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“I’ll be right back.” He walked out of the room. I decided to get comfortable and took my shoes off. Then I looked through the picnic basket on the floor steady smiling. I couldn’t believe he did all of this. I dumped out the jolly ranchers and went in the bathroom to rinse the glasses. Trey walked back in the room with a cooler filled with ice. He put the Patron in it. Then he got comfortable too after he went to the bathroom. Once he came out he took off everything except for his boxers. This was my first time seeing his body this exposed. I was at a loss for words. The feeling of being ready left the room. I was instantly nervous again about taking this step. He noticed me staring at his package and started smiling. Then comes over to me. He looks me in the eyes.
“You alright?”
“I don’t know.” quickly glanced at it again then back up at him
“Er’thang gone be ight baby…he touches my face…we don’t have to do nothing you don’t wanna do.”
“Oh there’s nothing that I don’t wanna do…I’m just nervous about doing it.” Trey starts kissing my cheeks and all over my ear and my neck. My nerves started to fade away. I almost dropped the glasses I had in my hand.
“Ight I’ma stop for now…you bout to buss up our shit…come on over here wit me.” Trey grabbed the Patron and walked over to the couch that was in the room. We sat down close to each other. He poured a shot in my glass and then in his. I excitedly held up my glass to make a toast.
“Ok…I want to make a toast to this sexy ass man that sits before me that I’m falling in love with. He’s the first thing that I think about when I wake up and the last one on my mind before I go to sleep.
He’s also an amazing talent who’s on his way to being a successful artist….nodds head getting emotional…I couldn’t be…taking a deep breath…any happier to have you in my life Trey….tears fallin…I know I’ve never said this to you before, but I just realized in this moment…that I love you…”

Replied To: Story - Does She Know (Forum topic)
On: Jul 02, 2011


Pink and red roses sat in a vase on the dresser along with a radio. There was also a picnic basket that sat on the floor in front of the fire place with pink and red rose pedals scattered in front of it. The basket was decorated so beautifully. It also had pink and red rose pedals at the bottom of it along with my favorite perfume “Daisy” by Marc Jacob, lotion and body wash, favorite candy which is jolly ranchers that filled two wine glasses, and a white teddy bear with a red shirt on that said “I’M YOURS.” I couldn’t do anything but shake my head amazed, wondering when did Trey have the time to do this. I just had to ask.

“Did you really do all of this?”
“Aw babe…it‘s beautiful. No one has ever did anything like this for me…I love it.” I turned to him and gave him another hug and a long kiss. Then instead of me just accepting him doing something special for me I had to continue to question it.

“But how come you did this for me…you’re the one with the big news…I should be doing something special for you.”
“I wanted to do this for you. You already special to me girl. I don’t need you to do anythang but be here, accept it and share this moment wit me.” I was so ready to share this moment with him. This will be the first time that me and Trey will be intimate with one another. I always thought I’d be nervous about it, but I couldn’t have been more wrong. Trey went and turned on some music. It was R. Kelly. Then I noticed him going into the refrigerator and pulled out a bottle of Patron. I thought, it’s about to be go down!

Replied To: Story - Does She Know (Forum topic)
On: Jun 30, 2011


“Where ya ass been at?”
“I was in Disney World with my Auntie…kisses him again…I’m so happy you’re here.”
He grabbed my hand and we walked up to the house. We stop at the porch steps. I hear a lot of commotion coming from the inside.
“I see the gang’s all here.”
“Yeah you know my mumma called er’body. They been showin me love since I got back.”
“God it’s good to finally get to see you Trey.” he looks me over
“Damn baby you lookin good as fuck…whatchu been doin that you not tellin me…”
“Nothing but missing you…and that you already know.”
“I got something planned for us tonight.” bites bottom lip and gives him a curious look
“Tell me?” squeezing his shoulders eager to know
“Nah…it’s a surprise…can you stay out tonight?”
“I can do what I want.”
“Don’t gimme dat shit.” smiling
“What…ok well I can do what I want when I ask…is that better?” Trey got wide eyed.
“You can’t let her know you stayin out wit me doe…I’m talkin bout all night.”
“Ok. I’ll just use Paige as my cover.” Then I poked him in his chest eyeing him excessively. “What are you up too Tremaine? OMG! I was so happy to see you I forgot all about why you haven’t been here! You got a contract didn’t you?” His face said it all but it didn’t matter anyway. I didn’t even give him a chance to respond. I hugged him so tight and kissed him sucking the life out of those lips. I knew it was time to seal the other deal and I was ready.
“Come on in…let’s get some of this food before dem cats eat it all.”


I was able to get my auntie to think I was staying with Paige. I drove back over to Treys house, parked my car around the corner from his house and we left together in his car. Trey opened up the door to the hotel room and I couldn’t believe what I saw. The bed was the first thing to catch my eye. It had red ribbon wrapped around the pillows making them look like gifts on the bed. There also were three solid red pillows that was heart shaped placed in between the other pillows to accent the ribbon.

Replied To: Story - Does She Know (Forum topic)
On: Jun 30, 2011


“Jay and Finch why don’t we all go in house…I’m sure y’all wanna eat.” Treys friends walked inside while Ms. Tucker held the door for them. Trey and Nikki stayed on the porch.
“How you doing Ms. April?” that’s what Nikki calls her…she asked as she was going in.
“I’m good sweetie how you been?”
“I’m fine.”
“Good…you’re welcome to come in and eat some of this food I prepared if you like.”
“Ok…thank you.” After Ms. April went in Nikki walked up in front of Trey and kissed him first.
“Yo! Chudoin?”
“I’ve missed you.”
“Yeah it’s been a lota dat goin on round here lately…chill wit dat doe.”
“Sooo…tell me…”
“Tell you what?”
“Don’t play with me Tremaine. Did you get a contract with Atlantic Records?”
“Yeah…I guess word travel fast around here.” she screams
“Thank you baby…so whatchu been doing since I was gone?”
“You know I go to UCLA…”
“Word…you got accepted?”
“I sure did.”
“Congratulations to you then…dats what’s up!”
“Thank you…I’m just home for a little while…spending time with the family.”
“Go easy on em out there.”
“I’m not concerned with them at all.” Then she tries to grab Trey’s hand but he pulls it away.”
“C‘mon now…you playin.”
“So! You use to like playing.” Suddenly Trey notices Shanell pulling up. He couldn’t take his eyes off of her.
“You might wanna go inside and get some of dat food before it‘s all gone.” pats her on her shoulders but focused on Shanell.…good seeing you doe.” Trey walked off his porch and met Shanell as she got out the car to greet him. She couldn’t get to him fast enough.
“Hey baby!” running to his arms. They embrace and kiss, not letting each other go, locked in position on the sidewalk. Nikki couldn’t deal with it and left.
“Bye Tremaine!” Their moment was broken.
“Take it easy baby.” They were all smiles and just looking at each other.
“Baby when did you get back?”
“I been here a few weeks now.”
“Aw…you must’ve came back when I had left.”

Replied To: Story - Does She Know (Forum topic)
On: Jun 30, 2011


Trey has yet to meet my parents. My Auntie Sharon likes him though. She and my mother are identical twins. I know she can’t wait to run her mouth and talk about him to my mom. I know it’s crazy that I work in Petersburg, VA instead of at home, but I was here when the school year ended and found a job. I just come back and stay with my Auntie for the summer since I like it. She likes the idea of having an in house babysitter. That wasn’t happening today. She wanted me to watch the little tykes while she went out, but I told her I had to go over and see what Ms. Tucker wanted. I haven’t seen or spoke to her since we’ve been back. She could have some news for me about Trey. It’s even been a minute since I’ve spoken to him…I wonder when he’s coming home. Anyway my auntie understood so now I’m on my way over there.


Nikki had heard that Trey was back in town and decided to come over and pay him a visit. She didn’t have the closest relationship with Trey’s mom, but she always made it a point to keep in touch with her and the family. Trey was standing out on the porch with his boys and his mom when Nikki walked up.

Replied To: Story - Does She Know (Forum topic)
On: Jun 29, 2011
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I'm a independent woman & mother who strives 4 the best 4 myself & my fam. I luv 2 write & would luv 2 become a famous author, which is a dream of mine, & soon 2 bcome my reality. I've jus wrote my 1st book. I know it's a process, but at least I'm n the game & I play 2 win. I'm a new fan of Trey Songz. I've always heard his music, but it wasn't until I heard "Hood Love" by MJB featuring him, that piqued my interest about him as an artist. I have all his cd's now & I'm lovin the latest 1 PPP. I"ve said it b4 & I'll say it again Trey u inspire me as a writer. I luv ur work. I can honestly say that ur songs make me feel like ur talkin 2 no1 else but me. That feels so good, esp. when ur single & u've had a long day & u need that “pick me up" or somethin 2 jus remind u that there r sum good men out there. 2 have that ability is special which is truly what u r Tremaine Neverson. I have nothin but luv 4 u as a human being, artist, & a man. U make me smile Trey Songz. Lol:-) God Bless!
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