told you to shut da fuck up doe didn‘t I.” He went in the drawer and took out a knife.
Petrified…“El what are you doing?”
“Look man no need to act all hasty…please put dat knife away…everythang cool…don‘t nobody need to get hurt.” He sat the gun on the countertop and put the knife up to my face.
“You really love her nigga…huh…piercing my skin…you don’t love her…he don’t love you like I do Shanell…He‘ll never love you like me baby…” Now I’m begging and pleading for him to remove the knife because he was hurting me. Trey was pleading too for him not to hurt me. I seen the tears in his eyes as he was frantically trying to get out of that seat while trying to convince El to hurt him instead. To El it was a game…he loved seeing Trey in pain and begging him. Trey’s pleading was of no use and there was nothing he could do about it. His hands were literally tied.
“Let’s see if you still want her now nigga…” my cries went unheard.

Replied To: Story - Does She Know ()
On: Jul 18, 2011


“Just tell me what you want El please…I’ll do it…anything…just leave Trey out of this!” Then he touches his face with the gun and taunts him.
“I’m bout to take ya girl in the bedroom and fuck her brains out…let you listen to how her pussy can‘t help but wait for what it‘s been missing.” Trey glared at him with so much animosity. He hated the fact that he was flashing that gun around. He wanted to get loose so bad and fuck El up, beating him down to hell.
“No El don’t!”
“Won’t you talk dat shit without dat gun in ya hand.” He still had the gun pointed at Trey.
“You bout to be six feet under you keep talking ya shit…now if I was you I‘d be a good little golden boy and keep my mouth shut or else sweetness here is gonna pay for it.”
He grabbed me up with his arm around my neck and walked me back to the bedroom.
“El your hurting me!” I was crying the whole time and could barely breathe. His grip was so tight there was nothing I could do to get away. Then my doorbell sounded. I remembered Val was coming.
“Who’s dat?”
“I don’t know.”
“Shanell why you gotta fuckin lie to me…who is it?” he gripped me a little tighter

“I don’t know!” Val saw that my car was in my driveway and she knew I was expecting her. She decided to look through my window to see if anyone was around and she saw Trey was there and tied up. She noticed he wasn’t happy about it so it couldn’t have been nothing freaky going on. Then she wondered where was I and how come I hadn’t come to the door yet. That raised some flags for her so she sat back in her car and called the police. Meanwhile El was getting upset with me and dragged me back in the living room so he could look out the peek hole to see who was at the door. Then he told me to look.
“Who is that Shanell?”
“Won’t you let her answer it and you can personally find out.”
getting frustrated “Nigga…ooo you lucky somebody’s at this door.”
“El she’s someone from work.”
“Why she here?”
“I don’t know?”

Replied To: Story - Does She Know ()
On: Jul 18, 2011


“Not you nigga…but since you asked some of them dollars would be nice.”
“Ok…we can work dat out…no thing…can you put the gun away…we all civil here.”
“Save dat sweet talking shit for the ladies…I don’t give a fuck!” I was so scared. He aimed the gun at Trey and told him to sit in the bar chair that was in front of my island. Trey complied. With his arm tightly around me and gun pointed at Trey he walked into my kitchen practically making me stumble. He was rummaging for something in my drawers and then he asked me if I had some duck tape I told him no.
“Girl don’t make me shoot you…where’s the tape?”
“It’s under the sink.” He looked under the sink and pulled it out.
“Tape his hands up.”
“You heard me…nigga cross ya arms behind the seat.” Trey was heated but he listened since he was pointing the gun at my head. El walked me over by Trey and watched me wrap up his wrist so his arms were pinned to the back of the chair. Then he made me wrap up his feet.
“You better do it good too…I won’t hesitate to shoot…I ain’t afraid of jail.” I was so nervous I was shaking. I felt like I was in a movie or something, like this can’t be real…unfortunately it was. Then he made me face against the wall while he reinforced it.
“El what do you want from me…just tell me…” I said with hostility. Once he was done he yanked me up again.

“I told you, you not getting rid of me…I thought about you everyday when I was in the hole…you was what got me through…now you wanna act like what we had didn’t exist and give my shit to dis nigga…how bout I just hit it right in front of ya little golden boy for old time sake…you never could get enough of this…moving his tongue…could you baby.” Trey could no longer be silent.
“Nigga fuck you!” El cocked the gun back in Trey‘s direction.
“You got heart nigga…you think you invincible…now pointing the gun at Trey’s head…maybe you need ya mouth taped too.”
I yell with countless tears. “El please! Don’t!”
“You crying for this nigga!”

Replied To: Story - Does She Know ()
On: Jul 18, 2011


“We’ll take you over there so we can know where she lives and then you can call us when you ready…don’t be tryna dip out nigga…stay yo ass inside.”
“Oh you won‘t have to worry about that…he ain‘t goin nowhere.”

We all left the hospital and Trey came to my place. I live in a two bedroom, ranch house in Los Angeles. It’s really cute. Not real big in size but it’s enough space for me. I don’t need much. Trey came in and loved the place. His main interest was the bedroom which is where he walked straight too. I was in the kitchen trying to figure out what to fix him to eat. Then my cell phone rang. It was Val calling to let me know I left my notes for Nelly on her desk. She said she had to come this way and wanted to know if I wanted her to drop it off. I didn’t even realize that I had forgotten them. I told her that would be great and thanks. Then Trey calls me to come in the room. He was laying across the bed looking all sexy. I walk over to him.

“Trey…I thought you were hungry?”
looks at my crotch “I am.”
“Stop playing.”
pulling me down on him “Ight…whatchu fixin me?”
“What do you want?”
“I showed you already…you think I’m playin.” I suddenly get up off the bed and pull him up too.
“Let me feed this…smacking his belly…a meal first.”

“If you say so.” I pushed him out of the way and went in the kitchen to start preparing something to eat. Trey was on the couch messing on his phone. Then he gets up to go to the bathroom. Suddenly there’s a knock on my door. I figured it was Val so I opened it. To my surprise it was El. How he found out where I lived I’ll never know. He looked high too or like he was on something. I tried to slam my door back because I didn’t want to let him in, but he stopped me and pushed his way through. Trey heard the commotion and came out of the bathroom. Soon as El seen him he grabbed me and put a gun to my head.
“Yo homey ain’t no need to do dat…What you want?”

Replied To: Story - Does She Know ()
On: Jul 18, 2011
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