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“Ya bitch ass don’t deserve to live. Talk shit now mofuker I dare you. I told you, you wasn’t shit without that gun in ya hand didn’t I?” Trey was pressing it further in his mouth. He was gagging. “You spit up on me I’ll really shoot ya ass…you ever come anywhere near my girl you’ll be a dead man walkin…understand bitch ass.” Trey removed the gun so he could respond. He started coughing first but he finally coughed up a yes. Trey pistol whipped him which knocked him out and once he stood up he stomped him in his gunshot wound. The cops came in with their guns aimed and telling everyone to freeze. They told Trey to put the gun down slowly. He laid it right on the island. They started to frisk him. I explained to them that he took the gun away from me and that I had shot El. They continured to ask questions to get to the bottom of everything. Finally they wanted all of us to come down to the police station. An ambulance took El to the hospital and we all went to the station like we were asked. Everyone separately went in for questioning and gave formal statements. The police said if they had any further questions they’d be in touch. Trey was waiting for me as I came out of the room. I looked at him in silence.
“Are you sure you gonna be ok?”
“Yeah.” Then Trey’s cell phone rang.
“What’s up?” It was Ty.
“Where the hell are you guys?”
“It’s a long story…where you at?”
“I’m back at my hotel room. Did you ever find Shanell?”
“Yeah. I’m wit her right now.”
“Oh good. I whipped ya ex ass tonight…gave her a ass whippen to remember. Had dat bitch laid out on the grass.”
“You bullshittin me right?”
“No! I told you I was gonna get her.”
“Damn!” Trey was thinking about the baby but Ty didn’t know she was pregnant.
“What’s wrong now? I thought you’d be thanking me.”
“Nah it’s not dat…was she able to get up and go in her house?”
“Fuck no! I told you I beat her ass. She probably in the hospital.”
“Ight…look lemme call you back.”

Replied To: Story - Does She Know ()
On: Aug 18, 2011


“Don’t move another inch and I said don’t call me that.”
“Sweetness…come on now…you better than this…don‘t do this...”
“I said don’t call me sweetness! Do you know how the sight of you disgust me…still aiming gun…I hate you! And don‘t pretend to think that you know me because you don‘t.”
“You have every right to feel that way…”
“Don’t patronize me! How does it feel to have a gun pointed at you El? It doesn’t feel too good now does it?”
“You right. I deserve this but just gimme…he takes another step closer “POW!!”
“AHHH SHIIITTTT!!!!” I shot him in the leg. He was on the floor holding it. I picked up my cell phone and called the police. I told them that I had a breakin and someone was shot.
I was told the police along with an ambulance would be here any minute. He was just moaning and moving around in pain.
“Thanks for putting your fingerprints on the screw driver that you used to break in my house. Oh yes officer part of it is broken off in the lock on the door. He also has a restraining order against him and shouldn’t even be near me.”
“AHHH…Why you…why you do this…” The next thing I know Trey and Buggzi comes barging through the door that wasn’t fully shut. He see’s El on the floor bleeding and his gun in my hand. His eyes were glued to me.
“Shanell baby gimme the gun?”
“Don’t take this gun away from me Trey. I don‘t want you to touch it.”
“Why? My fingeprints are already on it. Gimme the gun baby.” Trey takes the gun out of my hand.
touches my chin “You ok? He didn’t touch you anywhere did he?”
“No I’m fine.” Then he walks over by El and bends down with the gun pointing it at him.
Trey nigga whatchu doin? He already shot…come on man.” Trey ignored Buggzi’s words. El just laid there in pain afraid.
“Mofucker I should shoot ya ass right now.” He takes the barrel of the gun and puts it on his mouth.
“Open it up!” El was refusing until Trey cocked it.
“Trey man whatchu doin? Gimme the gun man…this nigga ain’t worth it.”
“Baby please give Buggzi the gun.”

Replied To: Story - Does She Know ()
On: Aug 18, 2011



I really had no idea if El was gonna show up here or not but I was prepared for him. It was almost 10:00 pm. I was about to go get some sleep when I get a knock on the door. I look out the peek hole and it was him. I played it cool and talked to him through the door at first to make it look unexpected.
“El what are you doing here?”
“Shanell please just let me talk to you…please.”
“I just want you to leave me alone.”
“I promise you will never have to see me again. It’s just a few things that I really need to say to you. I promise afterwards to leave you alone.” I opened up the door. He noticed I had a screw driver on the floor when he came in and picked it up. I told him he could put it anywhere. Then I told him to stand back over by the door. He was just looking at me.
“What happened to you?”
“The clock is ticking El.”
“God you’re so beautiful. You know that?”
“What do you want to talk about El?”
“Sweetness I’m sorry. I know you don’t want to hear it but I am. Shanell I’ve been doing a lot of soul searching man and thinking about all the things that I put you through. A lot of it was due to drugs and just the way I was living. I did a lot of things that I regret. Sweetness when I did those things to you it wasn’t me. It was the drugs but I swear to you that I never meant to hurt you…I love you mo…“ I cut him off.
“Don’t…I can’t hear you say that to me. How dare you tell me you love me…and don’t call me sweetness…just don’t! You’ve made my life hell. Do you see what you’ve done to me? I have to live with this every single day of my life. I have had nightmares about that day...I still do. So for you to come here and tell me that you’re sorry, you will never be as sorry as I am that I’ve ever met you. Sorry doesn‘t take this scar off my face. Sorry doesn‘t change the hell that I‘ve been through along with Trey. What is sorry is ya ass standing in front of me.”
“Sweetness don’t say that.” He starts moving toward me. I pull out a gun.

Replied To: Story - Does She Know ()
On: Aug 18, 2011


She watched Trey as he grabbed her arm trying to desperately get any information from Nikki if she had it. Ty decided to get out of the car. She walks over to Trey as he was on his way back to his car. Nikki just stayed on her step.
“No luck?”
“No. She said she hasn’t seen her.”
“Didn’t you say she had a house that’s up for rent? You think she would go there?” Trey kissed Ty, he was so happy to have another spot to try that he didn’t think of. He jumped in the truck and assumed Ty was right behind him. She wasn’t. She went to handle some business with Nikki. Nikki was wondering why she was still there.
“Long time no see Nikki.”
“What do you want Ty?”
“If you come down off your step I’ll tell you.” Nikki walks off her porch, fold her arms and stands in front of Ty. Big mistake. Ty cracked her right in her face then upper cut her on the chin. Nikki was stumbling because she didn’t expect to get hit. Ty made her teeth bite her tongue and her mouth instantly started bleeding. She kneed her in the stomach real good knocking the wind out of her. It made her bawl over and fall on the ground and then she gave her a left and a right hand punch in her face again breaking her nose. Once she saw that she figured she punished her enough.
“Fuck wit my best friend again ya stupid bitch!” She gave her one last kick and then Ty jumped in the car and left. Nikki was just laying on the grass squirming around holding her stomach finally able to scream from the pain. It was dark outside so hardly no one was out at the time. As Ty was pulling off she looked in her rear view mirror and did see someone in a panic trying to help her.
sighs “I still should’ve choked dat bitch!”

Replied To: Story - Does She Know ()
On: Aug 17, 2011


“Man she was in her car and we were following her since she wanted to drive…
“Hold up, hold up! You let her drive?”
“I didn’t have a choice.”
“Ight so how she get away from you?”
“We stopped at a hardware store like she wanted and when it was time to go she turned another way on the street and dipped on us. I’m calling you from a pay phone because she took our memory cards out our phones…”
“What the fuck she do that for?”
“Ya guess is as good as mine. We bout to try to find her now. I just wanted to let you know in case you caught up to her before we did.”
“Damn! And you said you callin from a pay phone?”
“Yeah man me and Evan can’t use our phones.”
“Ight try to stay in touch and keep me posted.”
“Will do.”

Trey hung up with Marcus and walked over to Buggzi. He was talking to Ty since they all were suppose to have dinner together, little did Trey know Buggzi had some news for him too.

“Trey man listen…”
“Hold up…we gotta find Shanell.”
“I know. I just got word that El is in town.”
“Dat mofucker here?”
“I’m afraid so.”
“Ight…Shanell just got away from Evan and Marcus…look I don’t know what’s goin on but we need to find her.” Trey immediately left to go to the car. Ty followed behind him and Bugzzi in her rental. Trey went to the condo first to get his gun. Buggzi had already new what he was looking for. Ty was clueless.
“Fuck! It’s gone!”
“Nigga how’s it gone? You sure that’s where you hid it?”
“Well you and Shanell the only two that be up in here.” They both look at each other. Ty still didn’t know what was going on.
“Trey what are you looking for?”
“We definitely gotta find her.”
“Trey do you think El has Shanell?”
“Ty I on’t know what to think. I just know I need to find her and if he’s anywhere near her dat mofucker must don’t value his life too much.” They head out the condo. Trey decided to go by Nikki’s first to see if she might’ve saw her. Ty didn’t know who’s house they were at until she saw Nikki come out of it.

Replied To: Story - Does She Know ()
On: Aug 17, 2011
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I'm a independent woman & mother who strives 4 the best 4 myself & my fam. I luv 2 write & would luv 2 become a famous author, which is a dream of mine, & soon 2 bcome my reality. I've jus wrote my 1st book. I know it's a process, but at least I'm n the game & I play 2 win. I'm a new fan of Trey Songz. I've always heard his music, but it wasn't until I heard "Hood Love" by MJB featuring him, that piqued my interest about him as an artist. I have all his cd's now & I'm lovin the latest 1 PPP. I"ve said it b4 & I'll say it again Trey u inspire me as a writer. I luv ur work. I can honestly say that ur songs make me feel like ur talkin 2 no1 else but me. That feels so good, esp. when ur single & u've had a long day & u need that “pick me up" or somethin 2 jus remind u that there r sum good men out there. 2 have that ability is special which is truly what u r Tremaine Neverson. I have nothin but luv 4 u as a human being, artist, & a man. U make me smile Trey Songz. Lol:-) God Bless!
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